Recent Comments

Blake1970
11/10/16, 5:23 PM
Where are you, Philip???!!! Where is the next chapter???!!! :)
cutlerfan
11/10/16, 1:24 PM
So he's just part of the Think Tank...forever? What's the point of enslaving these men? I can't see any good in this.
11/10/16, 12:23 PM
Arousingly scaring, the process is really detailed, what a way to be integrated! Hope John would rest in endless orgasms. On a side note, I hate to see some corrupt corporation tricked good guys :(
Gs01123
11/10/16, 10:45 AM
Thanks for the lovely comments, and part two will be coming soon :D
Nov 7, 2016
Anonymous
11/10/16, 6:08 AM
It's close to "My Roommate", but there's a brute thing about this story. Having said that, this reads as a one installment piece. Not every story on this site has to be episodic.
Anonymous
11/10/16, 4:35 AM
Is the Epilogue ever coming?
Master C's slave
11/10/16, 1:16 AM
when its part 2 coming
Nov 7, 2016
Anonymous
11/9/16, 11:21 PM
This is exactly the type of story I come to this site for. Clueless transformation.
tomozco
11/9/16, 10:38 PM
Very interesting, what's the real intent behind this Habitat? Looking forward to the next part!
TheWanderer
11/9/16, 6:10 PM
His naked when he woke up didn't he? And he doesn't mind, does he? =w= Nice~
Nov 7, 2016
Rehash but still hot
11/9/16, 3:41 PM
This is a rehash of Derek William's My Roommate Calls me Nicknames, but still hot.
11/9/16, 1:28 PM
Doing great!
Anonymous
11/8/16, 9:59 PM
Haven't read anything entirely like fhis before. I like the way you've made this story parody the actual sims games and how "glitchy" they can be. The way they zone out before perfoming their actions and such is fun to imagine happening in real life. So has this technology infected everyone through mobile device or what causes their irl counterparts to react when they presumably have never played the same thing? Is it a world wide sentient AI that likes to use humans for its pleasures? Whatever it is, keep it up.
Anonymous
11/8/16, 9:43 PM
Creative writing --- you're telling a story. If I have to use my imagination for every little detail, where's the creativity?
Anonymous
11/8/16, 8:49 PM
I love your writing style, this story especially. I get wood just by imagining what the conclusion will be like.
UchihaDEMS
11/8/16, 6:44 PM
A little bit cringy but acceptable, I want to know where this will be going. I would love to see more slaves added, like more pals of the football team or even adults like the coach or the dad of Eric! That would be very hot!
Master C's slave
11/8/16, 6:21 PM
interesting story, is there going to be a Part 2
Anonymous
11/8/16, 2:31 PM
looking forward to more stories.
Anonymous
11/8/16, 2:05 PM
Please continue!
Anonymous
11/8/16, 1:49 PM
wonderful. So glad you've gotten back to writing. Can't wait for the rest of this!
Anonymous
11/8/16, 1:34 PM
Good story nice start. Like to read more!!
11/8/16, 1:18 PM
The cliffhanger...please continue it soon ! BTW, Not only Garret, but also John & Mike both have some special talents, so I guessed the purpose of the habitat is to get great minds and integrated them in a big hive/database for whatever devious reason.
Kyle
11/8/16, 11:27 AM
Excellent set of stories! Well done. And thank you.
Nov 7, 2016
Anonymous
11/8/16, 10:18 AM
Doesn't really make sense how his mind got fucked...but came to it anyway XD
Kyle
11/8/16, 7:30 AM
Fantastic addition. Love the world building, making sense that men would try to have as many kids as they can before their change. Love that our two travellers haven't been conditioned to respond to Rationall and their pheromones instantly overwhelm the natives into primal rutting. Great addition. Looking forward to the next instalment to see where things go.
Nov 7, 2016
Anonymous
11/8/16, 7:03 AM
This needs a sequel like asap
Nachtigall
11/8/16, 5:34 AM
I see a lot of potential in this story. It would be interesting if Marcus could alter Eric's memories using the chip. Also, a bit more details as to how the chip was attached to Eric would help.
Anonymous
11/8/16, 5:15 AM
Amazing, as usual. I can't wait to find out what happens next.
Anonymous
11/8/16, 5:04 AM
Great story!! Loved it!!
Anonymous
11/8/16, 3:52 AM
I hope that Maybe they notice the phone and get him under that way