Recent Comments

Redcoma1000
2/9/21, 10:24 PM
I love this story. plus this chapter was really worth the wait. I hope then next chapter is just as hot or even hotter then this chapter.
May 4, 2020
2/9/21, 9:57 PM
so ready for the second chapter
Anonymous
2/9/21, 9:45 PM
Amazing writing and really well paced. Can we get some foot fetish and group sex scenes
Anonymous
2/9/21, 9:40 PM
This is so HOT!!! It was definitely worth the wait but I need to see what you will do with these guys. i need MORE soon
Anonymous
2/9/21, 9:34 PM
so happy that this series came back!!! hope to see the soccer player in the future.
Feb 8, 2021
2/9/21, 9:33 PM
I practically shot my load as soon as I saw your name come up on the main page. I hope this got your creative juices flowing to come back to writing more soon!
2/9/21, 8:54 PM
More Flesh Lab
2/9/21, 8:49 PM
really awsome start to the story, looking forward to the next chapter.
2/9/21, 8:34 PM
Love this. Can't wait to read more. Please continue.
2/9/21, 8:28 PM
Interesting start. Like a "message movie" I consider this a "political story" in that the point seems to be less about sex or mind control but more about teaching tolerance of gayness. Your writing makes readers want to strongly empathize with Vince so I'm all for him screwing his dad both in mind and in body. But to keep that empathy don't make him a crazed son seeking ultimate revenge. Make his actions and thoughts just enough to make his father 1) accept gayness and 2) be a real father and support his son to the max.
2/9/21, 8:14 PM
This is maybe my favorite story ever. Would LOVE another like it.
Jonanator
2/9/21, 8:05 PM
hotttttt, please do more to this, it's soooo hot.
2/9/21, 8:05 PM
Very well written ! The backstory and the motivation of the main character is very well established. looking forward to more chapters !
Feb 7, 2021
2/9/21, 8:05 PM
excellent. Can't wait to see what else you come up with.
2/9/21, 6:22 PM
i came a lot of times. this is just do good.
Anonymous
2/9/21, 6:22 PM
I Like the start, I hope things keep going well
Feb 8, 2021
Anonymous
2/9/21, 6:00 PM
Super sexy!!!! Short & sweet
Anonymous
2/9/21, 5:58 PM
So glad you came back to this series! It's super hot, you're a great writer! ❤ I also wouldn't mind a return of the soccer bros, or seeing the uncle or Julio's daddy
2/9/21, 5:18 PM
wow, thats a great chapter!
2/9/21, 4:35 PM
What kind of parents name one kid Dimitri and the other Larry? 😆 I think this is the first story I've read on GSS that has women, who are actually fleshed out characters. It kinda left me a little limp, but I'm assuming they get lesbified later in the series...or maybe sex-changed into twinks for their boyfriends to cuddle. Looking forward to reading the rest of the tale.
Ken
2/9/21, 4:35 PM
WOW!!!
2/9/21, 3:54 PM
This was super adorable and sweet. I would love an epilogue!
2/9/21, 3:30 PM
So fucking hot! 🔥 🔥 🔥 🔥 🔥 Hope you'll submit another chapter soon!
2/9/21, 3:00 PM
Really hot series and I would not mind the bros returning either.
2/9/21, 2:55 PM
I still think this is a good place to lay both CYCLE ONE and KING REX to rest. The lingering questions have been answered, this has an air of finality and completeness. No need to beat a dead horse here... besides, there are several very lively "horses" you are busy with ATM!
2/9/21, 2:02 PM
Great chapter! It was worth the wait, I hope we can see the next chapter soon. Thank you.
2/9/21, 11:33 AM
What's next for me or for Rex? I'm not planning on anymore King Rex stories for a while, that's for sure, but I'm always open. Rex started as a villain until Superion showed him the way (by changing time!) -- that long-redemptive arc needs to stand for awhile before I destroy it. We'll see. As for me, I'm in the middle of a novel -- about 25K words in right now. I'm expanding PHOLUS REBORN from a prose outline to a proper novel.
2/9/21, 11:06 AM
Isn't this Chadmandering?
Feb 8, 2021
2/9/21, 9:45 AM
You're back! :D Shorter than usual but so damn hot! I'm so glad I wandered here again when bdsmlr is still down