Recent Comments

6/9/20, 9:22 PM
very hot ;) need more superhero hypno stories honestly
Muscle-Flex
6/9/20, 9:04 PM
This series is hot. Love the way that Andrew's domination and control of Danny and Chris is extensively described. Great humiliated and frustrated dialogue from Danny and Chris too.
6/9/20, 9:04 PM
loved it.
6/9/20, 8:50 PM
Greenwood? That was where -I think it's him- Kevin went at the end of getting the farmers! What happened there? I'm so excited!!!
Anonymous
6/9/20, 8:40 PM
Fun and full of potential!
6/9/20, 8:18 PM
Well, so much interest! Thank you all so much for reading and enjoying and taking the time to post your comments. I'll be working on chapter two, and possibly beyond, very soon.
6/9/20, 8:11 PM
Hey Man. Good to see your work!
Anonymous
6/9/20, 8:00 PM
i love this story! Is there a chance for continuation? Just one chapter is too short for this hot guys!
6/9/20, 7:34 PM
yes! a series please!!
6/9/20, 7:33 PM
I had to take some liberties with poor Ben's knowledge of biosafety protocols :P He's got wild "genius wunderkind" energy though, so I justify it as thinking he's above rules that he's smart enough to see past. The fool. Oh well, he'll get his cumuppance next chapter :D
6/9/20, 7:28 PM
Hot, but it needs to be fleshed out.
Jr
6/9/20, 7:27 PM
more please
6/9/20, 7:24 PM
And now The origin. seriously that guy's lack of contamination protocols even if he wasn't dealing with reproductive injectable pathogens is absolutely disgusting. He even handles the live specimen without gloves? Seriously he was just asking for a breach
6/9/20, 7:14 PM
Love to see more!
6/9/20, 7:13 PM
Well it's your lucky day! The next chapter is just exposition/backstory, though. I promise we'll get back to happy fuckin' soon though!
Papa Werebear
6/9/20, 7:10 PM
I LOVE how much development this story has! I'm eager for the next chapter! Thank you!
6/9/20, 6:55 PM
It'll be interesting to see what happens next back at the village. Great job!
6/9/20, 6:45 PM
So sad, wanted more
6/9/20, 6:40 PM
Man, thanks for all the positive comments! I've been pretty inspired by this one, I even have an ending thought up. I just need a few chapters to get there. Second chapter is written, but as they say, write horny, edit sober.
Anonymous
6/9/20, 5:34 PM
agree with hypnothrill, I'd suggest spending more time with key events
6/9/20, 3:23 PM
Glad you enjoyed :)
Anonymous
6/9/20, 1:47 PM
What a hot story! The humiliation is quite good, so intense! my favourite parts are Captain America sucking that rainbow dildo so intensly on full view, and Bucky happily licking Sam's foot. The self-debasing of the heroes in general is great! It's a hot story, I hope you make another one of heroes in the future!
6/9/20, 12:54 PM
thanks man, I love this!
Captainlordgallifrey
6/9/20, 10:49 AM
This is an excellent series, you are quickly becoming one of my favorite writers. Keep up the great work.
Anonymous
6/9/20, 10:30 AM
Thank you for using the expression "...mind fucked open....." This is one of my favourite expressions because it so accurately describes exactly what the sensation of truly good hypnotism is like... These stories are an incredible turn on. I can't wait to move on to the next chapter. With all the things we can invent these days, why is this machine not a reality? Or is it?.....
Anonymous
6/9/20, 9:56 AM
new chapter pleeeeease :(
Apr 17, 2020
6/9/20, 9:17 AM
more!!!
6/9/20, 7:36 AM
more please
Anonymous
6/9/20, 7:08 AM
Yeah, no, the “it was written by someone else” argument is a lazy excuse. If the sub isn’t a professional writer, then do the editing yourself before you post it. Otherwise you’re disrespecting both him and yourself through poor representation of the message
6/9/20, 6:25 AM
loved it. the portrayal of submission is really good and hor