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martin
7/25/20, 11:27 AM
any installment for this?
7/25/20, 11:13 AM
really enjoyed the chapter. poor Alan. Tbh,I hope Leo doesn't get off that easy. I'm excited to see what happens next
7/25/20, 11:07 AM
hot story bro! i love bewildered transformations into muscle sluts!
Jason
7/25/20, 10:54 AM
A **Very** nice idea for the story!
7/25/20, 10:31 AM
great chapter. I wanna see Andrew both both father and son
7/25/20, 10:21 AM
> Fingers crossed for a happy ending, but like S.T.U.D. I’m more expecting an ambiguous or bittersweet one. > I remember S.T.U.D.D. having a happy ending. I originally wrote it as a four-parter, ending w the narrator becoming "dumb" -- but that felt incomplete to me, so I did a pt 5 where it was revealed that the dumbing-down was actually part of the transformation process and only temporary. Everybody got what they wanted in the end. Hopefully that will happen here!
7/25/20, 10:16 AM
> Loving the story, one point, he has been loving his change all along and suddenly wants escape. > There is a wonderful dichotomy in Strong -- as in all of us -- his fantasy is coming true, but he's afraid of it as much as he loves it. I think his attempt to "escape" is a final manifestation of that fear, right before he's forced to go "all the way" -- which, as before, both turns him on and terrifies him simultaneously.
7/25/20, 9:24 AM
fuck yeah!!! love innocent boys with a horny ghost camera! can't wait for part two!
Leo
7/25/20, 9:19 AM
Wow this was an incredible chapter!! I love that Roger got to keep both of his daddies at the end of the day, very sweet. I’m really gonna miss this story but I’m really looking forward for the long overdue chapter of “Personal Toy”. Please don’t stop what you’re doing! You’re seriously so talented and great at writing. If you had a book filled with these stories I’d buy it <3
7/25/20, 8:23 AM
Glad I'm not the only one who also thought of that story, just from reading the short description!
7/25/20, 7:09 AM
i was understanding of why you ended where you did, the two humans were just jafar extensions at that point and the story would have been difficult to continue. starting with introducing a new character away from Jafar was a brilliant choice, and i will gleefully read whatever you choose to put forward. dont take some negative feedback over the ending to heart. sometimes the ending that the story demands is not tje wish fulfillment ending some want. compromising story for a lackluster ending just sucks, so i'm glad you stuck to your guns on the ending of the last chapter, even as i look forward to this new perspective.
Flamefox23
7/25/20, 6:29 AM
there will always be someone unhappy, though i am enjoying your story.
firesix
7/25/20, 4:43 AM
What a great story! I got really excited seeing your author name pop up, since it's basically a guarantee of something hot, and this was a real treat. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep it up!
7/25/20, 4:21 AM
Fantastic story. Please continue.
7/25/20, 3:20 AM
That ending was excellent! I'm realizing now though that the story is over and there'll be nothing new this week...bummer. Welp, just have to look forward to your next submission. Keep up the great work!
Nutiper
7/25/20, 3:11 AM
Damn, I remember those books too! I immediately thought of them when reading this. A really hot spin on the idea! (And, Swizzington, the only thing better than one hot story about a cursed camera is two hot stories about a cursed camera. Looking forward to your story as well!)
7/25/20, 2:44 AM
Loving the story, one point, he has been loving his change all along and suddenly wants escape. I'm not sure there has been enough build for that change of attitude yet. Don't stop though, I admit I secretly hope he revisits his own fantasy and embraces the change again, especially since the story has already laid the background that he has not yet fully reached is maximum potential.
Swizzington
7/25/20, 2:17 AM
Haha, this is funny! I've actually been in the process of writing my own story with VERY similar photography themes, based on the "Say Cheese and Die!" book. Looks like you beat me to it :-)
7/25/20, 1:51 AM
Such beautiful writing. e.g. ""...my rosebud opened to my Lord." For me, the spiritual context makes the actions all the more powerful and potent. Really beautiful.
7/25/20, 1:41 AM
please keep this series going ... you write well, and your stories are hot. i do like the direction that this fun is going in and would live to see Jay have some fun with the twins. maybe he dominates one to be his and leaves the other alone and he is unaware his brother has been taken?
7/25/20, 1:02 AM
Just a tiny red dot. Power in darkness hidden by size. So much better than the usual spiral or interference screen. There are many reader comments on this site after a good story such as "take me!!" "I want to join that gym" "how do I get some of that" etc. It's guys in real life wanting their fantasies to come true, to be in that story, regardless the cost. And now we see Strong doing it. Giving in to his fantasy. Excited about the new him balanced with just the right amount of nervousness. Just a red dot...and he happily gave into it. Bravo! As would we all!!
7/25/20, 12:56 AM
loving it so far, trying not to cum too soon, yum
7/25/20, 12:27 AM
everything I do is intentional. I have a plan to tie this prequel series into the first series and shed some light as to Jay's intentions with the first series.
7/25/20, 12:11 AM
> So basically Strong should have either run away with Prince (who based on this chapter might have actually done it), or at least took Prince with him as backup > See Chapter 25
7/25/20, 12:03 AM
The writing is good, but I'm a little confused. Jay comes off as a sadistic dude in the original series and doesn't care what happens to his stepdad. Yet here, he clearly cares about what happens with Mr. Turner, he even goes so far as to embrace him in a caring way. I think you need to establish where that change in Jay happens that makes him become a sadistic person, or explain why he care's so much for Mr. Turner. Side note, I personally thin Jay should put the twins under cause they seem like they're taking advantage of Jay, and I don't believe for a second that they deleted the video off their phone.
7/24/20, 11:15 PM
Damn fine print. LOL.
7/24/20, 11:13 PM
This whole Story reminds me of "Addicted to S.T.U.D.", which was the first story of yours i ever read. And that reminds me of the original "Total Recall" movie... So basically Strong should have either run away with Prince (who based on this chapter might have actually done it), or at least took Prince with him as backup (though that might have been putting him in too much danger). Fingers crossed for a happy ending, but like S.T.U.D. I'm more expecting an ambiguous or bittersweet one.
7/24/20, 11:06 PM
I felt bad that so many of you didn't like where I left this - so let's keep going? See if we can't make at least some of you happy.
7/24/20, 10:36 PM
@HunkLover: Here's the iPad -so give it another crack!! And good luck.:)
7/24/20, 8:27 PM
>Feels like the calm before the storm. > WARNING! Climax ahead. Please lock seat belts in place and keep your arms in the car at all times