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6/25/20, 10:24 PM
I think I have a VERY bad track record of not finishing continuing stories...so I prolly shouldn't promise anything here...I still gotta get back to Re-Educator, Retirement, and Cockslut...and I even had a story around Jerry, the homosexual demon dude, in my mind. So, no promises of a continuation here. But there's definitely fodder for more! Rick clearly has a knack for collecting boys, so wouldn't be too hard to consider some of his other victories :P
6/25/20, 10:16 PM
Great story why can't I meet a man like darly or you Sir the author
6/25/20, 10:09 PM
I don't think it's likely that I would be involved in a sequel, considering that I couldn't even figure out how to end the story in the first place! 😂 If Edlam wants to continue it, either on his own or in collaboration with others, I'd be very interested to see where they take it.
6/25/20, 10:09 PM
One of the things that has always puzzled me about this story was how all the guys turn into big ol' himbo bottoms... except Jarod. I mean, I know a LOT of big leather queens. He still could've been big and hairy and into leather, but why didn't he change into a bottom like the others? I know there are Jarod fans in the house -- we heard from one last chapter -- thoughts? Opinions?
6/25/20, 8:03 PM
This is a masterclass in foreshadowing.
Rick's Fan
6/25/20, 7:56 PM
PS: Coq Au Vin's little insert is how I picture Alec and Chris would be in a few months whenever they get desperate enough to want to cum. It got me really aroused and horny thinking how much each boy's willing to give up to get their orgasm (but no shaving please, I don't like completely hairless guys, no matter how submissive they're supposed to be) And It would be so great to see how indifferent would Rick be to their plight as well.
Rick's Fan
6/25/20, 7:52 PM
This was so deliciously erotic. The cruelty of it all was just so orgasmic. I especially love the rude awakening that Steve got for his arrogance, he really deserved to learn his place. I really wish we get to see more of Alec, Chris and Steve's lives afterwards, like more of how their functioning now after Rick has fully fucked up their minds. I want to see Alec and Chris still try to be "straight" even though they are not anymore. I want to see Steve continually be humiliated, abused and treated worse than filth, especially by his brother and his best friend. And I also want to see all the tactics and ideas that Alec and Chris have in order to convince Rick to let them cum. They probably would get a lot desperate over the years and Rick probably couldn't care less at all, so I'm curious to see how the boys are handling that. That would be so hot! Question for the authors: Is it a feasible to expect a follow up sequel? I'm not even sure if its a possibility or if you considered it but I would like to know please. Even if the story is over, I would like to know that too, please!
6/25/20, 7:45 PM
Well, here's an oldie, but a goodie. I remember reading these and your chapter. Not my cup of tea, but it was worth a whack or two. ;)
Rodready
6/25/20, 7:26 PM
btw - my actual all time favorite Onix is "Livin' La Vida Loca" which is some dark, hot shit. Practical magic.
Rodready
6/25/20, 7:21 PM
Wow. The return of Onix, even if it is re-posts. Apart from the inventiveness and humor, he knows exactly how to write - ahem - one-handed fiction that you can come back to over and over again like it is fresh. If he felt like making comeback, the fans would be out in force to welcome him. And Absman - look forward to your extra chapter, dude.
6/25/20, 6:43 PM
What a HOT story! So happy to see another piece from Edlam! But at the same time this is also just a perfect collaboration between two great writers. Your styles complement each other very well and works very well to add some "extra spice" to the usual writing styles that we're used to for each of you. The whole thing just flows smoothly and seamlessly from start to end! I sure would be grateful to see more similar collaborations like this, but I also look forward to new individual works from each of you as well! (Edlam, I'm eagerly waiting for more on your Retirement series! ;) )
6/25/20, 6:15 PM
Wait till you get to the next chapter. "Potential" ain't strong enough a word...
6/25/20, 5:59 PM
As far as I can tell, this is a truly ORIGINAL idea, which is rare in the genre. The writing is intelligent and the eye (nose) for detail makes it work even better. READYTOCHANGE may be the new alpha dog on the block.
Anonymous
6/25/20, 5:55 PM
potential
Anonymous
6/25/20, 5:36 PM
Cliffhanger! I love the muscle growth, esp. the descriptions about bulging chests, butts and legs! Dumbing down - eh, no so enjoyable, but still a compelling part of the story!
6/25/20, 5:26 PM
So Good, Man. Makes me want to be a Cockslut too!
Anonymous
6/25/20, 5:20 PM
I always get freaked out at dumbing down scenarios, because they seem to imply that you always have to make a trade -either skinny/fat and smart, or Jacked/muscular and stupid. This was well written, with the gradual changes to the narrator just nebulous enough that the reader and the narrator weren't quite sure what was changing --- -until it was too late. It was also a nice touch to have his arms lag behind the rest of his body so that he was stoked to pay $10,000 (!!!) to finish the transformation. Chilling story, well executed.
6/25/20, 5:19 PM
And so am I looking forward to the morning XD
6/25/20, 5:00 PM
Hot, hot, hot! I was hard the hole time I was reading it! Can't wait to see what happens with the other jocks!!!
6/25/20, 4:42 PM
This was really cool. I liked his behavior more in this story then the other, he seemed 'nicer' in a fun sexy way. I liked the dynamics of the characters and such. I also liked the rimming though it was too bad, hehe, that it wasn't our pov character that was doing that. By the way, love the pov as the dominant gay guy, so that is cool. Good continuation, very fun and sexy. I hope he realizes that there will be much advantage to keeping them publically seemingly the same as they used to be all the while they get to serve and obey and submit in private.
Anonymous
6/25/20, 2:26 PM
This was great! Glad you added to this series. I hope it keeps going. Wuggles needs to start cuddling someone new. : )
BeefySub
6/25/20, 2:17 PM
that was intense!! more demon transformation stories please!
6/25/20, 1:33 PM
Also, I hope to see more of the city now, so we can see the aftermath of the town-wide wish
6/25/20, 1:04 PM
next part will be awesome, uncle Ben will be in for an interesting day soon
6/25/20, 12:57 PM
> It gives readers a chance to observe and study your literary evolution. I’ve long felt that, maybe 20 years from now, doctoral students will be studying this site to understand what drives some male psyches. > I have a certain amount of pity for the person who decides to catalog my work after my death. I'm a published author IRL (mostly humor) and have made a good side-living writing music/lyrics for a LOT of shows, including two national tours (international if you include the six weeks in South Korea), and a proud contribution to the Edinburgh Fringe Festival a few years ago. As I say, pity the fool who has to figure out where these stories fit into that mess. I also fantasize about an Omnibus, a collection of these stories in printed form -- with illustrations! Oh... to dream.
6/25/20, 12:36 PM
I’m still loving this story. I can’t wait to see what you have planned for us next!
6/25/20, 12:24 PM
This is a PERFECT story. I am begging for a sequel!
6/25/20, 11:36 AM
great chapter! hope the next one would be a cockvore story!!
6/25/20, 11:08 AM
Go for it, @absman420 !! "Oldies but goodies." It gives readers a chance to observe and study your literary evolution. I've long felt that, maybe 20 years from now, doctoral students will be studying this site to understand what drives some male psyches.
Anonymous
6/25/20, 10:39 AM
why can't all straight allies be obliging sex deities?