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Anonymous
7/17/26, 1:43 PM
Oh i really hope there's more chapters to come
7/17/26, 10:59 AM
Such a hot idea, love the creativity in the situations inside the building!:star_struck:
7/17/26, 10:54 AM
Nice chapter!!😍
7/17/26, 4:31 AM
I'd written a response to you the day you published, and forgot to hit "send"! Took the time to re-read this chapter, picked up nuance I'd missed... I'd' figured there was about a 50% chance Vogel would narrate this one, the rest split between a new character and/or one of the lost boys, Trey or Marcus or a new voice. The Coda is a chilling bonus, the ending ambivalent, and I wonder if Eli is (or will become) amoral. Until this chapter, I hadn't made any connection to the creature in "The Harvest", and that deepens the story. Yes, I hope you weave these characters into the extended saga. The effect of the monologue is stunning. A villainous version of "Krapp's Last Tape", bad end edition, and it's easy for the mind's eye to see Vogel straining to speak in the bleak room at the end of his road. Easy, and insane, and stark, and oh so cold. There is an undertone - undertow? - of a deep sadness and loss that flows through all four chapters, longing and doom, there's Thomas Wolfe in there - "o lost!" - and Eli unfulfilled, and unable to articulate the need for his happily-ever-after that may never show, and by that time it won't matter anymore. If there's to be redemption for Eli, it will be bleak and spare, but he may at least enjoy sleep less troubled. I just realized you're also the author of "The Last Variable" where you've gotten me thoroughly immersed in the tone and the landscape, and the nature of "takings" - echoed here in "those who take without paying" - is lingering as I meditate on the creation of my own work, an added strand of human nature to my process flow; thank you for that. I *love* the way you write. This is a hard and beautiful story. Thank you for writing it and sharing it with us.
7/17/26, 4:26 AM
Loved this 🔥🔥🔥
7/16/26, 4:59 PM
After all this so far, I still don't see how Clark (Superman) can be susceptible to hypnosis with some use of kryptonite after all it's mot magic. I don't particularly like the use of the girl but I suppose it's for blackmail purposes.

7/17/26, 2:54 AM
@[Art-1](/user/show/1014223) Understandable. It’ll be touched on later but my main idea behind it is that it’s not Superman being corrupted, it’s Clark. This has been such a staple to his identity that it’s almost like a split personality, one where he naturally dampens his own abilities to fit in and that’s the little gap that Whitney’s hypnosis has been able to attach itself to. Later we’ll see the difference in corruption between Clark and Superman so to speak. Think of it as a mini version of Superman III set up where Clark is separated from Superman. Yes, I’m sure it’s not how the actual comics or movies apply themselves to the mentality and physicality of Superman, but none of them also dealt with Superman being turned gay or getting off on the sweat of a bully from his former high school years. If I stuck to him being accurate to how he operates and his biology does in the comics, none of this story (and yes, that includes the sex scenes) would exist. So I implore you to just enjoy yourself and not dig too deep into it. After all, this is a fan fiction story! Also, if you don’t like the girl part, skip the next chapter as it’s going to be majority Clark having straight sex. This is a straight to gay story which means it’s going to start straight and evolve over the course of the story. But you’ll see how even that is moving Clark down a dangerous path. But either way, I hope you enjoy and yes, there will be chapters down the line where Clark finds out how good it feels to be a bottom for his old bully, Hope you enjoy!
7/16/26, 8:46 PM
Analysis: Such a great story. This unit keeps coming back to read it again and again. It hopes that we might see more with this setting in the future, perhaps with a worker losing his mask. EDIT: It just saw your above comment about no sequel planned. That is also fine, as the story is amazing enough as is. A drone can dream.

7/17/26, 2:32 AM
@[DNK-094321](/user/show/10037283) Thank you drone, glad you will continue to enjoy 🥰
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
7/16/26, 4:07 AM
Oh fuck! So damned hot. Spent a day as a Man's cow. Lots of poppers. Several milkings. Would love to be used permanently like that just like the narrator -- blissful, constantly horny, milked regularly..

7/17/26, 2:32 AM
@slavethruhypno@yahoo.com A perfect life right? 😈
7/17/26, 1:13 AM
Excellent work, the story is worthy of a continuation and I would gladly read it) I hope if it happens, there will be more erotica) I'd love to read a more expanded version, where the tsar first meets Kanev and somehow controls him, and he resists until he breaks. I wouldn't mind reading more about Dron Nicholas's reign.
Littledickslave@yahoo.com
7/16/26, 11:35 PM
I once was about 5 inches when soft and 7 inches when hard. My then Master used cages of ever-decreasing size on me for many years. I am now 1-2 inches soft and 3-4 inches hard. He released me because of the pandemic. I have not regained my size. While he is no longer my Master, he has told me he had wanted to reduce me until and inverted cage had left my clit as virtually nothing. I wish we had been able to continue. I would have liked to have little to no dick left.
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