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3/23/21, 10:53 AM
Although the manner of conversion isn't exactly my thing, the overall story and pics are very hot. Great work!
3/23/21, 9:54 AM
Say, I really like this. We rarely see such clear allegory on here, and it's refreshing! What a clever idea. :D
Anonymous
3/23/21, 7:51 AM
if you stop drinking does the effect wear off?!? where did Ben leave his "clean" water bottles?!? did anything happen to them?!? will the pump ever be repaired and the water flow again?!? why did Ben just accept the sounds coming from Parkers room?!? not only is the story hot - i find all the possibilities it creates such a turn on too!!! can't wait for the next installment... but for now - i'll just drink more water...
3/23/21, 7:34 AM
hot stuff
3/23/21, 4:39 AM
Everything about this is awesome. The lead-in chapter reads like a real good travelogue, made all the better by the expectations you gently seed here and there. When the men get to the island and there's this doctor there, that triggers a whole bunch of possibilities for mind-altered sex-frenzy. And what happens next perfectly satisfies all expectations--and then some! Like in your other stories, you are just *brilliant* at showing the inner workings of the trance-victim's mind. Kyle's slippage into the effects of the island, the fruit, etc... You evoke this all so well! Thanks for having written this!
3/23/21, 4:32 AM
I really LOVE stories where the mind control is accomplished through a "betrayal" of the body! Really hope to see Sam continue to struggle as he confronts his step-brother and his body once again leads him into getting fucked all over...
3/23/21, 3:51 AM
The picture you paint of Dixon's obedience-soaked inner mind is incredibly hot! As for the circle-jerk, it would have been hot even with non-tranced dudes. Knowing that the dudes in THIS circle were STAMPED with obedience, however, made it way, way hotter!
3/23/21, 3:28 AM
Hey, Dace! Hey, other kind-commentator (whose profile name isn't showing above)! I'm just catching up with your messages, and want to say "thank you"! I've got some ideas floating around and will try to hammer them out before long!
3/23/21, 2:35 AM
Hehe would love to see how he is force fed by a funnel... gallons of water being pumped through his system hehe
3/23/21, 2:18 AM
hope more of the story develops.
3/23/21, 2:10 AM
I'm not sure how missed this story, but I absolutely loved it! I would love to see another story in this universe, perhaps following these characters or following a different set of characters who also cross paths with "the manager".
3/23/21, 1:41 AM
Enough. turn him into someone and something interesting. This is just a cartoon gone bad.
3/23/21, 1:40 AM
Great sci-fi, reminded me a bit of Minority Report (the TV series, not the movie). It's too bad the future still has so much discrimination, but I suppose it's analogous to the hatred and fear directed at the Mutants in the X-men universe. Hope you write a sequel, I'd like for Louis to get some serious comeuppance and for Zander's brother to find him alive and, if not necessarily well, at least healthy given all the protein shots he's probably received in the 3 months since he was detained.
3/23/21, 1:36 AM
Hot!
3/23/21, 1:12 AM
Thanks for the positive comments so far. Definitely planning on continuing the story! I also made an edit today to fix the mistake noticed by PEN15LUVR.
3/23/21, 12:49 AM
I like this. There's like three different stories in here, all of which have potential. During the first part i thought Elijah had been brainwashed into being a soldier because his personality had changed so much from what Jacob remembered. This was reinforced by his parents attitude of wanting him to be different, his room being changed while he was gone, and his "no homo" machismo attitude. So i thought it would be about Jacob undoing that and saving his friend. For the second part i assumed it was going to be your classic "my childhood friend changed/ grew up/ grew apart and I'm going to use hypnosis to make him my friend again." The last part was Elijah hypnotizing Jacob back, which is an idea i've always been interested in writing and would love to see you expand on it. There's a lot of potential here and I'd love to see you polish it more. The writing is rough, but there's only a few points where it gets in the way of comprehension (the last section being notable), and as long as people understand what you're trying to say, that's more important than perfect grammar. So keep up the good work (when you have time) and i look forward to see what you write. Maybe take a stab at it myself 😉
3/23/21, 12:37 AM
How did Grant shoot his load into Sam when you wrote a whole passage about putting a condom on Grant's dick? If he was stealthing, you gotta tell the reader that. I didn't enjoy ending the story with that giant HOW? running in my head.
3/23/21, 12:26 AM
Now that all the pieces are in the chessboard, things will be moving pretty fast.
Evan
3/22/21, 11:41 PM
Damn, this was great. I really want to hear what his step brother did to start all this. But as much as he tried to resist, I'm glad Grant could help him feel what he needs.
Mar 21, 2021
3/22/21, 10:52 PM
Great story. I hadn't visited your Tumblr in a while, and it was a lot of fun to catch up. Hope there are more on the way!
Conversion Enthusiast
3/22/21, 10:08 PM
Hot! I think I'd have preferred a bit of a slower pacing but I don't want to interrupt your writing style either! Dang I missed this haha. Glad to read as always
3/22/21, 9:08 PM
Space and aliens. Two of my favorites. Nice story. I look forward to seeing what goes on in the human fan club.
3/22/21, 7:38 PM
Fantastic world building almost forgot what website i was reading on for a moment. Thank you for sharing this story!
Mar 21, 2021
EJG
3/22/21, 4:22 PM
Mmm, Love it. Now ya just need an office FULL of MUSCLETITTED Hunks
3/22/21, 3:59 PM
amazing! great hot stuff here please continue!
3/22/21, 3:16 PM
super hot
Jason
3/22/21, 1:17 PM
Awesome! I hope you keep it up.
Mar 21, 2021
3/22/21, 1:11 PM
This was FANTASTIC. As a chest man who also loves stupefication and himbos...mmm, mmm. ;D
Anonymous
3/22/21, 11:57 AM
Wow, what a great story! This really pushed all the right buttons for me, I'm looking forward to what comes next. Hopefully the stepbro and stepdaddy get involved! Wouldn't mind seeing more of Grant either.
3/22/21, 9:42 AM
This is the first cock transformation story I've read. At first, I was weirded out, but as I read further my hardening dick told me it was the hot kind of weird. On the topic of monster cocks, I've been introducing a "straight" buddy of mine to various aspects of gay porn. (I'm thankful we've moved past the mmf threesome phase, I've seen more pussy than I EVER wanted to see in my life!) He's really enjoying seeing tops with huge cocks getting swallowed by accomplished cocksuckers. He often remarks that he doesn't get how the hung dude doesn't pass out whenever they get hard. I've pointed out that their bodies are used to their big cock having been attached since before birth, and he accepts (and forgets) this fact, not connecting it to his own 9 inches which I've been using to perfect my own sword swallowing skills. All this just to say that the frat guy's body would need to transform as well to compensate for the inches he's added to his penis.