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11/3/20, 10:58 PM
god i can't wait for more of this
11/3/20, 10:37 PM
it feels a little rushed... it could easily be developed into a longer story if you wanted
11/3/20, 10:31 PM
This sounds very promising! Excited for next installments.
JRL
11/3/20, 10:17 PM
REALLY hope a part two is in the works....
11/3/20, 9:48 PM
Loved this! Great twists and turns along the way!
11/3/20, 9:19 PM
This was awesome, very very awesome. Love the capture, play, release. Love how its all about the sexual fun and domination and not like death. So yesh this was great!
11/3/20, 9:16 PM
I hope their dad joins in the fun as well.
Anonymous
11/3/20, 8:41 PM
Got pretty stupid and lasted too long.
11/3/20, 7:12 PM
I love this new story. This chapter helped me rediscover it. I hope you keep it going! Your writing style is excellent and this particular storyline has so much potential!
11/3/20, 5:12 PM
Very sexy, nice start. Love how alpha and manly and powerful the professor is. Like the turning around and making the jock into a subby good boy. So yeah, very sexy. I like Mac too, I like how its sort of hinted in a blatent but not direct way, that he has undergone a similar process and is now a good boy too. PS. While this is great as is I kind of wish we got a pov from the top/dom and such.
11/3/20, 4:03 PM
Another great story
Anonymous
11/3/20, 3:55 PM
Amazing!!!
11/3/20, 3:39 PM
This might be my favourite intallment in a while. Creative transformations, fun power dynamics... keep it up!
11/3/20, 3:36 PM
Ooooh so excited to see something new from you! Great set up chapter, and I'm very excited to see what happens in the upcoming instalments! =
11/3/20, 1:53 PM
Such a hot story! Loved it.
11/3/20, 12:56 PM
amazing!
11/3/20, 12:55 PM
Fuck this is one of those series where it is sad that you realise you have to wait :3
11/3/20, 12:38 PM
Great story!
Kametzer
11/3/20, 11:10 AM
something tells me the person behind all of this is the friend Jeniffer had that was mentioned initially. Not someone clinically depressed, but someone who hasnt been spoken to for a while, and might be looking for revenge. that being said, my guess is the host, Dimitri. It seems a natural fit for Dimitri and Jennifers friend to have hooked up, and Dimitri is working with him to make sure things happen. Looking forward to more bears!
11/3/20, 10:57 AM
Confessions Behind the HAIL GREAT ONE! I spent days trying to figure out how I was gonna feed all those people! There were 200+ people on the Farm and how were they gonna eat? Who could afford that, much less to set up and run the meal service? I went through every conceivable possibility until it occurred to me that the Great One could simply rejuvenate them at the end of their shifts, thereby getting rid of the NEED for food. And if the "rejuvenation" put them a little deeper in the Great One's power? More's the better! HAIL GREAT ONE!
Martin
11/3/20, 10:56 AM
> this was unironically used. Can we not? How about keeping that sjw shit outside? The whole sentence reads: > You never miss a chance to proudly display your confederation flag to show much of a white suprematist you are. You used your straight white cis male privileges to influence many peers as the representative student in school, disrespecting whoever didn’t share the same traits as yours. And it's a statement made about a fictional person in this story. If I'm going to keep any "shit" outside, it's the word "Social Justice Warrior", because that's just a word used to discredit any person who's striving to see the world from differing point of views.
11/3/20, 10:20 AM
Excellent story! I always love stories where hypnotized slaves reinforce each other's programming.
11/3/20, 9:27 AM
"straight white cis male privileges" this was unironically used. Can we not? How about keeping that sjw shit outside?
Anonymous
11/3/20, 9:26 AM
spectacular
Jonanator
11/3/20, 9:13 AM
You should totally do a second part to this story. It was hotttt
11/3/20, 8:45 AM
Pauly just got the perfect responsible considerate brother. think he'd go for his daddy to help,as well?
11/3/20, 8:31 AM
Great chapter! :D And so the transformations begin...this one was incredibly hot, too. I also love that you depict the characters as trying to maintain a sense of normalcy among the insanity happening--it feels realistic! Now, as to my guesses. Asher is the first victim, so he's out; Larry seems too genuinely scared to be involved; Wesley is too obvious a choice, and his lack of empathy probably means he has a special punishment coming. Victor, Dimitri, and Braxton are too ambiguous to make a statement on, so they're maybes. Sebastian is suspicious because he's so average--could be a cover, plus he received a lot of focus as being unremarkable. Jenny is another possible choice--her costume is magical, after all. At first I discounted Mathilda because she was so drunk, but her odd demand for nail polish and suggestion of telling scary stories could be a means of keeping the group apart. Theo's magical costume and encouraging of taking the game seriously are also suspect. So if I have to guess, I'll guess Mathilda right now, and see where things go!
Hob
11/3/20, 8:27 AM
fantastic!
Wales
11/3/20, 8:10 AM
That was amazing, one of the hottest stories i have read in a while! You can never fully escape Master
11/3/20, 7:13 AM
Just read the whole series.....I hope you are going to continue it.