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2/8/22, 9:53 AM
loved it! wishing I could be like bratt

2/10/22, 5:44 AM
me too@BlondieBoy
2/10/22, 5:27 AM
You cannot possibly write these chapters fast enough!
Harry
2/10/22, 5:15 AM
If it had been Tommy, I would have spoken to the coin again to put a jockstrap on me, it's better than being naked.
Harry
2/10/22, 4:28 AM
I wish I had a MoJox jockstrap
2/10/22, 4:28 AM
I really hope you write a sequel because this is honestly amazing!
Mar 21, 2021
Lucas
2/10/22, 4:14 AM
Me gusto, ojala hicieran más historias asi.
2/10/22, 4:11 AM
This story is well-written, sexy, and intriguing. It stands well on its own, but if part 2 is in the works, I'm all for it.
Harry
2/10/22, 4:09 AM
I wish I had a MoJox jockstrap
2/8/22, 3:15 AM
I need to thank the readers that have commented. And because of this, I have decided to post the concluding chapter for Heat. It'll probably take me a few days. I wrote out a draft this afternoon, but it's not quite right. I feel that I didn't quite stick the landing, so a few changes are required to fully conclude this story. I really want it to end in the best way possible. So I've forwarded a draft on to a trusted writer that I greatly admire. I hope you don't mind, but I also want to take a moment to talk about comments. I'm not really trying to solicit comments. But I just want readers to be aware of how much time and effort that every writer puts into their stories. I have literally thought about this particular story "Heat" for weeks. And I wrote a draft of Chapter 1 weeks ago. And since that time, I have probably spent several hours editing and refining it, really making an effort to give you guys a product worth your time to read. And in most cases, my rule of thumb is: if I've gotten you hard by tapping into your innermost fantasies, that's all the thanks that I need. However, for stories that aren't commented on, it can be a bit discouraging for that writer. Having spent all that time and effort, and also sharing their sexual fantasies, the writer is hoping that there is a reader that also gets turned on and affected by that story. For instance, there is a writer (one that I greatly admire) who also wrote something today. And as of now, nobody has commented on his latest addition. It's a bit discouraging because this guy has provided amazing ... and I mean AMAZING fantasies to this site. I have read, re-read over and over, jacking off, getting off numerously to what he has written. Absman420 is a literary giant on this site, and I feel honored if I'm ever considered in the same league as him. So I guess I'm saying that I'm thankful that after reading a chapter, you guys are taking a moment to reciprocate and provide some kind of way for the writer to know they've affected you. I'm sorry if any of you felt that I'm preaching on some soap box, but it really could mean a lot for a writer to know that you guys are out there. And we aren't going to know that unless you comment.

Martin
2/8/22, 6:05 AM
@rubbrsome 💕 I've yet to to read your latest story, but I will comment on it, you can bet on that!

2/8/22, 2:40 PM
@rubbrsome I'm so thrilled to see you writing again! But I want to give you my honest critique. I think the scenario is great, and your visual descriptions are, as always, impeccable. But the characterization of Chase and Brian didn't always work for me. For instance, Brian's behavior with the cellphone didn't make sense to me, and the scene seemed to have no real pay-off. What might have been cool is if the cellphone camera showed something Brian's naked eyes couldn't see, like showing the man in the sauna as an inhuman beast. In turn, that could have motivated the beast's subsequent actions (filling the sauna with his musk) because he couldn't let Chase and Brian see him in his true form and had to claim them as his pups.

