@Heru Kane. I really like to read your opinions, so thanks a lot for your comment. I agree, slutty Bob it's the best Bob ;) About Brad. I'm glad you liked their interaction. I wanted to add another character to spice the story a little bit but I don't know yet how further I'm gonna go with him and Michael’s other bros, but it's nice to have the option on the table if later I want to play with more bros aside from Michael. About the picture. I had my doubts about putting it into the story because I'm aware that most readers already have a mental image of the characters so if my vision doesn't match with yours (the readers) or doesn't match your likings could be a turn off. But part of Michael story arc it's about social media and showing himself to other men (fags, he would say) so I think it's a nice add that we could see his changes aside from reading his POV. And lastly, more rimming, noted! @Udems. I agree, Dan needs to make sure that Michael stills in his control so if Brad (or someone else) keeps messing with his boys he would have to intervene eventually. About Michael. And I'm totally sure he will have to work hard for those coins ;) But in your opinion, do you think that eventually he will sell his ass or only he will be another camboy? Or do you have another option in mind? I'm so relieved that you find "Michael" hot! I think I "nailed" it because he was my inspiration from the beginning. @Erratic101. Thanks for your comment. Do you have any other suggestions aside from Bob being the slave? I want to know more about your opinions and wishes from the story :) @ZackF. Thanks for your comment. @ForgottenCraddle. Luckily Dan didn't think too much about the words he used so even when he still had the upper hand, it stills room for fun situations ;) Thanks for your comment.

God i love reading a good ball sucking scene, amazing work.

This was great! I'd love to see a continuation or another story in this vein.

Thank you! I wanted to take this one slower than my normal gig, you know try something new.

Not the end, simply a break, from Star World...

man this was hot

Great second chapter! I like the slow build and look forward to what happens next.

Fantastic story. Totally love the role reversal. The thumbsucking and body shaving were an added bonus!! Can't wait for chapter 2!

Yeah that's hot

I always love your stories, RobinHood70, but this one feels a bit like a 40 ounce steak. It's cooked beautifully, and the first few bites are delicious, but I can't eat the whole thing in a single sitting. And I'd much prefer to eat 4 10-ounce steaks, so I can savor each one. That said, I'm also excited about where this one is headed with the two sons.

Cant wait till the entire family is covered with dried cum

OH! I didn't think we'd get the whole office involved. Nice. Makes me wonder if Jack has more guys hypnotized, tbh.

I really like how Dan didn't think of the possibility that others could interfere and use the programming he made for the guys and all the sexiness that follows

I see, I hope he doesn't mass to much with Kyle, Rick and Chad, but gives them better company

I like the story so far, can't wait for more

Soooo hot. Can't wait for the next chapter

There is no ‘Guy’... I’ll have to go back and re read my own work 😂 Tom’s main bullies are Troy and Zack. Troy just always happen to hangout with his crew which consists of Kyle, Rick and Chad. Chad is more or less the voice of reason of the group. Hope this clears things up!

Great chapter. I can't wait for the next one.

Great chapter. I can't wait for the next one.

very very nice! the wait was worth it! the subtle orders that michael has no clue he has to obey is a huge turn on! please make Bob the slave of the family!

Wait is this the end? That was so good I want more although if it's where you want to stop that's fine

Great concept!

so, Its Guy, Troy, Rick and Chad, with Chad being the token good?

I appreciated the pace with this. I would like to see Dan use Michael to get his friend in exchange for trying to use his future bitch~ Just as a measure so nothing bad happens (future plans for more dilfs into the harem). Help Michael realise he is the fag and he should work harder to bring the money. I liked to see Bob still has that mentality and it would be so sweet to see him change <3 Btw, Michael is so hot, usually I am scare to see when people add pix for description for their characters because they are mostly not that much of my type but let me tell you, you nailed it here lol

Loved this chapter, thought it was extremely extremely hot. Loved Bob going more slutty, bitchy, needy, wanton - so that element is really cool. I like the direction of him being trained into falling in love - that is going to be an interesting story element. (I still am not entirely for him dating Dan, but I do like the elements you are going with.) I am NOT a fan, as a note, of Bob feeling submission towards Michael. The whole daddy son thing is hot but NOT the fact he wants to submit to his crappy son. hehe On Michael and Brad, I am of too minds on that. On one side I LOVED the interaction. Michael obeying was hot, very very hot. On the other side, I don't entirely know if I like Michael falling into submission by obeying someone other than Dan. But yeah, I thought 'stop arguing obey" and Michael doing that was great, really great. Okay, so this might go in a direction you don't want to, lol, but the moment Michael was talking about his bros my mind went to "they need to be tranced by the app into being good gym boys for Dan." hehe Soooo maybe Brad can "keep" Michael, though before that he himself gets controlled so that Dan gets to stay in charge. O the picture, again, two minds. One is that pictures like that are completely fine. Two, well, I don't find that guy that attractive, so its not that it ruined it but it made me go a bit out of the story for a moment. That said, due to the whole nature of the scene and how much a good boy Michael has become I found that really hot. As for suggestions. I think Bob needs to not automatically assume all other alphas are his superior, that maybe its Dan who gets to decide who he needs to serve. This can cut the whole obeying Michael thing. I could see something about feelings and such, cause you hinted at there being more. On Michael, I say Dan needs to make sure he is put into a top position, that its his orders that come first and such. But I can also see something that increasing Michael's pleasure in submission and showing off - something that leads him to stop caring that guys will look at him. (I could also see something leading to him separating a Fag from a Gay Guy in his mind, that is, Gay Men are say dominant and such but 'fags' are submissive straight guys, or something.) All in all this was really hot. Loved the chapter. Loved both Michael and Bob's sections, and also Dan's work to figure things out. PS. Plz more rimming, hehe. :)

GREAT STORY! Can you please add another chapter?

I love this story sooo much.

What an amazing, hot conclusion to this series! I enjoyed it immensely.

There should totally be more to this story, it's hot.

So I think you killed me, I really do. This was such a sexy awesome story. Such a perfect way to end this saga and such. Loved everything about it. The discussion about the mind hack. The nature of the plot. The way that Jese submitted in such a glorious way. The sex, the rimming, the sitting on laps and bouncing, the comments, the well everything. So sexy. So delicious. I really love the plotline. I really love the computer system. Its just so spectacularly awesome. The idea of using a program to hack into someone's mind so that the submission in game flows to the real is just brilliant. So great. So very very great. And again, the sex was awesome. I LOVED the lap bouncing and the rimming and the submission of Jese to Dennis. So great. So perfect.