Recent Comments

EntrancedGay92
11/29/20, 3:42 PM
Nice work! This is probably the first story I've read featuring pot and hypno that has actually turned me on. I'm a sucker for a subliminal spiral so your decision to include that was appreciated.
Anonymous
11/29/20, 3:36 PM
Honestly one of the hottest stories on this site... but now I really want a sequel. :(
Anonymous
11/29/20, 3:34 PM
Incredible story! Love your style!
11/29/20, 3:34 PM
great story Mal
11/29/20, 3:28 PM
That was a lot of fun, can't wait for you to continue ! love the little details like the 18 year old son suddenly being drawn to the main character, the changes should be fun
11/29/20, 3:14 PM
please continue
Martin
11/29/20, 2:49 PM
@Bill: > even if it’s only a fantasy, talking advantage of a toddler who cannot give consent is rape. As opposed to what? To hypnotize a straight guy to become a gay sex slut? Which, by your logic, wouldn't be "without consent" and therefor rape?
11/29/20, 1:32 PM
What a hot transformation scene! Enjoying your story as it reaches its conclusion.
11/29/20, 12:36 PM
Great writing, great idea. I love Greek Gods being brought back to the world of male relationships.
Anonymous
11/29/20, 11:39 AM
incredibly hot!!!
11/29/20, 11:03 AM
> You, and all your stuff, played a huge role in my literary-sexual awakening. > This made my whole day. Thank you.
11/29/20, 10:10 AM
I go back to this story OFTEN! I love these two!
11/29/20, 9:23 AM
Animation for this story: [https://twitter.com/Sundoom25/status/1332962237313675267](https://twitter.com/Sundoom25/status/1332962237313675267)
11/29/20, 8:57 AM
Really good
Anonymous
11/29/20, 8:48 AM
I love that the dad noticed the changes as they were happening and loved it even more, that's just so hot
Nov 25, 2020
11/29/20, 8:31 AM
Very hot! I'm personally a big fan of obliviousness and dumbing down, I really liked how you handled it with the reality change. I would have liked to see more of the snippet of him getting into conflict with his self image, to see him establish himself more forcefully into the curse that way, but that's just me. Anyway, great story!
11/29/20, 8:28 AM
Thank you, Sexcrab. I'm glad you liked it.
Nov 14, 2020
11/29/20, 8:22 AM
I absolutely enjoyed this!
11/29/20, 7:40 AM
Wonderful story, I too hope that you'll find the time to expand it into multiple chapters one day
Jimmy M
11/29/20, 5:06 AM
Loved the story, i agree with Kyle, it should have more chapters
11/29/20, 4:41 AM
Very hot story! I hope that you'll write more.
11/29/20, 4:00 AM
How about a homophobic jock turned into an exhibitionist that loves showing off his hot smooth body to other guys?
11/29/20, 3:32 AM
I'm always down for some little guy taking the big ones. Love it!
11/29/20, 3:29 AM
The story was so intense and addicting. More of this. ‼
boy Jason
11/29/20, 3:09 AM
If Father ever needs another shoeshine boy, I would like to apply.
Bill
11/29/20, 2:04 AM
@puppykix The fact that this is a hypno site doesn't mean we need to accept all stories here without critism. The "don't like don't read" moto tries to save a person from critism even though it can be welcomed sometimes, and when faced with a moral dilemma I think it's our duty to comment on it Also, the comparison to rape is because it is rape, even if it's only a fantasy, talking advantage of a toddler who cannot give consent is rape.
Ponderer
11/29/20, 1:51 AM
I have two points to share, one about the plot itself a d the other about the philosophy of it all. On the plot scale, I'll join the rest saying how interesting this chapter was. Yet something that I didn't like was the unrelated appearance of Chris. Maybe I missed it, but it seems Chris's character just appeared out of the blue to fix up the plot whole of Ken being a father alone. It would be nice if we would get more hints about him first. On the ethical level, I join @Delicious1papaya 's concerns. There IS a difference between stripped intelligence, partially dumbing down and age regression. You took care to describe to us how they are in fact children, called them toddlers and sent them to daycare, so unsurprisingly we see them and babies and therefore they are off bound (not only minors but toddlers who have no concept of sex). As @Feed Your Head had said, the story is just too close to reality to be just fapping material and crosses over to the uncanny valley. This doesn't mean it's necessarily a bad thing; for a horror story this is great, but I'm not sure most of us here "signed up" for horror stories, and once again, the child thing is... Uncomfortable. Especially since Ken had the powers to achieve it all without it. One last thing about consent, even if the experiment wasn't a hoax, they didn't sign up for eternal regression so you can't say they gave their consent when they were fine. I know it's sounds weird when we talk about non con in most stories, but when the victim is asked about the crime and rejects it, the violation of his rights is worse in some way, since he knows what's going on and his wishes are being directly disobeyd. I do hope there will be justice in some sort, even if it won't include the trio getting their smarts back (though I really hope they do. Forever is just too long)
11/29/20, 1:01 AM
> Wow – thank you! That sentence felt very much like one of mine – balanced phrases, percussive consonants, strong adjectives – well done! I am not surprised. I've been reading your stuff since I was 15, 12 years ago. You, and all your stuff, played a huge role in my literary-sexual awakening. Thank you for writing ♡
11/29/20, 12:22 AM
For some reason, I always imagine Marc Evan Jackson as Robin (probably because of the way his character talks in Brooklyn Nine Nine, which I think is similar to the way Robin does), which I find absolutely hilarious. Also, I usually have a preference for stories that are more about the controller emotions/thoughts/psych and less about the changes the controlled is going through. But damn, this story is incredibly well written, detailed and I loved the first four chapter (haven't read the 5th one yet, and I'll probably forget to review your story if I don't do it beforehand). So, thanks a bunch for the great story!
11/28/20, 10:14 PM
Brilliant story, really enjoyed it! If you feel like writing the full, unabridged, version sometime that'd definately be a treat!