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8/5/23, 8:40 PM
Few things turn me on more than the idea of being so mindfucked with lust that I lose all of my dignity and ability to say no. Which is to say that this story absolutely *wrecked* me, in the best possible way.

8/6/23, 5:21 AM
@[Hyphap](/user/show/14827) That's a huge turn-on for me too, haha... Thank you for the comment, I'm so glad you enjoyed the story! 😊
8/6/23, 5:16 AM
Something so hot about him genuinely getting to know Jeff and his insecurities about his intelligence but also privately trancing him into an archetypal dumb horny jock calling himself a “dum dum” for him to play with
8/6/23, 1:32 AM
AWOOGA! As someone who is incredibly turned on by laziness and apathy (it’s part of why stoner stories get me going), this chapter is PERFECT. And each of the Sinister Seven have the potential to corrupt in a different way: weight gain for Gluttony, arrogance and smugness for Pride, taking as many cocks as possible for Avarice…what an amazing set-up. Can’t wait to see what you cook up! :)

8/6/23, 5:08 AM
@[Feed Your Head](/user/show/1170832) Glad you see where this is going 😉 I’m really excited to meet each new demonic addition as this develops
8/5/23, 11:10 PM
Hooray. I've been eagerly awaiting an update to this story. I'm so turned on by a corruption story. I'm very excited to see these poor boys reduced to "filthy little beasts" with all sorts of sexual focus. While I lament Gabe losing his connection to his friends, making Sloth more about indifference than laziness was a stroke of genius. It also very easily sets up why he would so easily succumb to the incubi and let them change his friends as well. Picking the gooner to take the stone and be the first demon's victim really was a smart move by the powers that be. :D VERY excited for another chapter.

8/6/23, 5:06 AM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) Thanks for reading and commenting again! Glad you appreciated Gabe’s comfy slide into darkness 😜
8/6/23, 1:44 AM
Ooooh! Let’s have a guessing game. We know Gabe is taken by the Demon of Sloth, so that leaves six to corrupt. Eli, with his “holier-than-thou” attitude, might be a candidate for Pride, but his desire for Ian’s life could also be Envy. The vanilla Blake (and let me just say “kinky as a Care Bear” is a BRILLIANT turn of phrase!) could be consumed by Lust. Lazy Ian would be slothful, but that’s taken—maybe Envy, since he wants to be someone else? Or Gluttony, since he wants to consume a lot of cock? And that leaves Romeo, who’s a bit harder…he has a gentle exterior and kind heart, so maybe raging Wrath? And that leaves Avarice and Gluttony/Envy unclaimed—perhaps others join the fray? Can’t wait to see what happens!

8/6/23, 5:03 AM
@[Feed Your Head](/user/show/1170832) I’m glad you enjoyed it; and so happy to read your thoughts! I’m excited to try and meet your expectations 😁 (And I _was_ very satisfied w that ‘Care Bear’ line 😆)
CHT
8/6/23, 1:04 AM
Like where its heading ....
8/5/23, 10:38 PM
Now im curious about the end. Did Gold really escaped the Subduer and got his memory/self back, except the powers, or is this just part of subduers plan? Cant wait for the next chapter. And again amazing and interesting story.

8/5/23, 11:48 PM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Thank you! Hope you enjoy what's coming! Hmm,... I wonder which it is? Maybe The Subduer is going to regret heading off to bed when all sorts of exciting things are unfolding in his lab,...
8/5/23, 11:20 PM
Great story so far. Love the gradual transformation of the young jock to a submissive soon-to-be slave.
8/5/23, 11:06 PM
Will we also get a 7.2 with the details of what happened with that James fellow?
6/19/23, 5:45 AM
It does seem like right now, 013 can't just read Jamie's thoughts, or at least can't unless Jamie thinks right at him. What seems to be happening at the moment is that 013 speaks in Jamie's head, but Jamie has to speak out loud for 013 to hear him. I suppose that the dialog between them could be entirely internal, though. We don't really have proof either way. @NeonDemon, if you're lurking, can you clarify?

