Also moralisch fragwürdig, doch entspricht es eigenen Erfahrungen. Fast so, als wäre ich der Hunk, , doch längst nicht so big. Thank You for Rewrithing parts of my Feelings past J.J.Z..

As always your storytelling is superb, I'm eager to see where Chuck's taken next!

Very nice. Each chapter has given us a little more and upped the ante in a good way! Keep it up!

@Dioscuri He might? Emphasis on "?" I suppose there are 3 main routes here. He never finds out, but that would be boring. He finds out, but sits back and watches. He finds out, but knowing A, the power of hypnosis, and B, jealousy, he interveens. How would he interveen? I have some ideas. I have to just write through the game and see what openings present themselves.

Wow ! Chapter 3 took turns I didn't expect...I definitely didn't expect the boy's father to react quite how he did...His 'new' memories seemed a little extreme for my tastes, but you are the author & I realize it's your story to write as you wish!...I personally would have enjoyed a little more subtlety in the Dad's 'new' past memories of his interactions with his two son's,,,It seems the sexual aspects [incest] of their relationship was [extreme]....a little overdone for my taste....But, you are a very good writer and I would have loved you to stretch out the Father/Sons past memories, featuring a little bit more father/brother HUMILIATION toward Tommy & more idol-worship toward [now] athletic,Manly Ethan, dealing with 'Sport's' & 'Bullying' as well as more feelings of intense inferiority by Tommy. As you can tell, I'm a big fan of stories dealing with the implanting of false PAST MEMORIES, affecting 'new' CURRENT BEHAVIORS . Hope we get into more of Tommy's now remembered juvenile behaviors & actions [as well as others reactions to it], before we jump-into the more intense sex scenes...Now that he thinks of himself as a fellow weak, little nerd, like the ' little boy's' he's been instructed to 'service', it would be interesting to see his new mindset [& these 'Nerds' should be portrayed as the most undesirable little weaklings on campus !] .. When word gets out that Tommy is behaving like a Faggot, will these nerds decide to finally take their understandable long held feelings of frustration & aggression out on him, becoming bully's like those bros who had always bullied them in the past ?? I also hope Tommy's Teddy Bear arrives soon so he can confess his boyish feelings to it while he's in bed sucking his thumb..Perhaps he'll sleep so soundly with Teddy, that he will start wetting his bed while asleep realizing that he's always needed a diaper when he sleeps. Also if he gets the least bit excited during the day, he still can't control his bladder, causing him a great deal of embarrassment at school!...Thank you again for indulging my ramblings .......

Ah, I think I follow, now. I'm going to need Google Translate open in another tab while I read Chapter 20!

> While I wait for Friday, I’m mulling over what I could write to torture you the most. > That's Author Love, man. Thank you. Please torture me with some of your crazy hot stories -- good luck! Signed -- a fan.

> Regardless, I’m waiting to see how exactly RB is going to “come out on top” over Vernon. > I think you need to read my comment again -- you're misreading it. In referring to derogatory references about French-speakers, I said, "On this note, Rugby Boy gets the last laugh." Bwah-ha-ha-ha-ha!

> put Everybody’s Favorite Character in jeopardy and watch people freak the fuck out! And then there's freaks like me who were reaching for the lube...

> Cruel Author Fun: put Everybody’s Favorite Character in jeopardy and watch people freak the fuck out! Don't worry. While I wait for Friday, I'm mulling over what I could write to torture you the most.

> Okay, after the last chapter I was pissed at you about Rugby Boy, but good feint. > Cruel Author Fun: put Everybody's Favorite Character in jeopardy and watch people freak the fuck out!

This story was certainly different, in a good way. The ending was definitely a twist, and I respect how creative it was. I love the sweat/ musk elements in here and it was so hot how powerless Scotty on the onset. A total pleasure to read and very hot!

Are ya gonna carry on. Sure hot..?

While RB getting zonked by Vernon's cum would've been hot as fuck, I definitely agree that probably would've been a waste of RB as a character. But maybe the Deputy could've transfered RB's devotion from Vernon back to Snake if Snake protested. Regardless, I'm waiting to see how exactly RB is going to "come out on top" over Vernon.

Okay, after the last chapter I was pissed at you about Rugby Boy, but good feint.

Thanks! I think you'll like where this story is going :)

Wow, not its getting interesting, it would be great if he made an entire harem of different types though.....

LOVED this!

Wow! so physical and reality changes are possible too? nice! maybe that professor will become far more silly all of a sudden, maybe even far more attentive of his favorite student? (if he is even a professor when this is all over)

So I thought the transformation made them like their costumes but everyone becomes some sort of beast.

excellent story i love how he got back at his bully but also got his bully to give him a good fuck. hope to see more

I've really been rooting for Dennis; hopefully he's got something up his sleeves in response to Charles' plot ;) Amazing chapter as always!

Excellent! This is fast becoming my new favorite series More!

Hi Kyle, good news I am actively working on this series. I have lightly revised the first three parts but I didn't want to post them until the remaining chapters are ready to go. It is my plan to finish all the parts so I can make sure they're consistent and satisfying. Chapter 4 needs a little bit of revision and it will be ready to go. Chapter 5 needs an extensive rewrite. Chapter 6 should end the story.

I would like to see Dimitri and Asher end up together after that declaration, can you do it, please?

A bumblebee stung one, then there were five...genius! I never thought that "stinging" words would be the reference, but it's clever. And I do wonder what caused the transformation--perhaps Larry was so upset that he stepped in a puddle of semen? Or maybe the pizza was enchanted somehow--we know Theo was alone in the kitchen for a while...Anyhow, next up is "going in for law." We know Dimitri and Larry's mother is a judge...

First you turn the incredible Brax, now his bro Vic is trapped! It's like you have something against big, homophobic, meathead jocks

"Steve" (Ben) is a character from another series (Cognitive Behavioral Therapy) if you want to see more of him. I *might* bring him back in this series, but I need to think about it more. I don't want to force it.

Glad you picked this story back up. Poor chuck has no idea what hes in for. Id like to read more about Steve from the last chapter

Really good story, nice ending, the wife has no idea who she is inviting into the house, the fun Chuck and Kit will have.