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time-to-occur
11/14/23, 1:12 AM
I really enjoyed the deep dive into the lore of Fractured and the manufacturing of HIMBOs. I'm super curious to see what happens next. So far it's been almost wholesome, but these two definitely aren't where they're supposed to be!

11/14/23, 1:30 AM
@time-to-occur Exactly!
11/14/23, 12:26 AM
Catholic priests are not allowed to marry, so he wouldn't have a wife or kids. You're confusing the different religions. Protestant ministers can marry, but they aren't priests and they aren't called 'father,' they're called 'Reverend.'

11/14/23, 12:32 AM
@[Hypno-boy](/user/show/10023526) Eh, the Jesus crowd has too many franchises to count, and I don't have the mental fortitude to learn more about their lore and policies. That said, I do admit that 86ing the wife/kids would make things simpler on my end and not continuing a trend I've seemed to have developed in my writings. So I think I'll go back and pull that. Thanks :3
Nov 11, 2023
11/13/23, 11:42 PM
I really enjoyed this! It was very sweet and like other readers have said, I loved the little touch of the things that were already true not disappearing. Nicely done!
Anonymous
11/13/23, 11:31 PM
Hopefully another chapter soon
mic
11/13/23, 10:13 PM
fucking hot ideas, please more, great
11/13/23, 10:05 PM
Glad to see you back at work with this series. No apologies are needed for taking time away from writing and the technological hiccups; we understand completely that life can get in the way. I definitely liked this one and the scout uniform as punishment evolving into the police uniform. I enjoy the way you're able to develop this story and the various attires in different ways. Again, glad to see you back at work and l look forward to the next part of the story.
11/9/23, 4:58 PM
This start was incredible. Frankly, I've never liked the "religious man being punished for gay revenge" premise as it's usually too dilettante and one-sided, but here it worked well enough. Not to mention that the means used for mind control is simple, and honestly I think it's very good, sometimes that's what I want to see (recently, many writers have been appearing with very complex means of mind control or who narrate their point of view in a very exquisite, which unfortunately I'm not always willing to read). I really liked what I saw so far, looking forward to part 2. PS: "Yes, My son". Please don't take it away. My dick got hard every time I imagined a sexy daddy saying that.

11/13/23, 9:54 PM
@[Sexcrab](/user/show/10027159) Thank you so much for the very kind words ^w^ I’m very happy you enjoyed this, but I do have a couple of questions. Like, what do you mean by most stories like this are ‘one-sided and dilettante’? I’ve looked up the definition several times, and I STILL can’t wrap my head around it; and if I was lucky enough to avoid that folly, I’d like to know how you mean so I can stay on that side of the rail again. I had a couple of notions as to where I might take the direction of this short story, but I keep second guessing myself and it’s slowing me down. I want to get a feel for what might fly here and which ideas I should shelve, if you don’t mind o3o
mic
11/13/23, 9:39 PM
fucking hot story , strip them more of money and their clothes, let them only hold smaller allowance and take more of their cash, so they work more and harder
11/10/23, 12:22 PM
Love these updates I do have to ask. Can the Djinn not hypnotize other men like he does Sanjay? Or is it cause he rubbed the lamp? Cause Quintin pinging and smiling sounds quiet hot

11/10/23, 9:56 PM
@[HypnoJ](/user/show/974897) Djinn is only able to hypnotize Sanjay because yes, he did summon him from the lamp. Djinn is able to enchant, influence, and even possess other men whenever he wants, but hypnosis is something only for the carrier of the lamp.

11/12/23, 1:21 AM
@[NewsScene](/user/show/270454) As I thought Thanks for the clarification

Mind Bender
11/13/23, 8:16 PM
@[HypnoJ](/user/show/974897) I agree that would be amazing!

Anonymous
11/13/23, 8:22 PM
@[NewsScene](/user/show/270454) Love that their are rules to the lamp and how the influence work. You're a very good writer.
5/21/19, 2:45 AM
Sorry this story is a bit of a tease! It was really more me fucking around as a vehicle for discussing a sensitive topic and I wanted to get it out of my head. Maybe next time I'll go through with it. Or write a sequel. We'll see.

Anonymous
11/13/23, 6:49 PM
@[The Meaner Nook](/user/show/449300) So the whole arguement could honestly be solved with CNC being part of making the serum work. It doesn’t work unless you consent to getting orders. A rabbit hole possibility, but the being made into pedophiles isn’t a far off idea. It’s highly plausible.
Nov 11, 2023
11/13/23, 5:22 PM
Love the chav, socks, trainers vibe. Keep up the good work!

