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2/19/21, 8:27 PM
I don't remember if the brothers have been mentioned as having family. I do think I talked about Leo having an aunt, but I'm not sure. I'm actually even more surprised you hadn't seen this insecure side to Leo given that during the whole path I tried to be as explicit about it as possible. He already said "please" and "if you want" in path 2.2.2.2. Maybe you just haven't read them in a while, sound plausible. Yeah, Leo is an adorable romantic in my opinion. He really should trust his seduction abilities more! =] Well, I'm not going back on his path for a while. One more chapter soon and then I will try to work on personals stories. So his meeting with Sam will have to wait. =(
Anonymous
2/19/21, 6:30 PM
excellent
Feb 19, 2021
2/19/21, 5:24 PM
This would make a great gay Twilight Zone episode.
2/19/21, 4:29 PM
This is one hot story. Defintely want more Mormon scenarios on here. Really well written too. Please write more!!!
2/19/21, 3:13 PM
wow!!! all family for one guy... I believe some of Leo's brothers have families already, right? how they will react to this 🤔... also, never expected this unsecure side from Leo... was kind of cute when, even having the power, he said "porfavor" after doing a change on Horus :3 I can't wait to see how he manages Sam and his reaction...
Logan
2/19/21, 2:23 PM
This is one of those stories that has everything I need. Embarrassing ass growth? ✅ Noncon (in the context of a sexual fantasy)? ✅ A cute guy getting stuck with tits that make him horny and humiliated? ✅ Thanks for such a great story!
2/19/21, 11:28 AM
the neighbors will be cool, and a nice warm-up for stronger spells
2/19/21, 11:26 AM
well I think the neighbors would make sense to turn, idk how I'll wrap the news station in...but it will be a fun project to figure out 😄
2/19/21, 10:22 AM
Question: did you like the conservative party into gay rally or the conserative news channel into pro-gay channel?
Anonymous
2/19/21, 8:42 AM
This was awesome! I can't wait for the next one
2/19/21, 8:27 AM
This was cute - it's been ages since I thought about Final Fantasy IX, but I could absolutely see Zidane and Blank getting together. This was delightful, and I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this!
2/19/21, 7:21 AM
A little short and hurried but cute nevertheless.
Anonymous
2/19/21, 4:50 AM
oh i really liked this!! great mechanics, definitely sexy, transformations very up my alley, and some solid karma without it being grotesque or horrifying. my only problem was that it wasnt longer! very excited for chapter 3 :)
2/19/21, 4:18 AM
what a great story, love the photoshoot part
2/19/21, 3:55 AM
Give us a new chapter, pleaseee :')
Feb 14, 2021
2/19/21, 1:18 AM
The master linking his slaves' minds together is a very hot idea.
2/19/21, 1:16 AM
Bravo! Great story. It has been a while since I came across a blockbuster story and this is one of them. And a Master/slave story is always hot, but you added a good amount of spice telling it in a revealing fashion to a slave who's realizing he's already a slave. With resistance to boot! How can a blockbuster story not have resistance?
2/19/21, 12:05 AM
or, maybe KJ6542 will pledge to be a postal drone? who knows? i for one, am rooting for KJ6542 to get the security drone spot!
2/18/21, 11:37 PM
https://images.app.goo.gl/gf2VHEZcN4mv7PMDA a picture of both blank and Zidane for those unaware
2/18/21, 11:21 PM
Ooooh this is good so far! I'm definitely interested in where this goes. Though you should link both characters wiki pages or images since I had to manually look up how they looked being unfamiliar with the game
2/18/21, 7:40 PM
Nailed it! Those of us that have taken figure drawing courses can really relate! I have taken small artistic liberties with my sketches at times but having magic charcoal would be such a transformation fantasy trip! Well done!
Dec 29, 2020
2/18/21, 7:21 PM
WOOF! love this. Please keep going. This has to have some more! Notwithstanding the whole pup vibe, the beta boy dominating the Alpha is hot!
2/18/21, 6:04 PM
I'm glade you liked, also, go for it, I like were the story is going
2/18/21, 5:57 PM
Thank you guys for the encouraging feed back. Darkblade, Thanks for some suggestions and will see about fitting them in perhaps as part 3 and 4. Though I do have a concept for the second story, as it was my original plan for this one, a group of (over done trope) mormon boys. I am planning on merging the concept from my "Brimstone Manor" story (so that story will deleted and become part of this series) where the Incubus creates a kind of "harem".
Anonymous
2/18/21, 5:53 PM
I ran out of vodka!!!
Anonymous
2/18/21, 5:51 PM
If it were Master explaining what he was doing, it would be blegh. But, since it's coming from another slave, it's so hot that I'm still hard!
2/18/21, 5:46 PM
Really interesting concept! Loved it and can't wait to read more!
Anonymous
2/18/21, 5:09 PM
I'm loving this cant wait to see the family grow
2/18/21, 4:53 PM
I messed up with the times, the therapy is in 20 minutes, so I can tell you now: one more pleasent and one malicious, the pleasent one is: Abe decides to help on dealing to make two obnoxious neighbors (both roomates) into a sweet gay couple, a bit on the campy side, but otherwise harmless, as for the more malicious one: the Inucubus decides to turn either a conservative party meeting or news channel into a gay rally or LGBT channel (as in all employees gay/lesbian and all programs and shows have pro-LGBT them, with porn on it) if you want the news may have a sister channel, one with pro-Gay and the other with pro-Lesbian content, with subtly influencing the people watching it, making the already gay/lesbian more open about it and the straight either more accepting or more open to experimantation