8/5/23, 10:49 PM
@[copsboy64](/user/show/910425) yeah, if 013 and Jamie have merged down to the fundamental level where their identities are entangled, then shouldnt their conscious thought be as well? it could be cool if ever attempt of Jamie trying to secretly "trick" Master is detected by the symbiote, and Jamie is disciplined :3
8/5/23, 8:44 PM
i liked the story
Anonymous
8/5/23, 8:17 PM
Matty will likely prevail in the end,but the pervert in me,and privately just loves EVIL EDDIE.Kinda wished he'd get the other entrapped men to embrace their darker evil side and poor little Matty will end up in a gang-bang,which would be hot even with the slaves being mindless
8/4/23, 6:39 AM
Yay you're back!! A hot chapter for a hot story in a hot dimension! I can't believe we finally found out what is this war they are all preparing for! Sounds like a battle I would love to take part in. Then again, I might be too busy falling into the water, clumsy me. It's very interesting to see the interaction between those three (even though Talley can be a douche sometimes). I wonder what will happen when Marco meets Nate's new friends. I can't decide if I should gamble on Marco being jealous or not. Can't wait for the next chapter!

8/5/23, 7:55 PM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) Heh, seems I've been edging the readers on frat warfare all this time, but the secret was going to come out eventually! In future revisions of the story I might make it clearer earlier on--maybe even in the first chapter. We'll see. I also really appreciate how excited you are about this story; that kind of thing helps give me motivation to keep going when the writing gets tough. Talley can be a douche, but (at least for him) it's all in good fun, and Nate seems to think it's part of the 'bro code', even if Arik disagrees. I hope you enjoyed the interactions!
7/18/23, 10:59 PM
As always, another wonderful chapter, Soren. And it's great to see months of preparation, planning, and writing come to fruition! The interactions between Talley and Nate were the highlight of the chapter for me, personally, and I can't wait to see how more outrageous the two boys will get in their efforts to prove their manhood to the other. And your refs, as usual, are all mouthwatering! You have _very_ good taste! Keep up the great work!

8/5/23, 7:49 PM
@[Franco Apollo](/user/show/10029736) Two bottom-coded frat boys with a chip on their shoulder? Who knows what shenanigans they'll get up to... I'm really glad you enjoyed it; it took me long enough to finally get it out, but I'm glad I did!
Anonymous
8/5/23, 7:19 PM
Please please PLEASE make a sequel to this! I really wanna know what happens inside that magic box (also wanna go there ahahaha)
8/5/23, 4:47 AM
I really liked this a lot. I often judge how hot I'm finding a particular story based on how many "goes" it takes me to make it all the way through, cuz often I'll be stroking to a story and I get to some particularly hot part and I just decide that's where I'm gonna unload cuz it's so good. And then when I come back to it again I'll go to right around that spot and maybe start a little before to get a running start back into it. This story took me 6 times to get thru. I did have the thought as the story was going on that maybe there was gonna be a twist at the end, that the whole thing with Quentin was a trick just to get Seamus. Cuz this whole thing with Rich and size queens started with Quentin pointing out the first couple of posts. After that there's no direct contact between Seamus and Quentin. Quentin texts him that they were gonna remain roommates, but that's it. When Seamus goes over to Quentin's place and hears him totally worshipping Rich thru the door, he doesn't ACTUALLY see what they're doing. It could have been staged for his benefit, if Quentin was in on the whole thing. And after that Quentin is pretty much silent no matter how much Seamus tries to contact him. So one possible ending I had in my head was that after Seamus goes full-on size queen for Rich, that Quentin would walk in and be like "I can't believe how fast he got you. I guess I owe Rich and his big dick $50. But that doesn't mean I don't get to use you too" and Quentin might haul out his own huge cock, and Quentin and Rich would be laughing and high-fiving each other while Seamus has to service them both. But as I went on it seemed that all was as it was presented. I mean, I guess. We never did see Quentin again. We assume he's been in his dorm room this whole time using a dildo on himself and wishing it was Rich. Amazing story. Very well read. I'm interested for the author reveal as well.

