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Nov 9, 2020
Jimmy M
11/10/20, 5:11 AM
I loved it, i would love to maybe see it continue!
Anonymous
11/10/20, 4:51 AM
This was a great continuation! Looking forward to seeing where you take this if you choose to continue it. Keep up the good work here and on your blog.
11/10/20, 4:48 AM
You are a master of the slow drip of erotic hunk humiliation. Can't wait to see what's next!
11/10/20, 4:45 AM
Love the detailed build-up and the game of chess style of confrontation. Anticipation is half the fun and it will be great to see Robin take Tyler down s-l-o-w-l-y, one step at a time with Tyler continually frustrated.
11/10/20, 4:12 AM
Great first chapter! Strange set up that I've never seen before, and it's very hot!
Anonymous
11/10/20, 4:02 AM
oh i am so excited for the rest of this. the built is so gradual and still so steamy and i can totally get behind it
Tyranitar
11/10/20, 3:40 AM
I'm excited, but for some reason this made me feel a little sad too. I hope Brad and Stu don't get too trapped into things. They seem like nice guys.
11/10/20, 3:09 AM
great series so far, and looking forward to where it goes.
11/10/20, 2:29 AM
Short, but very hot! I didn't expected that. I'm very hooked to this story. The wait for the next chapter will be hard to resist!
11/10/20, 12:52 AM
This was quite sexy. I liked the magic. I alo liked how our pov guy ended on top, that was cool.
giveintothemusk
11/10/20, 12:36 AM
What an excellent story!
11/9/20, 10:18 PM
I honestly think that the idea of there being a Cousin Chris who is a super bottom who whispers into Jese's ears about needing cock while he mindlessly bounces on Jese's lap in his own subby mood would have been an extremely hot, sexy scene. Instead we got a character who was deeply annoying and a scene that made me skip the whole part of the story. I honestly only continued to read, after an actual walk away from the story for a moment, because you wrote it and I figured from past experience it would be good. So yeah, this is my opinion. Her presence was nothing good, not at all.
Anonymous
11/9/20, 8:45 PM
What a very touching and sad story! Thank you for this. I'm not into the spanking either but it worked for the story. Even though Lock accepted that it was good and natural to be an "invert", in an era before the word "homosexuality" was well-known outside medical journals, he probably would have perceived both spanking and anal penetration as different kinds of "perversions", rather than anal being the "default" kind of same-sex intimacy. And I can't help but feel that the ending, swimming into the ocean, is symbolic of how profound Lock and Sawyer's isolation would have been, the two of them against the world, even had Lock joined Sawyer all those years before, and the isolation of gay men in society in general at the time. More bitter than sweet. I feel silly saying it, but I've never teared up at a story on a gay smut website before. Maybe it's just the coronavirus isolation getting to me.
11/9/20, 8:34 PM
Yes I did catch the cameo. I was wandering if Sargent Wendt spontaneous came when the scientist and General were interviewing Wendt. But Book 2 has answered the question and the scientist wasn't described as unusually muscular.
11/9/20, 8:23 PM
Becoming two beasts? Interesting. I want to change my answer -Braxton's moment of introspection likely let's him out, but I don't have a new guess yet.
11/9/20, 7:28 PM
I really love the twists in your stories. Please continue to write. Brilliant job!
Nov 9, 2020
11/9/20, 7:18 PM
Really nice story! The way the photos are put really give a rhythm to the writing! Albeit, I must agree, things felt a bit rushed at the end, I wasn't sure at first if the hypnosis was done on purpose or not. Still great, thought!
11/9/20, 7:00 PM
God I love a role reversal. HOT
11/9/20, 6:47 PM
Hot story, bro!
11/9/20, 6:25 PM
One got left behind, then there were seven...brilliant interpretation of General McKenzie/MacArthur! The "lost love." My money is still on Theo the wizard for the impostor (if there even IS an impostor), but I agree that TP8Z is right with saying that Jen might be the only survivor. So next up we have someone getting chopped in half--but given the nature of this site, why do I feel like SPLITTING in half might be the way things go? :p
11/9/20, 6:11 PM
This is really enjoyable to read. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Nov 9, 2020
Anonymous
11/9/20, 5:45 PM
Hot concept, but felt like it trailed off too quickly towards the end. Would have loved to see you pad things out more
11/9/20, 4:23 PM
Dude, honestly, either way I'm totally cool with it LOL! This stuff horns me up so much thinking sure isn't my strong point by the end, but it feels too damn good not to. So sure I might be a dumbass cuz of it LOL but then I get off CUZ I'm a dumbass... That sounded better in my head. So I guess both?? But who's complaining?? Hehehe
11/9/20, 4:11 PM
This was meant as a single chapter story since for me it was mostly about the picture and the story around that. The story also did fairly terrible on tumblr and the ratings here weren't splendid either, but I might write a sequel to it since i've also gotten some messages about it.
11/9/20, 3:46 PM
@Heru Yeah, the moment with Christine was one that I was unsure of putting in, or made me consider that Christine should have just been Chris, and Chris could have taught Jese to be a good bottom. Mixed it up, people will have different opinions. Originally they weren't going to mess around together, and I just wanted her to instill that "hole" mentality in him. And yeah, the game could easily make moments where you can't get caught, or present situations in which you think you might. It was fun to mess around with. What if the Cafe was a secret orgy place!! "CHRISTINE YOU JER-MRLLFFF" <-- cock plugging mouth. @Elmara Glad you enjoyed it, and also happy to surprise fans of the series and my foolish writings. Your comment doesn't even really need a response from me. It pretty much answers itself. But yeah, missed opportunity with a power bottom move by "Chris". I mostly didn't feel like going back to fix up Christine to Chris. Stories like this, I just like to write forward instead of planning, so thats its surprise and an experience to me. Christine was really only suppose to give Jese some advice. Then I got turned on by the "image" of who was playing Christine, and... yeah. I like where Jese is, and you hit it pretty well. He is accepting these new feelings, but he is hiding them. He would very much like to just be a slut, but he can't let himself do that. Problem is, the more he becomes comfortable with it, well, Dennis can just take bigger shots. He might pretend to hate Dennis calling him a slut, but in his mind, he likes it. The Mindgear is a powerful machine, and its made Jese very much enjoy, things...
11/9/20, 3:46 PM
> Also glad to see Tully finally seeing the fate of Murdock as a mindless “drone.” > Speaking of that vignette, did anybody notice the cameo of the Scientist and the General from Book One?
11/9/20, 2:54 PM
Can't wait for next chapter
11/9/20, 2:26 PM
WTF!!! Uhmmm....the next chapter/s, where might they be? I'm invested with the story & characters. Don't leave me hanging, I need closure. So yes, I'm enjoying the read...so far Don't know who the pretender is. It's not Jen, however I think she is the only one to walk away in the morning. There has to be a witness. Someone to tell the tale. Her offense is the least offensive. She is redeemable. Plus she is a girl that knows how to take care of herself & won't hesitate to karate chop off the dick of any monster trying to do her harm. I'm right...Right? Looking forward to finding out...soon
11/9/20, 1:58 PM
I want the wizard to become dominant and make others his good boys. Maybe a certain lumberjack. Anyway this was cool.
11/9/20, 1:58 PM
Mission accomplished. Very Hot. Does Ethan have a younger gay brother with the same powers? Then things could get interesting.