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12/9/20, 7:52 PM
Thanks Jon! Glad you've enjoyed the series :)
12/9/20, 7:49 PM
very good. i really like it.
12/9/20, 7:08 PM
that has to be one of the finest stories I have read in a really long time. I doubt if any one here would turn down a job offer with Paragon if offered. Thanks
Anonymous
12/9/20, 7:03 PM
Kinda sad daddydick doesnt compel domestic dominance of all inhabitants even if Prefer by story focus dominating dudes. Dames included but spreading competing and claiming boypussy has elements of achievement
Jonanator
12/9/20, 6:31 PM
Seriously, can't wait for more. I love this story soooo much.
Jonanator
12/9/20, 6:30 PM
Such a hottttt story
Moby
12/9/20, 4:19 PM
@BobbyBlobfish He fell to the Witch~ He was mostly there to show that Matt wasnt the only resisting. As to what costume he got, if he was to have a bigger role, he'd have a cupid costume~
12/9/20, 3:50 PM
I live to serve the Virus.
12/9/20, 3:19 PM
> What is your cashapp? > I was so kidding. I write these stories to share -- it's part of the joy I get writing them. Though I have toyed with the idea of publishing on Kindle, etc, it's hard for me to sit on something I've written without getting feedback. Part of the fun for me is answering the comments and chatting on the Forum. One of my big life lessons -- I did theatre for a living for MANY years -- was that whatever "next level" I achieved, I enjoyed the job less. I had the most fun doing theatre that was unpaid -- when I got to the union level, it was a job, just like any job. It killed my love of theatre. This whole "do something you love and it's not a job" is completely bogus. Everything becomes a job eventually. What does familiarity breed...? I would never want that to happen with my erotica. So I appreciate the offer, but it's completely not necessary.
Nurseb
12/9/20, 2:48 PM
I'd definitely tip a story like this. What is your cashapp?
12/9/20, 1:51 PM
> the type of story i would request if you were on Patreon. > I have a virtual tip jar on Cash App, haha (Just sayin'...)
12/9/20, 1:05 PM
YES! Incredible! So hot. Keep these stories coming, please!
12/9/20, 12:59 PM
Well it might not be for hypnothrill but it s one of my favorite one from you. Hell that the type of story i would request if you were on Patreon.
12/9/20, 11:15 AM
Well, it's an awfully long story. And I've loved your stuff so much in the past, I felt like I owed you a thorough review. I think you've just been exploring slightly different territory in your recent works. Speaking writer to writer, I appreciate that kind of growth and willingness to experiment. But speaking as a reader, the new stuff just isn't as simpatico with my own erotic fantasies.
12/9/20, 10:46 AM
> But personally, I just found it mildly arousing, and it didn’t get me off. > That was an awfully long review for mildly arousing and didn't get you off. Thats two in a row you haven't liked. Bummer.
12/9/20, 10:43 AM
So great! I love this story!!!
12/9/20, 10:23 AM
写的真的是太棒了,迫不及待的想看后续!请问未来能看到更多介绍后文? 😍
12/9/20, 9:13 AM
This was really good. Hope it will be continued!
Anonymous
12/9/20, 7:40 AM
我非常喜欢
12/9/20, 5:15 AM
Although I liked the twist at the end, the story itself just wasn't dark enough for my tastes. I think it's fine that we don't see much resistance from Dom, who signed up for this. But to me, the story would be a lot hotter if we saw some resistance from one of the supporting pornstar characters--or even just saw them do something uncanny like sing Paragon's praises in a way that sounds scripted, or suddenly change personalities in response to a director's verbal commands. I think the story was well-written, and I'm happy to see that other people are loving it and giving you the praise you deserve. But personally, I just found it mildly arousing, and it didn't get me off.
12/9/20, 3:21 AM
very hot so glad u posted it this has been my all time fav long story ever. Always glad to see Bob and Pablo togther
Oct 3, 2010
12/9/20, 1:58 AM
This is early BLUFMAN, and his work only got better with time. Clearly one of the more original writers on this site.
12/8/20, 11:42 PM
Where can i sign up?
12/8/20, 11:30 PM
While stories where the victim is aware he is being brainwashed but ultimately succumbs are always hot, there's also something very delicious and sexy in the irony of the victim being led by his nose, none the wiser, while we know exactly what's happening to him.
12/8/20, 10:45 PM
> Loved the clueless progression as the temperature rises in and out of the story > This was my greatest concern in the story -- that Dom never realizes anything's happening to him. There's no moral struggle, or no lost personality, he's simply clueless. I didn't know if it would play well or if everybody would be, like, "There's no inner turmoil!"
12/8/20, 10:42 PM
Fantastic job! Loved the clueless progression as the temperature rises in and out of the story, and a great sexy payoff.
Anonymous
12/8/20, 9:58 PM
Real good.
12/8/20, 9:18 PM
This was an awesome story. It had great sensory imagery, a good progression, and a mix of very hot sex scenes. another
12/8/20, 8:41 PM
So fucking hot!!