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Jan 22, 2021
1/22/21, 2:33 PM
I'm fairly new to this forum but having been a fan of your writing over at MC stories for a very long time I was thrilled to see this submission. I absolutely love the story it was great! I only wish it hadn't started out so fast. I would have loved to have seen small changes made and some small perception of the changes. I find it so incredibly exciting when they're aware that something has changed but not quite sure what. loved this!
Jan 22, 2021
1/22/21, 2:09 PM
So Hot Man, Thank You!
Jan 22, 2021
1/22/21, 1:09 PM
Your writing is incredibly hot. Loved this story!
Rock Creek Werewolf
1/22/21, 11:42 AM
bravo! you should consider writing more!
Anonymous
1/22/21, 11:40 AM
I think a watersports round would be hot, and yeah, it's the obvious choice, but Victor
Jan 22, 2021
1/22/21, 10:18 AM
Theres too much world building to let it just be a one and done story, it'll be such a waste!
1/22/21, 9:29 AM
Hello and thanks for the support! I do plan on having the next part come out soon. This was rather a pretty spontaneous write I did in about two hours, but I do have a little bit more planned. The pinball machine isn't done just yet...
Jan 22, 2021
1/22/21, 9:29 AM
my god!!!! more!!! this is so fucking hot!
Jan 22, 2021
1/22/21, 9:05 AM
fuckkk im so happy to see a story by you again
1/22/21, 9:00 AM
this is a unique premise one that I have not seen ever I too would like to see a hookup scene as well as see what the final goals of the pinball machine are both defeating the UFO as well as getting the fifth and final cockpit achieving.
1/22/21, 9:00 AM
This was super hot. I want to see someone win the big prize
Jan 22, 2021
1/22/21, 7:16 AM
Soooo hot, I love the pacing and the changes. Maybe is because I was very hooked to the story, that I feel it ended up a bit abruptly. But maybe that was just me, wanting to read more ha, ha! It's always great to read your stories. I'm still waiting another chapter (and maybe even an ending)of your most popular story. After all this years, I still hope one day you surprise us with another chapter and maybe the epic conclusion. Would be great to read more from you!
Jan 22, 2021
Anonymous
1/22/21, 7:00 AM
Edlam! Is it Christmas already again so soon? Always excited to see one of your stories. As expected, this one was great. Please give us another one this year! : )
1/22/21, 6:41 AM
Tempest888. Keep reading. Kyle's "activities" with the boys may not be as clearcut as you think. :)
1/22/21, 6:17 AM
@diaperthisdaddy and @nephilim Oh, don't worry. I TOTALLY intend to post up the enslaving of the asshole. and the mentor. and at least one chapter after that... but if there would be more chapters after that... someone should leave a comment to inspire me to write more... just saying.
Martin
1/22/21, 6:15 AM
Thank you all for your nice comments, as always, you can't know how much I appreciate them. A second chapter is in the works for a long time, I struggle with it (as I usually do with second chapters) but I have many plans with this story, so please bear with me! :) And yes, without spoiling there is something sinister behind it all, but let's not delve into that too early...
1/22/21, 5:55 AM
@RedShifter, I see the demand for more "happy endings" thrown around in the comments section a lot these days, but what does that even mean? Doesn't Liam seem much happier at the end of the story? He's no longer alienated from his family, he no longer has to worry about the economic challenges and class prejudice he faced as a small-town boy in the big city, and it looks like his boyfriend will even join him in the village. I have no interest in writing the "Liam saves the day" ending that you're looking for, and I honestly wouldn't even be interested in reading that story. But hey, I've written plenty of stories that were inspired by me reading a story, liking the premise, but wanting to take the narrative in a different direction. I encourage you and all the other readers looking for a certain kind of "happy ending" to do the same and express your own fantasies in writing.
Evan
1/22/21, 5:00 AM
LOVED this. Really enjoyed this series and our protagonist's gradual acceptance of his body and mind in the new world. Love the musk fogging his mind and pheromones sparking his body's desire and helping him along. It's both a sweet and hot story! Great job!
1/22/21, 4:33 AM
Well, currently I am working on a three part story (1st part The Bachelor Party is already posted). i should have the second part up by some time next week. After I'm done with the 3 parter, i am thinking about starting up a Patreon account. In which case, I will only be posting one story (one chapter) on here a month. Just need some extra cash and i hope you guys understand :) Also please know that i have not made up my mind about Patreon yet.
1/22/21, 4:32 AM
I've been reading this story, and I was hoping this would have a nice ending where the two get out of these dares and actually make a mends, but the moment Kyle shows up I had lost hope. However, he does seem like a nice guy and clearly didn't want to abuse the two boys with his internal dialogue, but the moment they woke up and started refering to him as "master" I pretty much gave up. I'm all for writing how you wish, but I'm just disappointed because out of all the stories on here I've only ever read 5 with happy endings. I'm getting real tired of all the sadistic stuff. I'm sorry, I don't mean to sound harsh, I'm just trying to voice a clearly unpopular opinion.
Anonymous
1/22/21, 4:16 AM
Guys -- fantasy -- don't get so wrapped up. I actually liked the story and the ending. Why should the good guys always win? Bad guys need some lovin'.
Ken
1/22/21, 3:58 AM
GREAT story. LOVED it. Feel free to keep writing in this type of arc You could use superheros, police, firemen, UPS guys, military, or like darkblade2814 said. Back at the bar.
Anonymous
1/22/21, 3:37 AM
great story would love to see a chapter about anal play or stretching like fisting, or something like watersports. also my vote would be for victor or ryan to leave
1/22/21, 2:45 AM
This was great, Martin! I finally got around to reading it. xD. I do adore the way that he eventually comes around to enjoying and accepting what he did. I also sort of like the open-endedness of it. Makes you wonder if this acceptance was also part of the control and displays a more insidious side to the organization. :3
1/22/21, 2:06 AM
MUCH better! Looking forward to the confrontation!
Anonymous
1/22/21, 12:48 AM
Hot!! Can't wait for the next one!
1/22/21, 12:13 AM
Fun story..."I felt like Neopolitan ice cream sometimes"...LOL. Well written. I'm not a fan of drag queens and that one annoyed me as much as the ones in real life. Nice portrayal.
1/22/21, 12:09 AM
I know I'm the outlier here but it would he cool to see a 'happy ending' for once where the protagonist does escape and successfully dismantles the operation and saves everyone.. maybe because seeing the love of his life turned snaps him out of it because it's so viscerally jarring, or something like that.
Ravenclaw
1/21/21, 11:39 PM
Awesome story. my favourite weed story. can't wait to read more from you.
1/21/21, 10:58 PM
This is a well-written story. However, I was hoping for some mind control elements. Perhaps it'll be in the next chapter? Thank you.