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10/9/23, 6:39 AM
This was sensational. So hot.

10/9/23, 8:14 PM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Thank you! I want to experiment with different themes. I'm glad you like this!
10/9/23, 7:25 PM
Very well written and hot, excited for more!

10/9/23, 7:38 PM
@[Namething](/user/show/10010682) I've got the second chapter already awaiting approval so you won't have long to wait :)
Anonymous
10/9/23, 5:50 PM
amazing. would love a sequel
Ab3
10/9/23, 5:09 PM
Need more instalment

10/9/23, 5:35 PM
@[Ab3](/user/show/10036556) I’ll let you know when a new chapter is up :)
10/9/23, 3:13 PM
This is amazing. Excessive precum? Cum inflation? Massive dicks? _Oral knotting?_ Not to mention the eloquent prose and the kind of well-done minority rep you don’t normally see on a porn site! This is everything I love to see and write. I’ll be eagerly looking forward to more.

10/9/23, 5:03 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) Hey, thank you for the kind words! I've enjoyed a lot of your own works in the past so to hear that you're eager for more is high praise. Though in complete honesty, I don't think I'd consider Pecos' *dick* massive--it tops out at around 8 inches, which is well above average but still pretty reasonable within context. I wanted to play around a bit with that mismatch of "mostly-reasonably sized dick" and "completely oversized balls" because...well I dunno! It seemed neat!

10/9/23, 5:27 PM
@[Houndfiend](/user/show/908250) Hey, I'm always excited to know that someone liked my works, thanks for saying so. And, yeah, maybe I plugged in my usual vision of 'oh it's a big dick' too fast, but then, one always does a little bit of skimming when they read erotica. I dig the idea of the mismatch, though! It's always fun to subvert what seems usual.
10/9/23, 5:22 PM
This is a great start. Can't wait.
10/9/23, 3:52 PM
This is great stuff. Can’t wait for more!! Also hope he’s not the only one with this problem haha

10/9/23, 5:04 PM
@[Kibble The Satyr](/user/show/10010407) Thanks so much for saying so! I guess you'll just have to keep reading to find out lmao
Anonymous
10/9/23, 4:22 PM
Amazing!
Jun 29, 2023
10/9/23, 3:55 PM
Very nice start of a mindcontrolled odysee! I enjoyed how the three guys standing mindless in front of him. I'm looking forward to read more, please! :-)
10/9/23, 3:18 PM
I’m digging this new setting for the story; it’s got fun twists and I feel like it has even more fodder for hot dynamics. It’s great to see someone leaning into the casual sex world vibes—nobody cares that Travis stopped working to have sex! I dig it.
Anonymous
10/8/23, 6:23 PM
Should have left perfection alone. This is just awful.

10/8/23, 6:32 PM
@Anonymous Kisses <3<3<3

10/9/23, 2:51 PM
@Anonymous Hey, now…Edlam took a risk making a story in someone else’s universe and provided me with my first bit of fan fiction ever, which is something I have wanted ever since I started writing. It might not be your cup of tea, but that doesn’t make it bad. *I* think he’s doing a fabulous job with the characters, even if he takes them in directions I, in my limited way, wouldn’t have thought of. And never forget that LBAH featured a Jolly Green Giant possessed by an angel exploding a can of beans all over the protagonist…the story is a lot of things, but *perfection* might be a bit optimistic. ;)
10/9/23, 2:14 PM
So so so good!! 🤩🤤🤤
10/9/23, 1:45 PM
Fuck this story is so perfect!!! Another super hot chapter. I get so happy whenever I see a new update from you here. Thank you so much for writing it. Tyler eating Oliver out was so freaking hot. Can’t wait to see both studs finally fucking the dumb twink’s ass. Well done!
Elm
10/9/23, 10:49 AM
What a fantastic story! So so very good!

10/9/23, 1:38 PM
@[Elm](/user/show/567745) Heya, thanks - since I started this series due to the Summer Challenge prompt, I've been thinking that the Halloween Challenge would be a good time to continue the story (with a theme-appropriate twist, too, not that a series about witches needs it, lol). So stay tuned...
10/9/23, 1:09 PM
Keep the chapters coming to keep us cumming.
Anonymous
10/9/23, 1:04 PM
Awesome. Can't wait for the next part
Tom
10/9/23, 8:17 AM
Another hot story!

