Recent Comments

2/20/21, 1:49 PM
I read all the chapters and they're great! Can't wait for more!
2/20/21, 1:39 PM
Thanks to everyone who has commented, it really helps to keep me motivated to write more. I hope you like the next chapter that has been posted.
2/20/21, 1:33 PM
Cool, I hope to see more of this, let see how the city changes
Feb 14, 2021
2/20/21, 1:27 PM
Thank you!
2/20/21, 1:26 PM
Really nicely written and I like discovering what's happening alongside Eric. Personally, I am very into story-focused, expository erotica with developed characters! Looking forward to more from you, either in this story or another!
2/20/21, 1:16 PM
Subtle, but still very hot. Even without pornographic descriptions of sex acts, it contains the one element that always gets me hard: conditioned obedience.
Anonymous
2/20/21, 12:19 PM
"These pants, Babe, are made for war not love.” LOL
Anonymous
2/20/21, 12:13 PM
That was hot and sweet at the same time! I loved the Preppy cameo. Hopefully we will get to the pup play soon
Feb 19, 2021
2/20/21, 12:05 PM
Great job. So hot.
Anonymous
2/20/21, 9:58 AM
Great chapter but how can you leave us hanging like this. I hope the next chapter is soon.
Feb 19, 2021
2/20/21, 8:05 AM
Fuck me, that was hot! Didn't even manage to get to halfway through before blowing!
2/20/21, 6:52 AM
Dark as forewarned, but such a hot, well-written story of seduction.
2/20/21, 6:36 AM
Love the progression of events and look forward to the next chapter.
2/20/21, 5:36 AM
Really well-written and extremely hot. Thank you for your excellent work!
2/20/21, 4:06 AM
Hot take on the magic potion concept (can I get some of that, too?!). I'd love more of Erik in the singlet and training or competing with his new teammates. There's a nice opportunity for a sequel to this that explores and juxtaposes Erik's relationships with his teammates and his role on team with his relationship/role with Jim. Or perhaps the longer-term effects of the potion could be brought to light through some anxiety-producing but sexy AF unexpected or amplified consequences for Erik's performance, relations with teammates, or self-control in and out of the singlet.
2/20/21, 3:38 AM
Good so far! Good choice to set it in the FFIX world.
Anonymous
2/20/21, 1:11 AM
Want to see what happens to Riley. Cigarettes? For?
2/20/21, 12:17 AM
Keep up the good work! I really like your style and how you plan everything carefully. Since Preppy's out of base, I'm guessing there'll be a scene with Sherman and Preppy? ^_^ PS - Lent = past tense of lend. You want Leant.
2/19/21, 11:20 PM
No, it is just whenever I get something done. I wish I could have a set update, but life will never allow it.
2/19/21, 10:02 PM
Out of curiosity do you have a set update schedule? If not it's fine just curious
2/19/21, 8:27 PM
I don't remember if the brothers have been mentioned as having family. I do think I talked about Leo having an aunt, but I'm not sure. I'm actually even more surprised you hadn't seen this insecure side to Leo given that during the whole path I tried to be as explicit about it as possible. He already said "please" and "if you want" in path 2.2.2.2. Maybe you just haven't read them in a while, sound plausible. Yeah, Leo is an adorable romantic in my opinion. He really should trust his seduction abilities more! =] Well, I'm not going back on his path for a while. One more chapter soon and then I will try to work on personals stories. So his meeting with Sam will have to wait. =(
Anonymous
2/19/21, 6:30 PM
excellent
Feb 19, 2021
2/19/21, 5:24 PM
This would make a great gay Twilight Zone episode.
2/19/21, 4:29 PM
This is one hot story. Defintely want more Mormon scenarios on here. Really well written too. Please write more!!!
2/19/21, 3:13 PM
wow!!! all family for one guy... I believe some of Leo's brothers have families already, right? how they will react to this 🤔... also, never expected this unsecure side from Leo... was kind of cute when, even having the power, he said "porfavor" after doing a change on Horus :3 I can't wait to see how he manages Sam and his reaction...
Logan
2/19/21, 2:23 PM
This is one of those stories that has everything I need. Embarrassing ass growth? ✅ Noncon (in the context of a sexual fantasy)? ✅ A cute guy getting stuck with tits that make him horny and humiliated? ✅ Thanks for such a great story!
2/19/21, 11:28 AM
the neighbors will be cool, and a nice warm-up for stronger spells
2/19/21, 11:26 AM
well I think the neighbors would make sense to turn, idk how I'll wrap the news station in...but it will be a fun project to figure out 😄
2/19/21, 10:22 AM
Question: did you like the conservative party into gay rally or the conserative news channel into pro-gay channel?