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9/15/20, 3:45 PM
Excellent Alpha take-down story!
9/15/20, 3:20 PM
Great start! Looking forward to more...
9/15/20, 3:09 PM
Need more!!!!
9/15/20, 2:55 PM
Awww....such sweet scenes in this chapter! Liked the surprise ending. Looking forward to the next chapter.
9/15/20, 2:53 PM
Damn, Oscar and Tay had me teary, you really know which emotions to grab, and poor Chris, I'm really hoping it works out for him. Can I just say, I've been reading on sites like this for over 15 years now, and this kind of story, at least for me only comes round once a decade, please don't stop. You're writing is excellent, to the point and heartfelt, and your focus on the emotional attachment is perfect, a story such as this shouldn't just focus on the sexual relationships, which I'm really happy to see. I'm a big fan of this tale and really look forward to the next chapter.
9/15/20, 2:24 PM
"MY COCK CANT BREATHE"...LOL. So wrong!
Anonymous
9/15/20, 2:14 PM
Love the ending! What a mind fuck twist. Would have like the story to be longer, but it was great, I like your writing style and I hope you write more!
9/15/20, 1:06 PM
There are a few things hidden throughout the series so far that will give a sense of what is to come. Andrew's plan is a a simple one. The outcome will not match his intentions.
9/15/20, 1:05 PM
Really enjoyed this!
9/15/20, 12:55 PM
really good story
9/15/20, 12:54 PM
omg. new chapter. do i binge read or ration? Who am i kidding? by Prim! tonight we binge! Ps thanks Gymmuscle, a much needed lockdown escape.
9/15/20, 12:47 PM
This is one of those stories that I feel like I could keep on reading the more it progresses, thank you for this good work of writing!
9/15/20, 12:32 PM
Such a creative, humorous, and sexy story!
9/15/20, 10:23 AM
A Mark Goodson/Bill Todman production -- *not*!
Anonymous
9/15/20, 9:25 AM
terrific
9/15/20, 8:46 AM
Loved it! Great premise to have a protective cup be the equivalent of a mask (and to have young men like our protagonists blithely ignoring those safety procedures).
9/15/20, 4:32 AM
i get why the inductions were left out for the most part, making sense because he totally blacks out when under, but I really missed the induction portion of the story. Love the changes to the narrator, would have liked to see more of the degradation of Jackie to his conscious awareness and acceptance of being a huge bottom bitch.
9/15/20, 2:03 AM
me too. definitely underated
9/15/20, 1:37 AM
@Viridian - Unexpected, right? But it’s what came to mind and insisted on being written. @Lusty Stallion - If you watched the movie “Arrival”, it was based on his novella “Story of Your Life”. I’ve got a short story collection of his, and each piece is magnificent in its own special way. @Darmani - I was feeling that too. I don’t view this as a whole story, just a cool idea I wanted to get on paper. @Rawshock - I haven’t seen it - that’s the superhero show on Amazon Prime, right? I kinda picture it as a trauma survivors group meeting or something like that, and ‘Darren’ just wants to help them move on with their new and happy lives.
9/15/20, 1:27 AM
awsome story, i cant wait for the next part
9/15/20, 1:25 AM
As for me it reminded me of The Boys, if the collateral damage were hot instead of horrifying. Loved how the reality changes worked, and loved the idea of "counseling" TF victims to embrace their new lives and forget (or at least stop caring) about their old ones!
9/15/20, 12:36 AM
> Pup Scout is ready for his variant... > Your stream of consciousness was excellent! Good writing -- you win. You'll see the Scenter do his thing next chapter!
9/15/20, 12:21 AM
How about Andrew giving James a few interesting or unique fetish's or kinky quirks ???
9/14/20, 11:59 PM
Hmmm, Pup Scout is ready for his variant. We are thinking Scenter or Implanter. PupScout would make a good Scenter. He appreciates the scent of another man, always keeping enough on himself and searching for it on the men he finds attractive. He knows the seductive power of man scent and with that variant, he would use it well to get men to obey him in service to the Great One. But an Implanter. Oh how he loves the stories of mind control and slavery. Forcing a symbiont on a man as he fucks him into everlasting slavery, would be a powerful weapon PupScout would know how to use wisely and well. But my instinct says that PupScout would long to be the one fucked by the Implanter becoming fused with a symbiont and a slave to his Master Implanter forever. So Scenter it is. PupScout will scent other men. They will discover the scent of other men. He will seduce and control with his scent.
9/14/20, 11:37 PM
neat just felt... abrupt but wish more just not sure how or of
Dec 7, 2019
The_Supernatural_D
9/14/20, 10:59 PM
Mega hot. Manages to roll several more uncommon fetishes into one. Love it.
Lusty Stallion
9/14/20, 10:20 PM
Again Derek - what a great concept. Im gonna have to discover Ted Chiang. Each account is plenty of wank material. Thanks dude & I always love you work
9/14/20, 9:36 PM
Ted Chiang porn. Lovely. :-)
9/14/20, 9:35 PM
this is nice, if this turns into a series, why not have the main character accidentally stumbling in a homophobic though man bar, and turn it into a gay bar and safe heaven to the gay people (and female populating who does not want to be harassed)?
Cracker
9/14/20, 9:22 PM
Send any feedback to gelded_alpha@outlook.com Always welcomed.