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Anonymous
5/11/20, 1:23 AM
lovely
Anonymous
5/11/20, 12:57 AM
I'd love reading the next chapter, hope you're well
5/11/20, 12:32 AM
Thanks! I'm trying to get a good balance between advancing a plausible plot, engaging characterization, and hot, steamy sex. Here's hoping I can keep pulling it off for you guys!
5/11/20, 12:27 AM
A very interesting series. I hope there will be more!
5/11/20, 12:01 AM
Loved it! i was rock hard through the whole story. can't wait for more. I really want to compliment your writing. Your descriptions are definitely on another level, seriously. You aren't monotonous or repetative. I find your writing very inventive and interesting. Please write more.
Anonymous
5/10/20, 11:12 PM
So good
5/10/20, 10:46 PM
Great story. Brilliant idea. There's a novel in this if you felt like going to the trouble.
5/10/20, 10:31 PM
Best one yet!
Anonymous
5/10/20, 10:26 PM
Wish this spent more time on the process of de-masculinization, rather than the muscle building. But also the writing just isn't that strong.
Anonymous
5/10/20, 10:09 PM
fantastic
5/10/20, 9:47 PM
Bro, that was awesome!
Apr 12, 2006
Maccxuel
5/10/20, 9:06 PM
magnífico
Corinthian
5/10/20, 8:54 PM
I've been looking forward to this next chapter, and it was worth the wait - thank you very much!
Anonymous
5/10/20, 8:45 PM
a HAPPY SEXY conclusion... that leaves an opening for more "bro's"!!
5/10/20, 8:29 PM
There'd better be a conclusion to this!
5/10/20, 7:51 PM
Awesome!! Best series I've seen on the site so far. The way you write sex is soooo hot and I love how the mind control theme is present enough to be kinky but fades into the background so the chemistry and romance can be the focus.
Anonymous
5/10/20, 4:56 PM
Amazing idea and writing!
5/10/20, 2:02 PM
Dude has definitely passed something on to Chuck and Dave. I've got a few mental outlines of where this is going but I don't want to jump right too it. I'm thinking of taking this in an Mpreg+hive direction eventually with the nanites completely rewriting male biology, but I don't want it to be obvious to the characters until later. I'll keep it a community story so if people are meh on that they can write something else in this context, but I'm hoping to make it hot and interesting once i get there. In the meantime it's fun writing about these dudes getting off with each other :D
5/10/20, 1:50 PM
You're definitely setting yourself up here for plenty of great action to come! Will cum in his butt satisfy him as much as sucking a cock? Will his need for sperm increase? And, where did this "infection" come from? Is he passing it to others? Does he even know he is infected? Will he start investigating the source? Do you have a full plot line in mind, or are you just writing one chapter at a time to see where it takes you? Can't wait to see more! Thank you for writing!!
Anonymous
5/10/20, 1:44 PM
hot story!
Anonymous
5/10/20, 10:37 AM
yes would love to see more also
5/10/20, 10:24 AM
I really loved this! I agree with the above commenter, it was a refreshing story and perspective (consensual, romantic), but still those fun themes of "theft"/size transfer and changing desires.
Anonymous
5/10/20, 7:49 AM
I'm excited to see how much he loves dick in his ass
5/10/20, 7:02 AM
this has quickly become one of the best stories i've read in a long time! eager to go start the next part now!
Elm
5/10/20, 4:43 AM
Woah, great story bro
5/10/20, 4:00 AM
This was a great story. I enjoy a romantic story of role reversal, particularly one without malice which is a refreshing change of pace. I kept mentally preparing myself for Alex to be a incubus himself, knowingly or otherwise, cause it would have explained why he was different, unaffected, etc. I think it works without that but that seemed like the natural direction, that he was perhaps just using Sifrid as a way to bulk up without having to do the work of seeking out men himself. In any event, it worked all the same and to be honest it was nice that he didn't have ulterior motives.
5/10/20, 3:39 AM
It's not going to be like that; Nacho is torn up about the events in Slave Academy, so no way he's going to do something like that.
5/10/20, 2:42 AM
Please let this not be another Slave Academy. I don't want cliffhangers, I want... loooove.❤️
Anonymous
5/10/20, 2:33 AM
Awesome story. I want to work for a big muscle daddy Sterling type, haha.
May 7, 2020
5/10/20, 1:07 AM
One of the best stories I have read on here for a while - so hot - thank you!