Recent Comments

11/2/20, 2:21 PM
Creative, hot, and frightening concept. Would love to read more.
Anonymous
11/2/20, 1:20 PM
You're a great writer. Loving this story, hope you write more.
Anonymous
11/2/20, 12:06 PM
Please give us more
11/2/20, 11:05 AM
besides the conservative geathering into a pride rally I did last chapter, I would like to suggest some "accident" that may have the actual policeman into the party, then they turn those officers and some other in the station?
Faras fan
11/2/20, 10:33 AM
This story is simply fantastic just the right pinch of so many various necessary ingredients, I love this story and reread it often. Cant wait until the next one comes out so please dont make us wait much longer!
Anonymous
11/2/20, 9:57 AM
this is very very good. i keep coming back to it. there is something about the way you mix fantasy with sex that makes it feel so vivid so believable. and they are always fun and funny. you are a great writer!
11/2/20, 8:48 AM
looking forward to this story continuing
Lusty Stallion
11/2/20, 7:55 AM
Bloody brilliant!
11/2/20, 6:38 AM
Ooh, a fascinating new take on "And Then There Were None!" You do a great job introducing each character. I am excited for the mystery! :D
Whiteypa
11/2/20, 4:26 AM
Loved it! Can't wait for more! The cop angle, the sons, the corruption of innocence. Hope for more cop/uniform humiliation!
11/2/20, 12:58 AM
I second anon, this is one of my favorite haircut stories on here. I'd love to see your take on a longer, more in-depth forced buzzcut/headshave :)
11/1/20, 11:57 PM
Will there be more chapters?
Anonymous
11/1/20, 11:55 PM
Great read! Loved the slow and restrained mind control. Definitely hot!
11/1/20, 11:26 PM
Lusty Stallion, if its a 14 inch cock pirate that turns me from a sexually repressed chubby white guy to what you have in mind, I volunteer! :) loving your stories, keep up the good work!
11/1/20, 10:32 PM
Upon seeing the title I immediately recognized it was a line from one of John Dowland's most famous songs, [**Come Again**](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Come_Again_(Dowland)), so I had to read the story, if only to complete the missing words. These historic British (or Canadian) stories almost form a genre unto themselves. I'm looking forward to see what happens (and maybe that's the completion of the title).
Lusty Stallion
11/1/20, 10:05 PM
Thanks Hawthorne, You're wish will be granted in the next installment which is awaiting publishing. Who knows, he may even knock on your door this week and give you what you're asking for.
11/1/20, 9:30 PM
Wow !!!....I've been waiting & waiting...Love this story so much that I check almost every day for chapter #6 !!! I'm usually not even that much into 'weight gain' stories, but have found the mind altering aspects of this one very erotic....Hope the next chapter is really long !!! [& arrives soon.]
Anonymous
11/1/20, 8:10 PM
Love this story! Always glad to see a new chapter
11/1/20, 7:15 PM
So happy to have more of this story! One of my personal faves!
11/1/20, 7:00 PM
Really love where it's going! Can't wait to see how much Stuart will have changed when Brad comes back! And at the end of the next day! So hot!
11/1/20, 6:52 PM
sounds like a promising story! it hits so many buttons already! good job!
Jonanator
11/1/20, 6:28 PM
Hot story. Hope there is more coming
Anonymous
11/1/20, 3:58 PM
this is really good! i find myself thinking about this story as i see borat trailers. please make another part? please?
11/1/20, 2:44 PM
@Robinhood70 more sheltered, the more delicious to corrupt ;)
oen6834
11/1/20, 2:14 PM
I really love this piece! That transformation is so hot! Will we see a sequel to this, with Bulldog taking over as commander? Great writing mate :D
11/1/20, 1:40 PM
An awesome start to a very well-written historical fiction story! I look forward to future chapters.
11/1/20, 10:47 AM
> I just thought that the mention that the Wizard was missing might be a subtle hint. > I considered having them discover him sitting in the car waiting, still obsessed with Vance, starving and filthy and afraid to leave the car for fear of the aliens (ala CUJO). But as you said... narrative clutter. Besides, Joe is a more experienced driver -- bet he bought his Jag from the Wizard, as well.
11/1/20, 5:45 AM
Great beginning! I look forward to the party and what happens next.
11/1/20, 2:04 AM
Shouldn't Ethan bring his mind altering device home with him & use it on his Mom and Dad. He could completely change their perception of Tommy & himself..Giving them 'new' memories of Tommy as their weak, nonathletic , little 'nerd' of a son, while remembering Ethan as their strong, manly, athletic 'man's-man' of a son. They would then see Tommy as a failure and want to send Ethan to room with him, so their manly boy could 'look after' his inferior brother, who has always been a disappointment to them...All the sports trophy's in Tommys room would of course belong to their athletic, strong & manly son Ethan !..This could also offer a [sexy] bonding experience between Ethan & his Dad, [something he had never experienced, but always had suspected was going-on between Tommy & Dad],,,This would be a good set-up and prelude to Ethan's return to college. Another possibly interesting plot twist would be if Ethan decides to 'zap' himself into seeing Tommy the way he has convinced Tommy to see himself [???]....Than at some later point he could decide to use the device to make him see himself as he wish's he was !!!....I would love it, when he looks at Tommy, he too now sees the weak little nonathletic unhung nerd that Tommy now see's himself as when he looks in the mirror...Ethan would than have no compunction in becoming the Bully that he feels Tommy might have been !!!.........Of course, you as a creative Author can disregard everything I'v written here..[just staying at home with Covid 19 fatigue !!!]