Wakeup
11/13/23, 6:39 PM
@[icandestroy](/user/show/914356) Thank you :)
11/13/23, 5:47 PM
This slow, edging eroticism was perfectly done. Absolutely astoundingly good.
11/13/23, 4:07 PM
Great story. Love the transformation from Thomas to Tommy to Officer T. :purple_heart: I did get a little confused in the transformation to Officer Freewill between Tommy & Adrian.
11/13/23, 3:55 PM
Great descriptions!
RYC
11/13/23, 3:48 PM
Please continue this story line.
11/13/23, 1:57 PM
This story is so well written. I enjoy the build-up. I love the cum. THANK YOU for your excellent writing.
11/13/23, 1:16 PM
Despite what an anonymous commenter said above, I thought this flowed pretty well. You're obviously hiding some info from the reader to keep the mystery going, and that might be what they're talking about, because it's not immediately clear what Tommy and Kent have binding them together. But hey, I love a good mystery as long as it's resolved, so I liked it a lot :-)
11/13/23, 11:13 AM
Hot!

11/13/23, 11:25 AM
@[Lampshade15](/user/show/277649) Thank you :)
skinpiss
11/13/23, 11:00 AM
hot and cocky, an excellent malskin again, written by the cock
Oct 31, 2023
Anonymous
11/13/23, 6:06 AM
Made me cry with joy, pain, a thousand emotions that cascaded upon me like water being poured onto a flame Thank you for writing this masterpiece
11/13/23, 4:44 AM
I am so in love with this mutual mind-fuck, you have no idea. So inventive!
Anonymous
11/13/23, 4:31 AM
Please update!! I check everyday to see if this story updates
11/10/23, 9:09 PM
Helllll yes. This is the kind of work I come to this site for. Rich fantasy worldbuilding, earnest connection between the (very hot) protagonists, and tons of feral sex. Thanks for sharing your work, excited to see more!!

11/13/23, 4:21 AM
@[tenser13](/user/show/1280137) Thank you!!! I always try to balance expanding the world with sex and fun, and it's sometimes tricky! I tried to make each bit of world building slightly sex tinged to keep everyone hooked, and I'm glad it seemed to work!
11/2/23, 8:54 PM
Hoooly shit, that was just perfect from start to end. I love both Daniel and Theo, and love how you wrote the gentleness and the neediness so well. Just.... damn, man.

11/13/23, 4:20 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Gentleness and neediness are two of my favorite emotions for a scene! I'm glad you appreciated. Daniel and Theo are both just clueless rich boys who need some loving, a sweet happy ending in each other's arms is just what the doctor ordered.
10/30/23, 3:08 PM
God thos is really hot and sweet

11/13/23, 4:19 AM
@[Dapper](/user/show/912344) I'm glad you enjoyed!
10/29/23, 11:40 PM
So wonderfully sweet and satisfying! Thank you so much!

11/13/23, 4:19 AM
@[nycboot](/user/show/131279) You're so sweet! This was a delight to write, I'm glad that joy came through.
10/29/23, 10:47 PM
There was a massive smile on my face from beginning to end, VERY well done! Your writing is impeccable and the relationship between Daniel and Theo was adorable and the highlight of the story. I know you've been working on this story for quite a while, updating me from time to time about it's progress, and now I'm really glad I was able to see it come to fruition. Brilliant work, you should be proud!

11/13/23, 4:19 AM
@[Franco Apollo](/user/show/10029736) As always, you're one of my kindest supporters here. I write because it makes people happy, and your smiles make me so proud. Here's to many more!
Also a Critic
11/13/23, 3:48 AM
The description should say "from rapist to rape victim". I really hope nobody is serious when they say they wish they could repay hurtful words with a lifetime of rape and emotional abuse. Not my cup of tea.
11/13/23, 3:37 AM
Really enjoy clothing induced transformations like this, thank you for commissioning it, and Ethan for writing it. "Rice queen" may not be very "PC", but damn if terms like that don't help get me going.

11/13/23, 3:38 AM
@[hauntedskin](/user/show/13488) Thank you for enjoying it! I know the story's subject matter is very niche and sort of taboo, but sometimes you just gotta go for it.
Anonymous
11/13/23, 2:05 AM
Miss this story