10/9/23, 12:18 PM
@[Tom](/user/show/1813716) Thank you!
Martin
10/9/23, 8:46 AM
There was a bit of confusion about how you're naming your series. In the first chapter, you used "Kingdom of Ardenne" as the series title, as for the subsequent chapters you used "Becoming a Man" as the series title. That confused the system and our approval team. I've just fixed that: All your chapters are now in the series "Kingdom of Ardenne". Please use that series name for subsequent chapters. And thank you for publishing your stories on our sites!

10/9/23, 9:13 AM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Thank you! I was confused by the Series/Chapter system and I definitely made it worse by totally rewriting chap 1. Thanks for taking charge and consolidating them!
10/8/23, 5:55 AM
Wow...two new posts from Edlam in the same day, I must be imagining this! :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye: I loved the 'Choosing Tanner' ending too, and it only made sense and fitting for you to come up with a follow up to it! Looking forward to how you'll carry on this great series with your flare! Lol...but you also realized that you just opened yourself another tab to your growing list of pending stories...so much depravities, so little time! But I'll patiently wait for whatever you come up with next because I'm sure it'll always be some good stuff! :laughing::+1::+1::+1:

10/8/23, 7:40 AM
@[tomozco](/user/show/13902) Honestly, I'm feeling the writing bug. I'm going to make sure to get a couple chapters done of Sinfulfillment tomorrow to get a good amount ready for the coming weeks, then work on my commissioned story a bit to get it to a good place, then I can focus more on this story, which I'm crazy excited about. To me, Love Begins at Home is a legit masterpiece of erotic gay hypno porn. I'm so eager to try to add to it and give it justice <3

10/8/23, 8:59 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) hi edlam. I love all your masterpieces. And if there will be more chapters on Joey, daddy and cockslut?

10/8/23, 6:33 PM
@[jerryhot](/user/show/10039519) Eventually, yeah...just a lot of things in the air right now lol

10/9/23, 6:21 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Great to hear that you're in the mood to write again! I'll have to get back to writing as well, I'm guilty of leaving my stories hanging as well. Sounds like you have quite a few new projects underway for your attention, but don't forget your older ones too! I'm still looking forward to the continuation of Retirement and Re-Educator. :wink:
10/9/23, 5:31 AM
I saw that DP-072! And maybe, especially if you're a good boy. :upside_down_face:
10/9/23, 4:05 AM
So fucking hot!
10/9/23, 3:58 AM
Hey, guys ... I just want to thank you all for reading my story. This is the concluding chapter. I always planned this to be a three-part story. It's my belief (or hope) that this "Order" would be a never ending cycle. The men become tuned into a reception, or frequency. Then they undergo both a mental and physical transformation. And once transformed, men are unified into a community. Communion just doesn't pertain to religion. Google defines it as: "the sharing or exchanging of intimate thoughts and feelings, especially when the exchange is on a mental or spiritual level." If anything, I have to again credit Martin for maintain and allowing all of use of this site. This website really is our communion between all of us. It brings us, and joins us all together. And of course, I definitely am super thankful to [BVSTARD.AI](https://www.instagram.com/bvstard.ai/). I cannot emphasis how horny, how much I stared and scrutinized over every aspect of his art. I told him it hurts to look at it. I'm not kidding. I want to be in one of his images, I want to be wearing that rubber ... I will gladly be in some kind of kink fantasy. Lastly, thank you for reading this. As I said, I believe that me (as the writer) and you (as the reader), we briefly have a connection. You allow me to share my thoughts, and my intimate ideas. I really have nowhere else to share but on this site, and no one to with but you. So thank you for being part of this. I've been writing since 2004, and I've loved every time I'm able to write out one of my strange ideas. I hope I never stop writing.
Chasm
10/9/23, 2:08 AM
Eagerly awaiting the next chapter of this series! I’m fine waiting if you are making it extra hot 😉
latexy pup drone 072
10/9/23, 12:36 AM
I wonder if hound and pup drones canonically are like big and lil brother drones :3!!!!!! *pup walks around looking for any hound drones to play with!*
Djm
10/8/23, 11:28 PM
What happened to part 3?
10/8/23, 11:03 PM
Beautiful as always
10/8/23, 8:05 PM
I wanted Chuck to be the bottom!
10/8/23, 8:03 PM
So gooooood!!! I can't wait to see more unwind. Such a lore heavy, intricate world you're creating!
10/8/23, 7:50 PM
Very hot first chapter, i love it!
10/8/23, 6:23 PM
Please continue this series!