Recent Comments

12/8/20, 6:56 PM
As per usual, Abs, a masterpiece. It's long, but it's the good kind of long that keeps stringing you along, and you don't mind the length. The use of 2nd-person perspective in the hypno scenes was really creative, I don't think I've seen the perspective flip back and forth like that before. The progression from what was probably a pure fantasy scene, to maybe a live show, to a shoot under the influence of hypnosis, was well executed. And the little stinger at the end- that the company uses hypnosis to not only train its stable of performers, but also brainwash them into becoming prostitutes- was such a hot touch, almost makes me want a sequel! And yes, the sex scenes were phenomenal. You have a great talent for doing blow-by-blows that don't dissolve into the florid mire of one Fennimore-Cooper. Quick question: is "Austin" a self-insert?
12/8/20, 6:23 PM
I thought you did a good job with the changes; they were subtle, and quite believable. 🙂
12/8/20, 6:03 PM
Kyle - Thanks so much for your support and feedback! ;) Udems - Haha...and since you asked, yes, as I might have hinted to before, the police would be coming up. But I haven't started on it yet, so please bear with me and stay tuned! No plans for firefighters at this time though.
12/8/20, 5:36 PM
Brilliant and so very, very hot.
12/8/20, 4:06 PM
> Now that my friend, was a thing of beauty. > I just wanted to remind everybody that I could write a sex scene. > I so need to get writing again here. > I couldn't agree with this more.
12/8/20, 3:59 PM
Now that my friend, was a thing of beauty. Thanks Absman as always. I so need to get writing again here.
Elm
12/8/20, 2:31 PM
You really are one of the best! cant wait to see more of you here :)
12/8/20, 12:50 PM
Very nice story ! Well written.
12/8/20, 11:27 AM
soooooo hot, I loved the fact that his cock grew so much he couldn't even use it just had to have the cum fucked out of him
Nov 26, 2020
12/8/20, 11:15 AM
Very excited to see where this goes! Great work, man!
Jonanator
12/8/20, 8:41 AM
Sooooo hot, can wait for more. I love this story very much
12/8/20, 7:58 AM
so hot. i love big subs!
12/8/20, 7:57 AM
udems is always spot on with the comments. lovely story as usual!
12/8/20, 6:37 AM
Ah, this is always nice to see. thanks for this new installment! I hope everything went well with the moving thing~ And since you asked, you already got families and sports team, business, perhaps some cops or firefighters?
Zef
12/8/20, 6:04 AM
So good!! I would really really love to have a weighing scene to see exactly how much he's gained. Really love the descriptions so far!
12/8/20, 5:30 AM
I'm anxiously checking up on this everyday to see if the new chapter is already up, lol. Please update soon!
ingear
12/8/20, 4:19 AM
Hypno stonerbation brainwash dong bonging! It's like my bate chats in a story. Wait... have we bate chatted?! =P
12/8/20, 3:15 AM
Such an incredibly hot chapter! I love the imagery used during the hypnotic induction.
12/8/20, 2:57 AM
This was a very awesome and solid chapter! The soccer and baseball team bonding session was so very hot and I LOVED the signature piss drinking. I'm so glad you went back to your roots. I also love the twist with Omar and Zaid at the end. Very fitting fate for the father and son. Now I'm wondering as well. What's next? Well personally, I hope we come back to the Stanton family again. I kinda miss them!
Anonymous
12/8/20, 2:28 AM
unique topic. Definitely an attention grabber. Main character comes across as authentic and authoritative. Good mix. Wish my cowboy clothes were cursed and subjected to control and domination. Hot story.
12/8/20, 12:27 AM
i need to have the rest please
Lusty Stallion
12/7/20, 11:57 PM
great job man! loved it
12/7/20, 11:50 PM
This was... amazing. The induction and how you switched the personalities was marvelous. I appreciate the foot part and the fact you picked a bear man and make him submissive for a smaller one... you just took all my kinks, thanks for this gift! Wish there was more stories of bears or older men submitting to smaller/young dudes <3
Dec 6, 2020
12/7/20, 9:38 PM
Well, its like i am feeling right from about some weeks. But there is no one neare, or thathing me or i can see. Nice, but strange.
12/7/20, 9:10 PM
Shows lots of promise and an interesting idea. I think however that it suffers from the same problem I have when writing stories...moving too fast, getting to the 'good' stuff 'now' instead of letting things build. That being said...it was an enjoyable read and look forward to more.
Anonymous
12/7/20, 8:38 PM
pretty damn hot. i like the set ups but feel like you need to spend more time exploring each kink. but kept me hard all the way through. great job and hope for more.
12/7/20, 8:19 PM
Wow! That was a wild ride and I loved every moment of it. I loved how Jason finally is able to be happy. Such a nice turnabout.
Anonymous
12/7/20, 7:52 PM
really love how the dad has been mind fucked! especially the part where he was told to masturbate and came within 30 seconds ! Wanna see more of the dad thanks so much for this !
12/7/20, 7:50 PM
this is so hot ! thank you for writing. hope Evan plays with the coach too. Like make him a submissive bear
12/7/20, 7:01 PM
A fun read.