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Anonymous
10/28/23, 12:51 PM
What a hot chapter! I'd love to read more about Mikey's daddy. Reading about his fat, hairy daddycunt getting rimmed by younger fratboys was great!
10/28/23, 8:45 AM
Agree with the above, really love that you started bringing some actual pathos in there. That's what separates some of the true classics of the genre from basic spank fodder. This is a really creative an exciting spin on a pretty standard MC story - fantastic work drawing the absolute best out of the material!
10/28/23, 8:33 AM
Me gusta mucho la idea... igual le falta pulir un poco la escritura, pero vas por buen camino :3 sigue escribiendo, ya quiero la siguiente parte 💙
10/28/23, 8:28 AM
Love the Captain Underpants thing. I used to read those with my brother when I was young. Far hotter when it happens to the school jock than some dumpy principal!
Rordrigo
10/28/23, 2:49 AM
Awesome! I hope you do a part 2 and give more detailed sex 🥵🥵

10/28/23, 7:28 AM
@Rordrigo A part 2 probably, detailed sex probably not :laughing:
10/28/23, 5:31 AM
This was so freaking hot! The dominating factor is so strong in this Series. And the dominated characters and their oblivious transformations were very well detailed. You are a very skillful writer!
10/28/23, 2:01 AM
I love this story, the distorted sense of reality that the family has is fascinating, specially because while Ethan completely accepts the reality that he is deeply hypnotized, Matt and Sean have more or less instead convinced themselves this is just what their reality is. Great chapter overall~
Oct 27, 2023
10/27/23, 9:42 PM
Great story! Quick and dirty with an excellent twist. Well done.

10/27/23, 10:41 PM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) Thank you! I really appreciate it. Let me know if there's a storyline you'd like to see -- love working for approval ;)
10/3/22, 8:41 PM
Hello folks ok so I kinda lost my confidence. I felt I was a bad writer and can’t seem to get into writing. Can you 1 comment if you’d like more and 2 if you are an experienced dominant please contact me below too. I’d like to speak to you

11/29/22, 3:59 AM
@[Clown boi](/user/show/309338) Please write more this is a hot story. Thank you.

Anonymous
5/2/23, 8:35 PM
@[Redneck Cubby](/user/show/2354224) Write more!!!

anon
10/27/23, 8:08 PM
@[Clown boi](/user/show/309338) hope you are seeing these eager comments! would love another chapter in this saga
10/27/23, 5:40 PM
Oooof. No idea why I hadn’t read this before. Good lord, it’s well done! Hoping for more from someone. I’ve got so many stories I’m working on right now, but, man, this universe would be fun to add to!

10/27/23, 7:53 PM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Was really hoping someone would shoulder writing something for *me* for a change but so far it doesn't seem to have panned out! :P Thanks for the kind words, and glad you enjoyed!
10/27/23, 8:45 AM
Need chap 4 like right now

10/27/23, 7:29 PM
@[ikpooo](/user/show/10009477) Hi! Chapter 4 was in progress, but I have had to temporarily suspend everything to focus on carrying out a personal project that must be finished around November 20th. After that I will be able to focus again on continuing with my stories. I'm very sorry for the delay.
Anonymous
10/27/23, 2:15 PM
Excellent work

10/27/23, 6:56 PM
@Anonymous Thank you :smiley:
10/27/23, 6:51 PM
Perfection.
Ab3
10/27/23, 6:14 PM
That's an awesome part but needed more
10/27/23, 5:00 PM
Such a funny read!:joy: The wanking rating not gonna be gret, tho.😔

10/27/23, 5:46 PM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) It's never high, I don't write what people find hot :joy:
10/27/23, 11:22 AM
This was a bit of a surprise! I love a good farce, and "dad unintentionally turns half the town gay while just trying to protect his son" is adorable and hot.

10/27/23, 5:11 PM
Thanks @[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419)! Sometimes I can’t resist the wholesome shit :)
10/23/23, 4:14 AM
I think this is going to by Trihards undoing. He had Mister Freedom, if he didn't go for Henry he would have won

10/23/23, 12:55 PM
@[Hypnofiend23](/user/show/2528896) Ahhh, it's fine! What could go wrong!? **Tri-Hard** has numbers on his side and he _knows_ Henry wants to give in to him! I'm sure everything is going to go just as he plans it,...

10/23/23, 3:11 PM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) Nick is stronger than Tri-Hard will ever be. Henry couldn't give in to him even if he wanted to

10/23/23, 3:45 PM
@[Hypnofiend23](/user/show/2528896) I _do_ suppose **Tri-Hard** should ask Nick's permission before he plays with the guy's toys again,... Don't think he's getting it, though!

10/23/23, 4:32 PM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) Unless Tri Hard gets Nick first and Henry has to overcome it to save them both. Fun to see a Dom fall even if he rises again.