2/9/22, 10:54 PM
> @rubbrsome For instance, there is a writer (one that I greatly admire) who also wrote something today. And as of now, nobody has commented on his latest addition. It’s a bit discouraging because this guy has provided amazing … and I mean AMAZING fantasies to this site. I have read, re-read over and over, jacking off, getting off numerously to what he has written. Absman420 is a literary giant on this site, and I feel honored if I’m ever considered in the same league as him. > Wow. This is incredibly flattering and I'm not sure I deserve that kind of lauding, but it's appreciated. I AM disappointed that my last story got no comments (except yours, rubbrsome, for which I'm grateful). Ironically, one of the things I dislike about self-publishing is lack of commentary, so I posted some chapters on here specifically to get the feedback. It would be welcome. It's also true that I see certain authors names and I IMMEDIATELY read their work: You, Derek Williams, screamingmoist -- my cock jumps. Don't feel insecure about your work at all. You will always be top tier to me.
2/9/22, 3:19 PM
This was such a pretty story! I loved the fae world, all the wild things that happened, the interesting and creative sex, and the mythical quest vibe. It felt like a romp through a magical world and it's definitely inspiring a story that I've been planning to write... Looking forward to seeing more of this kind of thing, if you ever get more of it down!

2/9/22, 10:09 PM
@Soren Fitz Thank you! It means a lot to know that this story is inspiring you and that you enjoyed so many of the different aspects I was playing with! I definitely feel encouraged to write more!
2/8/22, 3:00 PM
@Hypnothrill ... damn! That would have been awesome to include something like that. Frankly, it never occurred to me. I viewed it as more of a lack of respect on Brian's part. Which is why he is transformed into a subservient role. But I wish that I had included this plot point.

2/8/22, 6:44 PM
@rubbrsome Maybe that was just my way of volunteering to be your proofreader/editor again ;-)

2/8/22, 7:05 PM
@Hypnothrill ... You should have an email.

2/9/22, 9:32 PM
@rubbrsome, so, like, you have never gone back to revise and install a new section in a work? I have done that a number of times as i find flow flaws and new directions too. I am so happy to find one of my few Saved Works Authors pumping it out again! ...So to speak.... ;-) What a great way to turn a pup, without all the claws and teeth and blood and stuff. Romantic beastiality. I'm there!

2/9/22, 10:06 PM
@RoboticExperiment3 Thanks! I don't think I've ever written a werewolf or werebear transformation story. I know I've done these alien lizards in a prior story. So this felt a little different, but not too much. And of course, I enjoyed visualizing it in my head.
2/9/22, 7:04 PM
Amazing story! I love the idea and it's so well written. I've enjoyed furry stories before, but this one is off the charts. I'm desperately wishing I could be that third member of the pride 😍
2/9/22, 3:49 PM
I love that this story has been continuing. its always been one of my favorites! Thank you 😈
2/9/22, 1:28 PM
This is equal parts scorching hot, intimate, and a little heartbreaking! Well done, guys!

2/9/22, 3:22 PM
That was the goal! It was a whole mess of lust and emotions all tangled up, and it was really fun to work with Josh to thread those things through the story. I'm glad it hit. @Dace
Jonanator
2/9/22, 3:21 PM
is his brother doing this just to humiliate him, or is there more his brother wants?
2/9/22, 2:06 PM
Great chapter Man, Thanks!

2/9/22, 2:21 PM
@hairyartist thanks for reading!
2/9/22, 1:20 PM
i live to serve the virus
Kyle Cicero
2/9/22, 12:43 PM
A great job as usual.

2/9/22, 1:13 PM
@Kyle Cicero thanks man!
2/9/22, 8:48 AM
Really well done! VERY enjoyable story! You write really well. I understood the scene with the phone the same way as you explained it - though I wonder if anyone would take their phone into a hot and steamy environment. It's a difficult scene to convey in such a limited (and empty!) space as a sauna is.

2/9/22, 10:03 AM
@Delicious1papaya ... I actually got this idea because I noticed that when sitting in a sauna, I noticed that other guys would be on their phone. My mind started to wonder if they could be taking pictures of the other guys. And that's how this story came to life. And there is a difference between a sauna and a steam room. Saunas are typically dry, while steam rooms are high in humidity.

