Recent Comments

11/1/23, 10:56 AM
This is such a great idea, and so well executed! Even though it's telegraphed what's going to happen pretty much from the start, it's still such a great journey to see what happens. And I'll be honest -- writing erotica about someone reading a generic book is _difficult_, but you made it seem easy. This is fantastic -- not to mention hot!
11/1/23, 10:39 AM
I fantasize about this position a lot. Thereโ€™s not enough porn of it out there. Hot story.
11/1/23, 8:34 AM
FUCK THAT WAS HOT!!! I HOPE NICK AND JIMMY GET FUCKED TOO.
11/1/23, 6:47 AM
I'd love to see this continued! What sexy daddy cops.
R
11/1/23, 6:30 AM
Please come back and continue ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ™
11/1/23, 5:27 AM
More please
11/1/23, 5:08 AM
Please continue this. It would be so hot if Hector fucked him
11/1/23, 5:04 AM
Please continue this!!!
11/1/23, 4:32 AM
Hey, I wanted to check, were you hoping to enter this story into the Halloween contest? If so, I think you just barely missed the cut-off time, so I can enter it into the contest for you if you'd like. But no pressure either way! Just let me know your preferences. ๐Ÿ˜Š

11/1/23, 5:02 AM
@[Philip K](/user/show/10022196) Oh, yes please! That would be awesome ๐Ÿ˜Ž
10/30/23, 1:54 AM
Once again an amazing chapter and series! You're truly one of the best writers in this fetish genre and so glad to see you back! It's also great to see how your work has inspired so many others (including myself) to write their own stories! Can't wait to see what you write next!

11/1/23, 5:00 AM
@[Supersubboi](/user/show/1996459) The plan right now is to mostly work on Web of Trust, plus I have a couple of other one-off stories (or possibly series if they get too long) that explore a few things outside my traditional style, including a couple of consensual stories and one that actually has no twinks at all ! There are a couple of semi-abandoned things I may also wrap upโ€”I noticed that a lot of my stories revolved around variants of the Tist-dad-son(s) setup and I didn't want to put out too many of the same style all at once, so I put them on the back-burner for a while. Not sure which of those I'll resurrect when.
11/1/23, 4:13 AM
The only problem with this story is that it ends... Very fast. I'm bloodthirsty for part 2.
11/1/23, 1:55 AM
Always love a great role-reversal! Even moreso, I love the slow trickle of acceptance and eventual pride that good lil' sluts begin to take on. Good work!
11/1/23, 12:17 AM
Thanks! I know this is a weird piece for GSS, so I'm glad people are reading it. It's also very self-indulgent, but I can promise the end will be more interesting than a love triangle with an OTP.
10/31/23, 3:32 PM
Why does this have the straight to gay tag? Billy might have been forced to comply with Lawrence's commands, and go through the motions of a gay sex act, but as far as I can tell there's not a single moment where he has any sort of gay thoughts or desires. There's no actual arousal for or lust towards men or cock, or even that specific man and his cock. He sucks the guy off with a face that's "a study in disgust" and afterwards it "left him nauseated." So yeah, suggesting the tag removed.

Throne
10/31/23, 6:59 PM
@[goodbiforever](/user/show/1090266) At the end of the story, Billy was thinking about what he could wear to please Lawrence, so a change had begun, conflicted though he was about it. If you can suggest a better tag, I'll be happy to consider the change. I tried a few, like 'forced bi', but they don't seem to be on the tag list. Thanks.

Martin
10/31/23, 8:02 PM
@Throne There is "gay to bi". And you could always create a new tag, only keep in mind that tags only work if they're generic enough that more than one story could use it and that people would actually look for stories tagged with it.

