Recent Comments

5/25/20, 11:14 AM
Gotta say I’ve been really into this story... but the dark end to this chapter kinda ‘softened’ my esteem...
Evan
5/25/20, 10:47 AM
Really excited to see you continue this. Thanks. Welcome back.
5/25/20, 10:18 AM
oh man,while I can totally understand Kit and his reservations I really hope he keeps going maybe one of these guys is a genuinely nice fit for him?
5/25/20, 10:01 AM
@Hypnothrill - Ah, yes, sorry about that. I forgot to add those tags.
5/25/20, 9:52 AM
oh,I like the inclusion of the chairman and the dean hope they'll get huge too
5/25/20, 9:47 AM
Like some of the other commenters, I thought this was well-written, but not my cup of tea. I was expecting something very different from the story description and tags. Since, as you say, the story is mostly about "complete powerlessness and degradation," it would have really helped to have included the "Humiliation" and "Domination" tags.
5/25/20, 9:37 AM
the coach sounds like a lovely bull I'd like to meet
5/25/20, 9:18 AM
I love big pecs and bulls that need milking
5/25/20, 9:17 AM
Thanks, guys. As I said, I understand the story's not for everyone. For me, it's precisely what Cutlerfan and Maxdc pointed out that make the story hot. I rather enjoy that fantasy of complete powerlessness and degradation xD. That being said, I appreciate you taking your time to comment, regardless!
5/25/20, 9:10 AM
awwwwww,they are really cute
5/25/20, 8:40 AM
I have to agree with the other commenters, the fact that homophobic jock bullies have scot-free, consequence-free lives in reality is why this story puts a sour taste in my mouth. but it was very well written
5/25/20, 7:48 AM
Something different from the usual life-ruining stories up here. I love it! It's so cute!
Anonymous
5/25/20, 7:18 AM
I never want this story to end
5/25/20, 6:13 AM
Thanks again for a great story! i expected to read your series all the way through without stopping, but life got in the way (more than once). i love your descriptions and the way you make them feel like so much is happening in your mind as it is massaged, tranced and trained. i also love that the inspiration for this was a role play scene with your actual Master. Somehow for me that fact that you are living a real M/s or D/s life outside the story makes the story feel more real as well. So many of the things you allude to, like how things feel, what you are hearing, the smell of Master's scent and particularly his groin, that your Master keeps your hair longer so he has something to grip when he want to direct your head, that your Master has no use for a slave who is unable to manage independently when needed, that you have needed mind control training to overcome your former tendency to switch --- all these things and more feel so familiar to me, so similar to my own perspectives and feelings that the story feels so completely real. That you actually have a favorite hypnosis induction makes me want to meet you and your Master, and learn from the two of you. i would love to know what you do for your actual hypnosis sessions in terms of other mind training techniques you use in conjunction (if any). (i also have a favorite hypnosis Master, unfortunately only through his standard published recordings. In my favorite session i have combined 4 of his recording into one longer session and overlaid they whole thing with binaural beats. i will definitely be listening to your favorite induction to give it a try.) Keep up the good work! i don't think there is anything else on the site quite like this story.
Anonymous
5/25/20, 5:54 AM
Good story! Hope the next chapter will be here soon! I wish I could have a boyfriend like that..
5/25/20, 5:43 AM
aww, this whole series is genuinely quite cute! keep up the good work!
5/25/20, 5:35 AM
These two make up the cutest couple ever!
Anonymous
5/25/20, 5:20 AM
Can't wait for the next part!
5/25/20, 4:49 AM
No wonder I was confused! Tonally, that ending is so much darker than the rest of the chapter, which is mostly about Jack and Steve's positive responses to being "upgraded" by the suits. I had just assumed that the suits were telling the truth when they said, "“Nick and Ben will be sent back to their own lives...They have served their purpose and will not be harmed." "
Ken
5/25/20, 4:43 AM
Really liking this story line. You could krrp it going for quite awhile. LOVE IT.
5/25/20, 4:17 AM
The story was well written but Jocks have more than enough power in the real world.
Zac
5/25/20, 4:14 AM
Definitely need a second chapter! Why not further the seduction or even have the hole seduce two straight students at the same time? Could be fun.
5/25/20, 4:12 AM
hot story are there more parts coming?
Zac
5/25/20, 4:04 AM
My favourite mc author. Love how you always pace the hypnosis and seduction so well. Can't wait for the next chapter of this and Hypnohole.
Anonymous
5/25/20, 3:53 AM
This is so hot! Please make more
Anonymous
5/25/20, 3:46 AM
wow, i've gotta have more!!! i mean, the story came to a very satisfying conclusion so i completely understand if you wanna put it to bed while its still got a nice little bow on it, but part of me still hopes we'll get a sequel of some kind. and what the hell, i do have a tremendous weakness for big smug formerly straight men getting mindfucked and ending up in a genuinely fulfilling relationship with a smaller but very experienced top
Phil
5/25/20, 3:28 AM
I love this! Please please make more
5/25/20, 3:25 AM
@BlindSeer0: Glad you enjoyed that. I wasn't kidding when I said quarantine helped inspire me :-D
5/25/20, 3:11 AM
Thoroughly enjoyed every bit of this story! Well done! I'll be looking forward to more!
Anonymous
5/25/20, 2:53 AM
I loved this and really want to see what happens next!