Loved this chapter, thought it was extremely extremely hot. Loved Bob going more slutty, bitchy, needy, wanton - so that element is really cool. I like the direction of him being trained into falling in love - that is going to be an interesting story element. (I still am not entirely for him dating Dan, but I do like the elements you are going with.) I am NOT a fan, as a note, of Bob feeling submission towards Michael. The whole daddy son thing is hot but NOT the fact he wants to submit to his crappy son. hehe On Michael and Brad, I am of too minds on that. On one side I LOVED the interaction. Michael obeying was hot, very very hot. On the other side, I don't entirely know if I like Michael falling into submission by obeying someone other than Dan. But yeah, I thought 'stop arguing obey" and Michael doing that was great, really great. Okay, so this might go in a direction you don't want to, lol, but the moment Michael was talking about his bros my mind went to "they need to be tranced by the app into being good gym boys for Dan." hehe Soooo maybe Brad can "keep" Michael, though before that he himself gets controlled so that Dan gets to stay in charge. O the picture, again, two minds. One is that pictures like that are completely fine. Two, well, I don't find that guy that attractive, so its not that it ruined it but it made me go a bit out of the story for a moment. That said, due to the whole nature of the scene and how much a good boy Michael has become I found that really hot. As for suggestions. I think Bob needs to not automatically assume all other alphas are his superior, that maybe its Dan who gets to decide who he needs to serve. This can cut the whole obeying Michael thing. I could see something about feelings and such, cause you hinted at there being more. On Michael, I say Dan needs to make sure he is put into a top position, that its his orders that come first and such. But I can also see something that increasing Michael's pleasure in submission and showing off - something that leads him to stop caring that guys will look at him. (I could also see something leading to him separating a Fag from a Gay Guy in his mind, that is, Gay Men are say dominant and such but 'fags' are submissive straight guys, or something.) All in all this was really hot. Loved the chapter. Loved both Michael and Bob's sections, and also Dan's work to figure things out. PS. Plz more rimming, hehe. :)

GREAT STORY! Can you please add another chapter?

I love this story sooo much.

What an amazing, hot conclusion to this series! I enjoyed it immensely.

There should totally be more to this story, it's hot.

So I think you killed me, I really do. This was such a sexy awesome story. Such a perfect way to end this saga and such. Loved everything about it. The discussion about the mind hack. The nature of the plot. The way that Jese submitted in such a glorious way. The sex, the rimming, the sitting on laps and bouncing, the comments, the well everything. So sexy. So delicious. I really love the plotline. I really love the computer system. Its just so spectacularly awesome. The idea of using a program to hack into someone's mind so that the submission in game flows to the real is just brilliant. So great. So very very great. And again, the sex was awesome. I LOVED the lap bouncing and the rimming and the submission of Jese to Dennis. So great. So perfect.

Love this series so much - can't wait for the next installment!

I live to serve the virus

Damn!!! The game is really flipping on itself and who's the winner is becoming more and more difficult to figure. There is also the fact that Josh still haven't dealt with Bran! Nice return to this story!

Should have guessed it was you who wrote this! Congrats on a well-deserved win!!

Absolutely fan-FUCKING-tastic story!

I wasn't even aware of a lot of the period references until you and Nutiper posted about them. That makes the story all that much more impressive. It take a lot of effort to write something in a different time period. I hope we'll see some more!

Very hot first story, only the hypnosis was a bit too fast. But I'm very intrigued how this will continue!

Oh man, I'm all for a republican event being transformed into a pride rally. Hehe Maybe it could happen next door to a gay club and the gay men now have some subby boytoys. :)

thank you, so, what about a cowboy event or a republican gethering?

This was fun! Honestly though I really want to see another class, maybe not exactly like Benji's, but seeing another guy go through his classes to become perfect for his owner

this is kinda sad toward the end. I hate when couples lose each other...I want revenge on Brady

I'm glad everyone enjoyed this so much! i

F9's domination of Milo is so subtle, I love it. It doesn't take him over and dominate him all of a sudden, it slowly seduces him and convinces him to see things its way. It's a gradual sort of mind-control, and I love it.

about Chad, I think he could use some better company and an upgrade, what about making him more handsome make him the most popular guy in school and make him lead the school anti bullying association? maybe he is on the closet, help him come out, and give him some healthy relationships

This looks like a promising set up with lots of potential!

Now it makes total sense that this was one of your stories, TickledPink. Little scene-setting details like Robert's delivery orders show up a lot in your work. Thanks for another great story--as I say above, I loved this one!

really hoping you'll write a lot more like the ones you've published so far. I'm 100% on board with your kinky side and it's not common at all to find stories in that realm.

Another great chapter! Loved seeing Charles so jaded to everything (while of course still being horny as hell)he made for a really fun pov; and I truly loved Benji's homecoming sweet yet sexy overall loved seeing the variety in the clients/master types and the kinks provided! Will admit the mention of pup training caught my attention, maybe Waters comes back because every boi needs a dog

I'd like to follow Cody and Wesley as they drive deeper in there roles. Also like to Cody go through his programming on top of his new role. And see a boy completely fight the school, maybe Cody wakes up realizing where he is abs fights back.

So now that the anonymous period is over, thank you to everyone who commented, liked, rated, etc. It was surprisingly difficult not being able to respond to comments during the anonymous period. So, thank you.

Thanks El Observador! It's great you like this path 💙 Not sure when I will continue this path (recently I'm working on Path 5.1) but if you have an idea of what you want, you could contribute to the story writing a new cap ^ ^

Thank you for the support everyone. I hope I continue to get so much feedback!

Thanks man. Let's see a few twinks from the most macho, and some of the 'tag along' bullies beefed up into DILF's. Just a couple of thoughts

More Benji! I'd really like to see his dumbed down progression and his need for his Daddy.