Recent Comments

9/15/20, 12:47 PM
This is one of those stories that I feel like I could keep on reading the more it progresses, thank you for this good work of writing!
9/15/20, 12:32 PM
Such a creative, humorous, and sexy story!
9/15/20, 10:23 AM
A Mark Goodson/Bill Todman production -- *not*!
Anonymous
9/15/20, 9:25 AM
terrific
9/15/20, 8:46 AM
Loved it! Great premise to have a protective cup be the equivalent of a mask (and to have young men like our protagonists blithely ignoring those safety procedures).
9/15/20, 4:32 AM
i get why the inductions were left out for the most part, making sense because he totally blacks out when under, but I really missed the induction portion of the story. Love the changes to the narrator, would have liked to see more of the degradation of Jackie to his conscious awareness and acceptance of being a huge bottom bitch.
9/15/20, 2:03 AM
me too. definitely underated
9/15/20, 1:37 AM
@Viridian - Unexpected, right? But it’s what came to mind and insisted on being written. @Lusty Stallion - If you watched the movie “Arrival”, it was based on his novella “Story of Your Life”. I’ve got a short story collection of his, and each piece is magnificent in its own special way. @Darmani - I was feeling that too. I don’t view this as a whole story, just a cool idea I wanted to get on paper. @Rawshock - I haven’t seen it - that’s the superhero show on Amazon Prime, right? I kinda picture it as a trauma survivors group meeting or something like that, and ‘Darren’ just wants to help them move on with their new and happy lives.
9/15/20, 1:27 AM
awsome story, i cant wait for the next part
9/15/20, 1:25 AM
As for me it reminded me of The Boys, if the collateral damage were hot instead of horrifying. Loved how the reality changes worked, and loved the idea of "counseling" TF victims to embrace their new lives and forget (or at least stop caring) about their old ones!
9/15/20, 12:36 AM
> Pup Scout is ready for his variant... > Your stream of consciousness was excellent! Good writing -- you win. You'll see the Scenter do his thing next chapter!
9/15/20, 12:21 AM
How about Andrew giving James a few interesting or unique fetish's or kinky quirks ???
9/14/20, 11:59 PM
Hmmm, Pup Scout is ready for his variant. We are thinking Scenter or Implanter. PupScout would make a good Scenter. He appreciates the scent of another man, always keeping enough on himself and searching for it on the men he finds attractive. He knows the seductive power of man scent and with that variant, he would use it well to get men to obey him in service to the Great One. But an Implanter. Oh how he loves the stories of mind control and slavery. Forcing a symbiont on a man as he fucks him into everlasting slavery, would be a powerful weapon PupScout would know how to use wisely and well. But my instinct says that PupScout would long to be the one fucked by the Implanter becoming fused with a symbiont and a slave to his Master Implanter forever. So Scenter it is. PupScout will scent other men. They will discover the scent of other men. He will seduce and control with his scent.
9/14/20, 11:37 PM
neat just felt... abrupt but wish more just not sure how or of
Dec 7, 2019
The_Supernatural_D
9/14/20, 10:59 PM
Mega hot. Manages to roll several more uncommon fetishes into one. Love it.
Lusty Stallion
9/14/20, 10:20 PM
Again Derek - what a great concept. Im gonna have to discover Ted Chiang. Each account is plenty of wank material. Thanks dude & I always love you work
9/14/20, 9:36 PM
Ted Chiang porn. Lovely. :-)
9/14/20, 9:35 PM
this is nice, if this turns into a series, why not have the main character accidentally stumbling in a homophobic though man bar, and turn it into a gay bar and safe heaven to the gay people (and female populating who does not want to be harassed)?
Cracker
9/14/20, 9:22 PM
Send any feedback to gelded_alpha@outlook.com Always welcomed.
Anonymous
9/14/20, 9:22 PM
wonderful
9/14/20, 8:52 PM
@Nutiper - I'm wearing the biggest grin right now that someone else made the connection. Thank you!
9/14/20, 8:51 PM
@Derek, the Limerick story I was thinking about was "Firehose," specifically Chapter 6: https://mcstories.com/Firehose/Firehose6.html
9/14/20, 8:48 PM
whatwhat starts as a very easy stock setting gets filled with character and as such sucks me in it makes me interested in what's going on watching the guy operate and getting to feel of what it is he can do whether it's he's just that charismatic and good at playing and reading people or he's got actual ability. add add in the settingso it feels more robust and we're actually engaging with it obviously things are being set up for excitement later period but I appreciate going that extra mile even if it is just us set up for sex. after all plenty of full stories are setups for their genre or delight such as we want to get to the fireworks factory or the space battles or the one-on-one duel between these two guys but that doesn't mean that we want to neglect setting up their motives capabilities virtues and characteristics that will drive them into a conflict the the same is going for a little romantic adventure I I honestly don't even know why I gave this a try butbut I'm glad I did and I hope your quality both keeps up and you continue to feel encouraged to contribute
Anonymous
9/14/20, 8:39 PM
I enjoyed the story; a breath of fresh air in comparison to a lot of work focusing on revenge, personal gain, or abuse. Thank you.
Nutiper
9/14/20, 8:32 PM
Oh my god Derek, I read this and thought "Am I getting some "Hell is the Absence of God" vibes? No way, I'm being absurd... I'm fabricating a connection that isn't there..." I'm so charmed to discover that the connection actually was there all along! And, honestly, I'm just delighted that there's now a Ted Chiang-inspired erotica on this website. Like, *finally.*
9/14/20, 8:02 PM
@Ruffcub Thanks man! This is just a weird little vignette that popped into my head a couple days ago when I saw someone in the Discord say the word 'bystander' about something. I doubt it's going anywhere, but if a broader story in the universe tells itself, I'll write it down. @Hypnothrill - Thanks man - I don't know the Limerick story you're talking about. I was thinking a lot about Ted Chiang's story "Hell is the Absence of God" when I wrote it. @anons - Thank you sirs! Always appreciate hearing when someone enjoyed it.
Anonymous
9/14/20, 7:38 PM
excellent....love it !!
9/14/20, 7:38 PM
I enjoyed this whole story. Thank you for writing it.
9/14/20, 7:04 PM
That sound like an interesting story! Are you planning on writing more her one day?
Anonymous
9/14/20, 6:40 PM
surprisingly not a bad read. even tho the whole story is in one paragraph. haha