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Jonanator
9/30/20, 11:33 PM
i loved it, hope there is another chapter
Jonanator
9/30/20, 11:24 PM
i sooo loved this story, please, more
9/30/20, 9:35 PM
Cognitohazard! Brilliant! I see someone's spent a little time on the SCP wiki perhaps?
9/30/20, 9:26 PM
Im glad Tuy's working through his emotions and learning to accept both Tuy and Mason as one identity. I hope he and Jace can go visit Tuy's parents soon, I think that would help them both a lot.
9/30/20, 7:56 PM
awesome buildup and execution. makes me actually envious of dan! :-)
9/30/20, 7:33 PM
Easily one of the best stories for this Challenge. Well done. Kind of like a non-violent, sexy version of The Screwfly Solution. I can't help but wonder what happens to the women, though.
9/30/20, 6:14 PM
Nice story HL! I'm not into werewolves, but the scene was so detailed and well-written I couldn't wait to see what was coming next. Great work man! Hope to see another chapter
9/30/20, 5:47 PM
This is incredible! Definitely my favorite Pandemic story so far. The slow mental transformation is expertly captured in the writing (I love how Eric gradually starts describing the men in more complimentary terms), and the strange "letter jumble" effect was a cool tactic. It made me feel like the virus really was slowly peeking through. Great stuff!
9/30/20, 5:22 PM
I want to know the same as Bobby. I kind of want them not to be working with each other but it's just an unexpected thing from Travis's perspective that he just went with.
Somnus
9/30/20, 5:04 PM
A very well written and clever take on the pandemic theme. This has been my favourite writing challenge and i'm glad to see more stories coming through.
9/30/20, 4:51 PM
@little tiny tim. It would be hot, walking in another people shoes could give him a little bit of empathy. @Heru Kane. I had already some ideas about Dell's arc, but I have plenty of time to see how I could make it work.
9/30/20, 4:41 PM
awwwww,they are so sweet. and I really liked the freezing/posing aspect
9/30/20, 4:38 PM
- Anon - I’m more curious about the other son. I honestly would hope to see some kind of twist with him. Maybe he’s like Bob is now, pretending to be an Alpha only around others, but is already a Beta deep down? Maybe he’s gay or bi? Something that makes him stand distinctly apart from the other two. - Can I second this. Like seriously, I would love stuff like this. Him already being a beta would be cool. Him being gay or bi would be awesome. Him actually pretending to be this macho straight alpha would be even better. Maybe he sees what Dan has done to his father and brother and finds it sexy - like fuck yeah, take that! We already have the homophobes and so there being one who is not kind of sounds hot.
9/30/20, 4:32 PM
COME-ON-BRO !!...HAVEN'T WE WAITED LONG ENOUGH FOR YOUR NEXT CHAPTER ??? I'v searched every day for the next part of your story [& I'm not even usually into 'weight gain stories'....but I'v found yours especially erotic !!!
9/30/20, 4:26 PM
I would love to see Dan make Michael into a complete stereotype of a 100% complete FAGGOT !!! Give Michael a 'limp wrist', a lisp, a 'nelly walk' : the whole works !!! TURN MICHAEL INTO A TOTAL 'OUEER-FAGGOT-BITCH',...it will serve him right !!!
9/30/20, 4:03 PM
Thanks for your comments again! @Udems. I'm not very familiar with the term Omega in this context, so I would love to read more about it :) @Anon. Dell's story arc is still a little far, but I agree, I can play a little more with his background ;) @Sexcrab. First of all, amazing name, it cracks me a little! I think it's funny... unless it's your real name. Thanks for your comment. I can relate to being lacking in motivation by not being an English native speaker, but I guess by the comments that I’m doing a decent job so far (or at least mediocre, lol) so I will keep writing. And last, I love your suggestions, I’m still trying to fully figure out Michael’s story arc. :)
9/30/20, 3:14 PM
So excited to read this! Hope you're working on chapter two! Grats and thanks for sharing!
Anonymous
9/30/20, 3:07 PM
Excellent
9/30/20, 2:53 PM
A very well written and hot story. I liked the story's scientific approach to the world change.
Anonymous
9/30/20, 2:30 PM
Parts of the buildup were very hot and the story was competently written, but the ending definitely left a bad taste in my mouth.
9/30/20, 1:16 PM
This might be my favorite Pandemic story yet. I loved the suspense and the narrator's slowly changing perceptions.
9/30/20, 12:21 PM
hey, guys, there is such thing as sperm donation and Artificial insemination, it can keep huamn race from dying
Anonymous
9/30/20, 12:20 PM
this was a much better version of pontypool tbqh
Anonymous
9/30/20, 10:46 AM
This story was just straightforward, and simple. It was sweet and well written. I *really* enjoyed this one. Good job
Anonymous
9/30/20, 10:11 AM
So awesome to see a new chapter. I truly appreciate your work and hope for another one.
Anonymous
9/30/20, 8:28 AM
Wow a gimmick story...
Sexcrab
9/30/20, 8:26 AM
Finally, I could read Summers' House again! My last days were so busy and I finally I finally have time to read your story and post a comment. English is not my native language either, which reinforced my lack of motivation to write here. But it's all over! And I am not disappointed, more than that, I think your story is getting more and more interesting. Some points: The biggest suggestion I have is to find a way for Michael not to be a 100% carbon copy of his father. Everyone's relationship with Dan is a good start: Michael seems more immature, impulsive and cruel than his father, the type who takes pleasure in being violent. So maybe to suggest that Michael fear Dan to some degree? Another suggestion that would be really cool is that when Michael starts to be submissive to Dan, he fears his father's reaction anyway, accepting to be his secret bitch. And the same obviously happening with Bobby. Conclusion: Dan with two hot homophobic males submitting to Dan and one afraid that the other will discover his dirty secret.
Lee
9/30/20, 8:09 AM
I live to serve the Virus
9/30/20, 6:52 AM
Love the focus on SMELL.
9/30/20, 5:47 AM
I audibly "Aawwwed" when he gave Nate the locket and read what was inside. I'm really glad this isn't a one sided relationship either, and that they both have clear feelings for eachother despite the way they came together. This has been a really cute story, and I love each chapter.