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Anonymous
6/18/24, 3:15 PM
Excited to see more!
6/18/24, 3:07 PM
Wasn’t expecting a 30 Rock reference title
Jun 15, 2024
Pcm
6/16/24, 9:41 AM
I find this story very erotic. Especially with how the son is put under his father's control, but instead of fully denigrating him, he is turned into a masculine "alpha" like his old man... It's too bad that we don't get to see the son's personality shift, how he becomes arrogant and cocky, unrepentantly flaunting his newfound alpha attitude alongside his dad at the gym or such stuff. Wonderful story!

6/16/24, 4:23 PM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) Thank you very much, I tried to mix the commissioner's idea of turning the bullier into an even stronger and more arrogant man with my own (turning the son into an arrogant strong man). And you are right, I think it would have been better if I had exploited more the personality shift of the son.

AAA
6/17/24, 8:45 PM
@[NayarLeng](/user/show/10045868) There's nothing stopping you from picking a point in what you've written here and expanding from there on how the son experiences the changes. ;)

6/17/24, 11:17 PM
@[AAA](/user/show/2613724) I don't know if it would be ethical. I mean, someone paid me to write this story :sweat_smile: He gave me the idea, I just put my brain and fingers to work (and made some adjustments, actually, the fact of turning the son into a jock was my addition), but the idea was his.

6/17/24, 11:18 PM
@[AAA](/user/show/2613724) I don't know if it would be ethical. I mean, someone paid me to write this story :sweat_smile: He gave me the idea, I just put my brain and fingers to work (and made some adjustments, actually, the fact of turning the son into a jock was my addition), but the idea was his.

6/17/24, 11:19 PM
@[AAA](/user/show/2613724) I don't know if it would be ethical. I mean, someone paid me to write this story :sweat_smile: He gave me the idea, I just put my brain and fingers to work (and made some adjustments, actually, the fact of turning the son into a jock was my addition), but the idea was his.

6/17/24, 11:25 PM
@[AAA](/user/show/2613724) I don't know if it would be ethical. I mean, someone paid me to write this story :sweat_smile: He gave me the idea, I just put my brain and fingers to work (and made some adjustments, actually, the fact of turning the son into a jock was my addition), but the idea was his. With this comment and a previous one, I thought of a continuation, but I don't know if it's good to write it.

6/17/24, 11:25 PM
@[AAA](/user/show/2613724) I don't know if it would be ethical. I mean, someone paid me to write this story :sweat_smile: He gave me the idea, I just put my brain and fingers to work (and made some adjustments, actually, the fact of turning the son into a jock was my addition), but the idea was his. With this comment and a previous one, I thought of a continuation, but I don't know if it's good to write it.

Pcm
6/18/24, 8:48 AM
@[NayarLeng](/user/show/10045868) Just my two cent, but I think you can always expand on the latter half (the bullied becomes a jock and joins his bullier with incestuous twist) which is your original idea into a new story if you want?

NayarLeng
6/18/24, 1:49 PM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) Either way I asked him, so crossed fingers :crossed_fingers:
Anonymous
6/18/24, 1:16 AM
Maybe we're operating on the same wavelength, S.Q, because I was literally _just_ thinking about Casey and the next chapter to this story as I logged on, only to see it greet me on the front page! Love the trope of the hatefuck, Wang hating Casey yet still worshiping that ass of his without hesitation. Very well done! Keep up the good work!

6/18/24, 1:18 AM
@Anonymous Lol, sorry. That was me, I don't know why it posted it as Anonymous. Will be eagerly reading nonetheless!

6/18/24, 1:48 PM
@[Franco Apollo](/user/show/10029736) Glad you’re enjoying it—to the tune of identifying yourself! ;) I am flattered.
6/17/24, 8:41 PM
My god man. I love this format so much.

6/17/24, 9:47 PM
@[mattersonline](/user/show/13605) Lol…got the message loud and clear. ;)

6/18/24, 12:44 PM
@[S. Q. Neemie](/user/show/767920) lol, the site kept telling me that the comment post failed
6/18/24, 12:32 PM
oH MY GOOOOOOSH! This story was so erotic and exciting. THANK YOU for your excellent writing. I particularly love Theo and his new-found friendship with Felix. This story and the domination of Brian totally worked for me! THANK YOU
6/17/24, 2:41 PM
I kind of hope we get to see Mr. Johnson top. Maybe a little roid rage when he sees Ahmed fuck his son. Resulting him in fucking his son through Ahmed. Maybe Sam has join in to get Brian to pull out of Ahmed. Regardless this has been hot AF. Each chapter gets me sticky. Thanks.

6/17/24, 2:49 PM
@[TexMuscle](/user/show/10002223) Glad you're loving it. I definitely don't want Mr Johnson to be limited in his life. I've definitely got some ideas for the future...

6/17/24, 7:37 PM
@[Todd Mitchell](/user/show/10039362) I was hoping the cock, I mean pendulum would swing the other way. Will Brian make it through the entire group before his roid rage subsides? Will the boys crave his muscle daddy cock over his ass? I was expecting Brian to show Leo the proper technique when fucking a college co-ed by sandwich fucking him.

6/18/24, 12:25 PM
@[TexMuscle](/user/show/10002223) Oh, I couldn't possibly comment, but yeah I don't want it all one way. Definitely got more things planned
6/16/24, 12:40 PM
This story... it is just FANTASTIC! The trio sex at the end of this chapter is just so good. SO GOOD! I love the FUN of the writing and the excitement I feel for Mr Johnson and his new exciting life. THANK YOU for this wonderful story and this fun-filled writing. back to the keyboard!

6/16/24, 1:25 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Oh thank god you liked the last scene, I was banging that one out, while high on poppers and Johnny Castle hetero-porn [not exactly but the life of an erotic writer should surely be allowed some embellishments]. I'm glad you're loving the "fun" too. I'm a great proponent that sex is awesome and no one needs to be drugged, tricked or blackmailed into having it!

I wasnt familiar with Johnny Castle porn... and WOW! He is just writer's material. He is gentle and sensual and his body is beautiful. Write more for me!
6/18/24, 11:50 AM
@[Todd Mitchell](/user/show/10039362)

6/18/24, 12:22 PM
For a straight porn star... yes definitely hot. The Pure Mature videos are so cool
Anonymous
6/18/24, 6:45 AM
What happened to Swizz and his stories?

6/18/24, 7:12 AM
@Anonymous https://forum.gaykinkystories.com/t/what-happened-to-swizzington/6909
6/18/24, 6:53 AM
So hot! The Tagged, Bagged series is your best work to me. So hot reading about the top slowly getting reprogrammed while you grind his defenses down one at a time. Until they are poppered up little sluts on all fours in a jock strap. turned into permanent good boy bottoms. 🤤😈 Hope you wrote more of these!