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9/28/20, 2:13 PM
Michael seems to be an even bigger a-hole than Bob. I can't wait to see what's coming for him
9/28/20, 1:17 PM
Excellent chapter! love how Dans mind is working, & the panties are an exciting aspect to this Alpha. Well done!
9/28/20, 11:06 AM
Insanely hot - the dialoge, pacing, descriptions - everything well done!
9/28/20, 8:13 AM
Loved it! Can’t wait to see what else this genie gets up to!
9/28/20, 5:38 AM
I agree that there are some fun ideas in this, reminded me of the classic "Making the Band" https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/98 Storytelling choices aside, what I was most confused by was the repeated point of "transfer smarts from his brain to his balls" Um, what? Is this thinking with your dick? Is this brain matter is used to make semen? Either way, immediately after you say your character regains his intelligence which defeats whatever you're going for.
9/28/20, 4:51 AM
Thank you all :). I appreciate it! I was looking forward to giving PB some history. He has plenty more guys to capture ;)
9/28/20, 4:50 AM
Thank you, I really wasn't sure what to do with the story.
Willie Cici
9/28/20, 3:54 AM
Story line suggestions welcome
9/28/20, 3:00 AM
Awesome! I never knew I needed a backstory for PB but I'm glad we got it! I really love the Pizza Boy series so much! I'm always looking forward to your stories, especially The Sandman series!
Anonymous
9/28/20, 2:59 AM
similar to some of the other folks i was kinda betting on romance because im a tremendous sap, so im hoping that even though its getting, dom-y it still ends up in the tender end of the wading pool. regardless i love the slow build, your writing style, and your sense of character! its also pretty damn hot
9/28/20, 1:16 AM
i like it. ready for the next part
9/28/20, 1:03 AM
Love the idea... I will try to write something to contribute... :)
Someone
9/28/20, 12:25 AM
I really like the story, however i thought it was gonna go in a more romantic way instead of the more dominating way which it is developing. Still a great story, cant wait for next character.
9/28/20, 12:09 AM
Wow man. This is so good. This might be my new favorite story on this site. The pacing is amazing, I'm so glad you taking the changes so slow so we can really savor each new revelation.
9/27/20, 10:08 PM
Every time I finish one of your series I always find myself crying. I hope everything goes well with their parents, and I can't wait for the next installment if there is one. I hope you're doing well too, and all this writing isn't giving you burn out. If you need a break, take it. I will always be waiting for another story. And thank you for all the love you share with the words you write.
Nov 30, 2019
9/27/20, 10:00 PM
I don't think any of those tags apply to this story. Skinhead? Going by that picture, not even remotely. Slave? Where? Even the "drug" or potion or whatever was drunk by the chameleon, not by the victim.
9/27/20, 9:56 PM
love it!!! 💙💙💙 All this make me thing on many possibilities...
Sep 27, 2020
9/27/20, 9:44 PM
Fun transformation story. I'm glad they stayed in love as the BF grew
momo
9/27/20, 8:23 PM
I Live to Serve The Virus
9/27/20, 7:43 PM
Loved it, it's nice to know more about PB!
9/27/20, 7:23 PM
hot story hope there are more chapters
9/27/20, 7:03 PM
This is a great story! I love reading your work so far!
9/27/20, 6:49 PM
totally cant wait for the next chapter of this, already been bate fuel for 3 days haha very curious to see where it goes
9/27/20, 6:23 PM
A ton of great ideas here and some very sexy scenes. But I feel like the mode of storytelling could use some work. There are way too many inaction scenes, where Jackson just stands there and listens to someone deliver a lot of exposition about what's been happening. I think the story would have worked a lot better if you'd stuck with Christian at the concert, showed what happened to him, then cut back to Jackson (which would build suspense, since the reader would know exactly what kind of danger he's in by letting Christian into his apartment).
9/27/20, 6:22 PM
very well done on the story. So arousing that i even came... But i am dying to know what happens in the thanos' Avengers. But take your time if you must, I just wanna know what happens to Hawkeye...
Sam Peterson
9/27/20, 5:57 PM
BUNCH OF BULL SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!
Jonanator
9/27/20, 5:09 PM
i loved this story. you should totally continue it.
Jonanator
9/27/20, 4:57 PM
i love this. can't wait for the next part.
Jonanator
9/27/20, 4:52 PM
i like this, it was a really hot story.