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9/16/20, 9:29 AM
You've awakened a side of me i never knew i had. The slow downward spiral the professor goes through when Cole basically is altering his world in which he has been assured his place in! Then this jock comes along and suddenly his word is law. Everything he says becomes truth. The feeling of helplessness, and humiliation that Taron is feeling... I don't know how to describe it, but seeing him sink down and be reduced to a position of f@g, it sent me over the edge with the horny energy. I think this is one of the stories where i could finally admit to myself i wanted to experience what he was going through, with the eventual result of being reduced to a f@g. I WANT to be used and degraded, chastity and all.
Sep 16, 2020
Anonymous
9/16/20, 8:49 AM
great story
9/16/20, 6:23 AM
oh yes, please more!
Chase
9/16/20, 4:49 AM
Amazing. Absolutely love where this is going. I truly hope you continue this and so do other people here, as you can see :)
9/16/20, 4:22 AM
I agree with the other fellow, I kept thinking of The Boys as I read through. I suppose it's the street level aftermath of living amongst people with godlike powers that is the similarity. I thought it was fantastic. I'd love to see more of this little universe fleshed out, or more vignettes!
9/16/20, 3:33 AM
@sb jb mc YESSSSSSS! We wanna see the entire dorm fall!!!!
mcdermottr13@gmail.com
9/16/20, 3:30 AM
Love this story could not stop reading it. Even at work just sucked me into the story. What a fantastic job.
fex
9/16/20, 3:10 AM
More Darren getting his hole teased please!
9/16/20, 3:06 AM
Again an excellent chapter, pulling those emotional strings in the right ways. As a sci-fi fan I'm enjoying that element so far. And as I've noticed on your previous chapters your writing is impeccable. Can't wait to read more.
9/16/20, 12:54 AM
the current event parallels made this even more fun to write. Well done.
Sep 15, 2020
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
9/16/20, 12:31 AM
Far more entertaining than another slice & dice series
Jan 15, 2019
9/16/20, 12:06 AM
damn, next chapter please. wow
9/15/20, 11:40 PM
A good pup story. Yaaay!! I wish we knew more about the mask, or at least what it looked like. Due to lack of details, my mind went to a plastic Halloween type smiley face mask. But it could have been rubber and wolfy. I wish we knew. And the mask was the integral part of the story. I really wish we knew more about it....or will we? I'll have to read on and find out. Thanks for a hot story. As Absman said, it kept me hard throughout the transformation. Woof!
Jonanator
9/15/20, 10:45 PM
this is an awesome story, can't wait for the next chapter.
Sep 15, 2020
Jonanator
9/15/20, 10:31 PM
nice story, you should do another chapter.
Aug 7, 2018
9/15/20, 10:02 PM
It's a great idea but I'd have loved it to be longer - it's over almost before it began! Either a slower transformation, or having Sean notice more of the changes, or actually transforming some of his frat bros would all have made this story better but it is a good start!
9/15/20, 10:00 PM
@Transformheaven - Thanks for reading!
9/15/20, 9:35 PM
A first-rate story! :D Super clever, well-written, and oh-so-hot. :)
rutu56
9/15/20, 8:47 PM
Well-written, very original, and absolutely hilarious!
9/15/20, 7:38 PM
That looks really promising! Already love it so far!
9/15/20, 6:54 PM
Thanks @NANOwriter! I've spent many years reading other people's stories. About five years ago, I decided to give writing a try. I now have 24 novels that I've never shared with anyone. This past year, I came up with the Killing Cupid series and this is the first book. I know my writing is different from most and I'm a little freaked out to have others reading one of my stories. Thanks for words of encouragement and I promise the story will pick up soon. There's spaceships, pigs, and gorilla sex coming. Much love and stay safe.
Anonymous
9/15/20, 5:13 PM
great work
9/15/20, 5:12 PM
I really enjoyed this, too. Yes love the protective cup be the equivalent of a mask. And to have the guys that will not wear the cup. I thought it mite be a seal on. Will fall off in 2 weeks. So manny parts i love. thank you. rob
9/15/20, 5:06 PM
Great start cant wait to read more.
9/15/20, 3:59 PM
Looking forward to the next part of this one. I hope it doesn't take too long, but don't rush it :)
9/15/20, 3:45 PM
Excellent Alpha take-down story!
9/15/20, 3:20 PM
Great start! Looking forward to more...
9/15/20, 3:09 PM
Need more!!!!
9/15/20, 2:55 PM
Awww....such sweet scenes in this chapter! Liked the surprise ending. Looking forward to the next chapter.
9/15/20, 2:53 PM
Damn, Oscar and Tay had me teary, you really know which emotions to grab, and poor Chris, I'm really hoping it works out for him. Can I just say, I've been reading on sites like this for over 15 years now, and this kind of story, at least for me only comes round once a decade, please don't stop. You're writing is excellent, to the point and heartfelt, and your focus on the emotional attachment is perfect, a story such as this shouldn't just focus on the sexual relationships, which I'm really happy to see. I'm a big fan of this tale and really look forward to the next chapter.