8/5/23, 7:17 PM
@[Pwrliftermscl](/user/show/941605) Wow, six times! That is *quite* the compliment! I'm really glad you enjoyed the story! 😄 I like your idea for the twist! It'd be a very different story for sure, but also a fun one. And yeah, I did have Quentin 'vanish' on purpose, though it was less for a twist, and more to build up that sense of claustrophobia and dread. I was borrowing from horror movie tropes for this story, honestly, and how in those movies it can be so effective if the best friend just 'vanishes' and leaves the main character panicked over what could have happened to them (versus, say, something as obvious as seeing the friend get stabbed on camera by the killer). The ambiguity over the friend's exact fate and the creeping dread makes it more intense, I think, and forces our imaginations to go into overdrive... especially if the protagonist has a growing feeling in the pit of their stomach of *oh god, I'm next.* So I tried to channel that a bit for this story, but in an erotic way instead of a scary way, ha. I hope it was effective!
8/5/23, 5:20 PM
I love the idea of goonstench just taking over the whole school, and yeah it obviously starts in the boy's locker room but then it stinks up the whole gym and the mess halls, classrooms aren't even safe- and don't get me started on auditoriums!
7/24/23, 1:49 AM
This really hits my buttons and the writing is very good. I'd just say don't try to ram the descriptions in so hard at the start. It's jarring and the reader knows you're trying to get the descriptive stuff in too much, but you can tell later on you're way better at slipping the details in then. I think it's a lot more natural for you to take your time on the descriptive bits than try to push too much in right up front, and you've got the writing talent to do that for sure!

Author (name hidden)
8/5/23, 4:50 PM
@[edhypnofan](/user/show/10002490) Yeah, sorry. Was my first time writing a TF story, and I was a bit rushing to not hit deadline, could not make the description smoother. But I felt it was needed to get a bit of an idea of what everyone looked like early on. Thanks!
8/4/23, 3:22 PM
Just when I was thinking about the pharaoh's story! Fun worldbuilding. OwO

8/5/23, 3:58 PM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) There are many, many stories that have been unknown to humanity so far.
peter
8/5/23, 3:30 PM
need another chapter please.
8/5/23, 1:12 PM
THAT was the best story I have read in such a long long time. The recollections from Jack and Tristan are brilliant. PLEASE write a follow up. Your writing style is just PERFECTION
8/5/23, 12:01 PM
A very hot beginning! Some of the tags seem to be here for following chapters, and they sound VERY promising.....
8/5/23, 11:38 AM
The only part that disappointed me a bit was when Mr. Graham seemed to show the son a lot of respect and adoration for his beauty. I assumed you would take it in the direction of having Aston become his boyfriend/someone with a higher position than just another subordinate.
8/5/23, 8:41 AM
Love this series. Great job. Reading this makes me so hard. The next one should be the Captain of the police station turned into a daddy pig. Asking Stellato and Bradley about their strange behavior….. He should be forced on Tanner‘s cock till he accept how good it feels to suck on a cock while his former straight ass get fucked and his own cock locked into a tiny cage….!
Anonymous
8/5/23, 7:43 AM
super hot!! can't wait fo the next chapter
Jul 21, 2023
8/5/23, 5:42 AM
Fucking HOT!!
8/5/23, 4:19 AM
More more please more! Hopefully the next chapter come out sooner!
7/19/23, 10:34 AM
I love this world so much. The character mean a lot to me and their interactions feel so real and natural. The relationships are important so knowing that Jasper has to keep a secret and deceive Rhys is painful. Nova. Oh dear. If you're going to accept being converted into a pet, that mind-blowing sex training is probably a good trade for paying that price. That was a great scene. My favourites of this chapter are the attitude and personality planning with Nova and his rehabilitation person/trainer. As always, I can't wait for more.

8/5/23, 2:41 AM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) Cuddle-switch says: "Evan! Our more most consistent and frequent commenter -- and always such great and in-depth comments! We're loving the interactions as well. That's definitely my favourite part. The mind-melting sex kinda had me giggling as I wrote it. That was fun." You know how much it means to me to hear your thoughts and have your encouragement! <3 Thank you for being one of our most constant readers and supporters. <3 <3 <3
7/17/23, 1:07 PM
Fives everywhere. Wish I could give more. What an amazing series.

8/5/23, 2:39 AM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Cuddle-switch says: "Thank you so much -- it really makes me feel good to see positive numbers on my first series that I've ever written." I also really appreciate you encouraging us and taking the time to share your thoughts! Thank you!
7/17/23, 1:06 PM
Still very hot!!! Nova, nooooooooooo, don't be fooled by the hot sex and the brainwashing, think of your friends! I guess next chapter will have Jewel's side of things. Oh boy, that auction seems like the next big event in the story.😰 Hyped!

8/5/23, 2:38 AM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) You're right on the money with what's coming down the line for the auction! We have to make Nova and the others suffer sexily as much as possible before we give them a happily ever after ending, right? Right? Thank you so much for your encouraging comment! It's great to hear what you're thinking! Cuddle-switch agrees and says that you still aren't as hyped as he is! :P