10/23/23, 4:55 PM
@[Buck Whitman](/user/show/10001298) I _do_ love to see one dom fall to another,... but, hey! Who knows what'll happen,... :3

Anonymous
10/27/23, 12:00 AM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) I think I can shed some light on this question! ++Reasons Tri-Hard should win++ > **1. He's about to start mass-recruiting his Supersoldier army.** The more, the merrier. > > **2. Each of Tri-Hard's goons gets a nice, squeaky rubber uniform.** And black rubber is always in. *Always*. ++Reasons Nick should win++ > **1. Nick is a side of Grade-A college wrestler beef in the prime of his life.** Tri-Hard is a gross old nerd. > > **2. Nick's ten times the Dom Tri-Hard will ever be.** Nick says "bitch" and all the men in a five mile radius instantly become pregnant with his babies. Tri-Hard has to rely on date rape drugs that he wasn't even smart enough to develop himself, and his slaves _still_ talk back to him. > > **3. Nick's also a better villain than Tri-Hard, without even trying.** In _one day_, his actions directly led to the downfall of heroes Tri-Hard spent _twenty years_ fighting. If Tri-Hard hadn't been lucky enough to stumble onto Nick's sloppy seconds, he'd still be fumbling around in the dark and getting his third arm handed to him by Freedom. And if Carl hadn't been so disturbed by seeing what Nick did to his son, he wouldn't have fallen for such an obvious trap. > > **4. Nick can just steal Tri-Hard's technology and reprogram his slaves,** but Tri-Hard will _never_ be able to steal Nick's swagger or humongous dick. > > **5. Nick is a closeted sociopath with an endless appetite for depravity and humiliation.** When he gets bored, it only motivates him to invent creative new ways to torture his slaves. Tri-Hard is just a man-child throwing a fit because people were mean to his daddy or whatever. He's constantly discarding slaves and abandoning plans because he doesn't actually know what he wants outside of his petty revenge fantasy. It's telling that just as he's finally about to get everything he's ever dreamed, he suddenly starts thinking about retirement. > > **6. Unlike Tri-Hard, Nick is a responsible owner and knows how to take care of his toys.** He'll make sure to give Henry _just_ enough TLC so he can keep breaking him over, and over, and over... > > **7. Nick has beaten Henry every time they've fought.** He's beaten all three of Henry's personas -- Duty Boy, Super Bitch(as Tri-Hard's slave), and Henry himself. Meanwhile, we've explicitly seen Duty Boy beat Tri-Hard once within the story, and it's likely he's helped his dad beat him multiple times in the past. Why does all of that matter? Well, Henry's nothing if not a dirty little slut who secretly loves losing. If he wants to _keep_ losing, he needs to stick with the Master who has a proven track record. > > **8. As an athlete and admirer of superheroes, Nick treats subjugation as an exciting challenge.** He doesn't mind idolizing and building Henry up because it just boosts his own ego and prowess that much more when his conquest (inevitably) succeeds, spurring him *and* his "victim" on to greater heights of domination, submission, and pleasure. Tri-Hard *claims* to crave a challenge, but his actions show he's a petty, vindictive leech who tears down others to cover up his own weakness and gloats over unearned victories. > > **9. Nick is such a chad, Henry's mom couldn't help but give him her blessing _even after_ seeing the sick stuff Nick did to him.** And nobody takes Henry without his mom's permission(she knew about the situation with Tri-Hard but decided to let it play out so Henry could get his little tantrum out of his system). > As you can see, the answer is quite clear. :relieved: Thank you for cumming to my TEDD(**T**ryhard **E**ats **D**onkey **D**ick) talk.

10/27/23, 5:07 PM
@Anonymous A very well considered piece of homework. I can see you read and understood the source material well enough, formulating your answer based on a fair assessment of the key figures. However, I believe you could have benefited from taking the analysis one step further by considered the reasons each of the two men should _lose_, not just win. Nick should clearly win, for example, because he it the 'better man', yet for that same reason it would be far more enticing to see him beaten and brought down. 9/10, great work!
10/27/23, 1:56 PM
Sorry to see this was the last (latest episode a few years ago) hopefully more one day?
10/27/23, 1:23 PM
I liked this story, it was well written and toxic masculinity is an important topic to be talked about. I liked the little episodes of Andrew's childhood, the bit about the toy was my favourite but I could relate to the scraped knee one most. I was a little confused about the constant references to the temperature. Was this an attempt to tie back to the idea of warmth in "warm summer rain" and how it isn't so bad? Also justice for Sergio 🥺

10/27/23, 1:34 PM
@[A Possession A Day](/user/show/1060663) I just wanted to keep the fact that it is summer in the reader's mind, hence why it was mentioned multiple times. In a medium without visuals, it's a bit tricky to keep certain details alive as the story progresses. Afterall, it is kind of relevant to the ending scene. If it was a cold shower, it would probably be more uncomfortable. But it was specifically supposed to be not a big deal.
Oct 26, 2023
10/27/23, 5:10 AM
So so naughty! bravo!!

10/27/23, 1:23 PM
@[Rock Creek Werewolf](/user/show/10002145) Many thanks.
Oct 26, 2023
10/27/23, 4:48 AM
I do hope you are going to continue this - it’s refreshingly original compared to a lot of the generic tripe on here. Well-written, too. I want to know what happens to King Triton next!

10/27/23, 1:23 PM
@[M. Greene](/user/show/130901) Thank you. I don't currently have a continuation planned but you never know. You can rest assured though that poor King Triton is probably in for a doozy!
10/27/23, 11:55 AM
Oooh, they are in trouble, hopefully nothing happens to the people who got slammed against the wall
MervF
10/27/23, 5:18 AM
Love the magic fart component! Made me spray hard!

10/27/23, 10:59 AM
@MervF Thanks, glad I made you spray your load! 💦
10/27/23, 10:30 AM
Nice first entry. Can't wait to read more young guys being controlled. Good work.
10/27/23, 9:45 AM
Can't wait for the next chapter to come out.
Sep 6, 2023
10/27/23, 6:15 AM
Great story
10/27/23, 5:59 AM
That was amazing. Well done!!
10/27/23, 5:05 AM
😍😍🤩🤩
10/27/23, 4:03 AM
GREAT story!!!
10/27/23, 3:47 AM
This is the BEST there is... WOW!