Throne
10/31/23, 8:18 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Thank you, Martin. Because the character started out straight, I belatedly found and used 'straight to bi'. Also deleted 'straight to gay', as per the previous reviewer's suggestion. Your assistance was much appreciated.
Anonymous
10/31/23, 7:21 PM
Always love a good werewolf or furry story. This was a good read. I hope there is more to come
10/31/23, 7:12 PM
BRAVO Jack!! Thoroughly enjoyed Daniel's slow/steady breakdown into his private, internal struggle/release into bitchdom... Can't wait 2 see what cums NEXT!:stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:
10/31/23, 6:58 PM
Wonderfully creative, three dimensional characters, and always a touch of wholesome. You're an excellent writer and I love your work. Kudos!
TW
10/31/23, 1:04 AM
Iโ€™m glad I had a chance to read this before the the great spamdemic happened. Sad to see poor Freedom devolved into just a little pet, but that makes me all the more excited to see that focus from Tri-Hard be recalibrated - oh so curious how the victim(s) will deal with it. ;)

10/31/23, 3:46 PM
@TW Down with our spam-bot overlords!:robot: Ahh, Freedom always _was_ just a dumb pup! He was simply dressed up like a 'man'! At least now he can be happy being 'himself',... And, yes, we'll have to see how the rest of the **Hard Boys** take to their new pet brother! Thank you!

TW
10/31/23, 5:59 PM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) Oh HAH! I was mainly feigning concern for the poor sidekick Duty and his lover, Nick. With Freedom, presumably, out of sight and out of mind - Tri-Hard'll be able to focus his energy on the heroic duo. Admittedly, I just have a major soft spot for the misled and overridden love that Tri-Hard has implemented :hand_over_mouth:. But, I do look forward to the rubbery debauchery the pup will have with his Handler and fellow brothers. It's definitely more interesting that they have their individual quirks and exist as more than a name, even if it shows that the control over them isn't completely unwavering. :wink:

10/31/23, 6:29 PM
@TW Ah, I see! Don't worry, they'll be overjoyed to see what **Tri-Hard** has done to **FreeDog**! Maybe they'll volunteer to join him! Either way, thank you again! I really like to hear what's going through people's heads as they read!
10/31/23, 6:09 PM
Fucking Hot Story. Really love u getting into the mind of the slave.
10/31/23, 6:30 AM
So awesome! Amazing!

10/31/23, 5:30 PM
@[Catcat](/user/show/620382) Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it!
10/31/23, 2:41 AM
You know, I usually am hardcore against the meta stuff, and I avoid it -- but I also know I've loved your stories in the past, so I gave this a chance, and boy am I glad I did! This was so fantastic. I don't really have enough superlatives for it! It was hot, but it was also so funny, and there are lines I want to quote because they were so damn good. Thank you so much for this!

10/31/23, 5:29 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Wow, thank you! That's high praise, haha. ๐Ÿ˜„ I'm flattered that I was able to persuade you over to the (meta) dark side... even if for just one story!
10/31/23, 5:21 PM
Hopefully I will be able to edit it some point today or tomorrow at the earliest

10/31/23, 5:25 PM
@[gaygeek](/user/show/352013) Sounds good! ๐Ÿ˜Š Thank you!
10/31/23, 5:17 PM
Reading the comments, I support some father and son action
10/31/23, 5:13 PM
Hey, just a heads up that I approved this story for site publication so that it doesn't miss the contest deadline, but it looks like the paragraph formatting got dropped from the second half of the story. Would you feel up to submitting an edit to the story that fixes the paragraph breaks? I just wanted to let you know that it's an option available to you.
10/31/23, 3:54 PM
This is so god damn hot! I have already cum twice to this! Itโ€™s fantastic!!! Thanks for making it! I just loved how all the pleasure was being fed to the Dom as the game progressed! And how fun to have a throuple marriage!
Anonymous
10/31/23, 7:55 AM
This was incredibly hot, from a superhero to a rubber pup. I love all the rubber mentions, makes it even hotter. I wonder what is next for Duty Boy and Nick. Also, if Lee will make a comeback brainwashed as well and trick his brother perhaps?

10/31/23, 3:52 PM
@Anonymous Really glad you liked it! Thanks! As for what's coming next,... aside from Henry and Nick getting some much needed answers, we're going to get a new perspective on things!
10/31/23, 5:44 AM
So fucking HOT!!!!

10/31/23, 3:48 PM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) Thank you! I hear you loud and clear :wink:
Oct 31, 2023
Azuri Foxcoon
10/31/23, 3:23 PM
Cute story. Love the swimming metaphors!
10/31/23, 3:20 PM
What a hot story! Loved the pics throughout the story.
10/31/23, 3:05 PM
This story is hot as fuck