2/9/22, 11:17 AM
@rubbrsome That's too funny, because that was also the moment that broke my suspension of disbelief. "Wait, they're in the sauna fully clothed, and they have their cell phones out?" I've been in plenty of saunas, but never one where that was the common practice.

Martin
2/9/22, 11:35 AM
@rubbrsome I guess if someone had their phone with them in a sauna I would seriously question their mental health. First of all, it's not healthy for the phone and secondly, as in most parts of Europe people are naked inside a sauna, it would seriously break privacy. And in a gay sauna, where all kind of things happen all the time, one would even be more afraid that incriminating videos would get out :) That doesn't change that your story was really hot. I'm not into hairy bears or werewolves myself, but as you wrote it, it was amazingly hot as we've get to enjoy from you so many times already!

2/9/22, 11:50 AM
@Hypnothrill its absolutely true. I frequent Eos Fitness, and go to two different locations. At one, the sauna is inside the men's locker room. while the other is a shared sauna between the men and womens locker room. But in both cases, men and women are on their cell phones. And even in the men's locker room sauna, they enter fully clothed. It made me wonder if it's younger generation thing regarding the clothing. But definitely respect thing in regards to the phone. One lady even took a phone call and disturbed the tranquility of the sauna. Anyways, thats how this story got started in my head.

2/9/22, 11:54 AM
@Martin Maybe it's a Utah mentality. You must wear clothes inside the sauna. Its very strange. Theres a sign just outside the door indicating that you need to be wrapped in a towel. But regardless, men enter fully clothed.
JockMC
1/29/22, 1:54 AM
love this one!! Detailed description did make the story quite hot. A jockstrap that controlled the wearer's pennis would help introducing mind control/hypnosis elements to the storyline. For football gear fetish, this one reminds me of sensations when fully suited, from helmet, shoulder, girdle to compression shirt/pant, cleats and so on. Maybe helmet will alter the wearer's mind with subliminal messages, sexual pleasure and electromagnetic signals, with hormone and adrenaline boosted?

2/9/22, 3:04 AM
@JockMC Thanks for your comment and for liking this idea. I was trying to get the sensation of dressing as sensual; I'm glad to see you felt it and liked it. Your ideas are more suited (just happened to be the word I chose) for a sports story. I have an idea for a wrestling story where the headgear does play a role in the mind control. If you want to put all these idea into a story, it would have to be a high school or college setting. But again thanks for reading and liking this idea.
Martin
2/8/22, 9:53 PM
I'm a late reader of this chapter... but I have to chime in to add my praises. This chapter is a lot of exposition, but man how much fantasy and creativity is there inside of you. I wonder where you get this from. What it must be looking like inside of your head. Anyway, I'm looking forward to read the final chapter!

2/9/22, 1:13 AM
@Martin Thank you Cap'n, and I appreciate you reading this even though it's not your normal material.
Martin
2/8/22, 10:04 PM
Such a bitter-sweet story. Forbidden love indeed, and it always invokes anger that people had (and still have) to suffer this. Thank you for this great experience. 5/5 for writing and romance.

2/9/22, 1:05 AM
Thanks, @Martin! I appreciate the feedback :)
2/9/22, 12:16 AM
Im loving this spin on the Pollination series. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Sparks
2/8/22, 11:30 PM
woah this was amazing! Love seeing this fantastic story develop!
Apr 19, 2010
2/8/22, 11:11 PM
the mom getting killed was kinda out of nowhere and weird but the rest of it was super hot lol
2/8/22, 10:04 PM
been waiting for this! was worth the wait! can't wait for the next part
Anonymous
2/8/22, 9:10 PM
Wow, that did not take long at all. Poor dumb Dallas has no idea what is happening.
2/8/22, 8:02 PM
A very hot story. I could almost smell the big man's musk as I read it.
2/8/22, 7:28 PM
Very nice.
2/8/22, 6:54 PM
I dunno how I missed this one but I'm glad i caught it now. Hotter than hot!