This is a lovely slow-burn and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Really looking forward to seeing this continue!

Still LOVE Paul's NEW MEMORIES, making him the SKINHEAD 'DIRTY BASTARD' he was destined to be ! Wonder if his uncontrollable 'pee-pee' problem is going to get worse & if he'll come to accept he's always been this way [& has always worn a diaper [??] ] : Since Paul never finished school, it shouldn't be long before he totally forgets his previous job, should-it ??? At least not that job, [perhaps a janitor, for such a dumb, backward boi however].......

Yes! One word, one answer about what what I think about this story - YES!. This story is like an answer to a fantasy that I had only recently started to have. The idea of a vr mmo being used to turn straight guys gay and such is marvelous. The idea that mod is what lets the user do that to the other player is amazing. The nature of how this will turn Jesse into a submissive bottom boytoy for Dennis is brilliant. The fact that you tell the story from both Dennis' and Jesse's pov is very entertaining - we see the dominance and the submission. The fact that you mention rimming is spectacular fun, though it could always have more, hehe. The nature of how this might become changed and expanded upon and such is really really great. My hopes is that in the real Jesse starts interacting more with Dennis, becoming his good subby boy happy and willing to take his cock. In the virtual I hope he becomes more and more a good pet, a willing slut. I don't really want humilation but I do like the idea that clothes is reduced and more gay actions are undertaken, including his need to show off his hole for his master. The use of the quest mark is also hot to me and I imagine much fun could be had with quests. But yeah this is brilliant. This is awesome. This is really cool. I like the anthro element of the quest keeper, though i am not so much a fan of the naga as I prefer legged anthros myself, BUT the idea of the NPC monster being the one to start things was fun. I imagine a 'sequel' saga where a bunch of jocks in a frat or something become effected by the mod and made into good boys for either the mod developer or a friend of his. They take on various races in various situations that are quests that need to be solved by gay sex. hehe But yeah, whether any of that or other ideas happen this was extremely hot. The set up, the design, the writing, the characters, the two point of views in one story with both being the main but the dominant getting a major focus, all very super sexy and arousing and amazing. I LOVE, love, love, the general idea, so thumbs up on it all. :)

Really hot, and would like to know what happens when the lock down is lifted

Please continue the series I love it.

I LOVE this series so far, I'm looking forward to see where this goes!

Why am I listed as an author here? I'm not involved in this...

Another great chapter...Just can't wait to read more !!!

I just loved this so much, you're a great writer! I'd very much like to see Dennis making a character inside the game so he could interact with Jese, like a muscular fighter or barbarian, and his mod is still on, so he would steer the game in any direction he wanted but Jese wouldn't know, thinking he is an ally. Dennis could then start making changes on Jese in a way that slowly dominates him, all in a subtle way so Jese, as a straight boy, would accept, saying a lot of bullshit to Jese to justify the changes. Dennis could start by making Jeses in game outfit very slutty, maybe just a jockstrap keeping his hot ass out at all times and some leather straps on his torso that also keep Jeses pink hard nipples exposed all the time. Dennis then start creating situations in which Jese innocently has to show off his cock, ass and hole, even to other players, like bending over and such. He gets more and more sexualized. And Dennis also keeps creating more and more sexual situations for him and Jese that they have to do to complete quests, so he eventually has Jese sucking him off in the game, and he gets to eat Jese's hole out as well when he wants, up until the point he is fucking Jese non stop inside the game.

Nice set up!! Awesome story and thanks a ton!!

This started off amazing! Such a fun idea. I can't wait how this unfolds for the protagonist, the people around him and new people and co-workers he'll meet at the gym...

I'm curious to see if Ben might be a reuccuring fixture in the coming chapters. And I hope poor Chuck is alright,those two should be together

Hey thanks, I have no idea, I'd recommend becoming a member, otherwise I don't know.

Father and Son's relationships is hot!!!

I would like to know more about Feebles! How he came under control? etc.

favorite incubus story. feel you get the method right. pull desires out to make the victim lost or subject to their fantasy part one feels best two for one. while never like your degraded gramps loved method get there. more with the dreams and the smoke doms Also nice. seductively imaginative. Hugh in flesh meeting Josh should be a treat. especially when can tug and claim him. Or may modify himself.

So bizarre and weird and strangely compelling story! As so many stories here make the evil person the winner, it's nice to see a good deal of revenge heaped upon Kyle. I guess Hugh stopped wondering about what's happening and is now just going with the flow. :)

Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful!

I was worried that you'd stopped with this story, but now you come roaring back to life. Great job! keep it up!

I cannot believe I only found you with your latest story. How did I not know of this? I love your themes and scenarios

phenomenal

Fuck yeah ! Cumdump turned into a stud and dickhead looking up to him and lusting for him is so hot ! Wanna see Cumdump make fun of dickhead now that the tables have turned Thanks for this wonderful chapter !

So worth the long wait ! Hopefully won't have to wait long for the next chapter. Officer Cumdump being turned to a confident man is pretty hot. Wonder how he'll play on the next chapter.

Best story I've ever read here in the 6 or so years since I've started!

"Retconned" the last bit of the story (Damian's portion) for an easier transition into Chapter 2. Enjoy this part and the next!

That is a great point, Plymouth! For me, the problem is that my stupid overthinking brain gets in the way. :p I start thinking about the actual jocks and jerks who spout this nonsense, and the consequences, and...well, before you know it, my sex drive has driven away. :p I think that is why I like more fantasy-based stories so much--in those, there's a greater removal from reality, so the thought process can be stopped. Oh, and I had to double-check--Ethan, you're the one behind the Werewolf series! No wonder! That chapter in the psychiatrist's office...brrrrrr. The thought of being tricked into changing your whole identity by someone you trusted, and being reprogrammed with hate and bigotry...it unsettles me to this day. What an excellent writer you are!

OH YES! now we have two alpha cop slaves to play with. I'm glad it's finally Mikey's time to shine. It seems he will have to work quite a lot

nicely done. would love to read further episodes or similar stories.

I truly enjoy fantasies involving a daddy and his son. I enjoy the one between Phil and Roger. The inclusion of Michael adds a dimension that gives Roger another daddy. Although, at first, when Michael entered the story as a challenger for Phil's control, I thought ill of him, but further thought reminds me that he and Roger are the same. However, having addressed this, I still like the story. The key will be to get Michael under his control immediately. There can be no hesitation when Michael steps through the lakeside home's front door. I like the thought that Phil cannot say Michael's trigger, perhaps it should be Phil that, remembering what Michael has done to him, bounds Michael to Roger as a gift. A twist would be that Michael remembers what he did to Phil while being dominated. Also, Roger is in the stronger position because of the three he does not have a trigger. Which brings me to the uncle. He is SLOPPY by allowing the trigger words of two of his patients to fall into the wrong hands. As a therapist who uses hypnosis, wouldn't he have put a safeguard on his patients. Roger is a university student while his uncle is a practicing therapist.In the ensuing story will Roger discover how Michael got Phil's trigger. Also, one possibility is that Roger's uncle is not as unsuspecting or unscrupulous as we would believe. Again, thanks for the fantasy of Roger and Phil.