Recent Comments

Stephen
1/20/21, 3:11 AM
Excellent work. Well thought out and very engaging. Thanks for the story.
1/20/21, 3:03 AM
This was a very fun read indeed! The passion that man-turned-underwear showed in pleasing that meat was inspirational. I can only hope I'm that focused if I ever find myself transformed into a pair of undies. <3
1/20/21, 1:22 AM
@foobar88, good to know! I'll tell Ben ;)
DiaperthisDaddy
1/20/21, 12:49 AM
Please continue this hot story!
DiaperthisDaddy
1/20/21, 12:43 AM
I wish I was Slaveboy in a diaper to please a master. I crave being cared for and serving a true man.
1/20/21, 12:12 AM
Really well written story. Can't wait for the next episode! PS: > I personally thought uncut dicks looked weird but that was probably due to me looking at my own, cut cock for my entire life. I wondered if he felt the same but vice versa. As an European I can tell you: yes, it is vice versa ;)
Anonymous
1/19/21, 11:45 PM
Great story!!!
Sub4Taylor (Mikki)
1/19/21, 11:42 PM
I have two wishes. The first would be to see a photo of Trevor after the first transformation. The second would be to see Dick Grayson evolve (devolve) even further by the time the editor gets the package. Some tats, lobe gauges, maybe a navel piercing, with Dick becoming an even bigger gay slut. https://images.app.goo.gl/8CgJWsBihR3mi3Kw6
1/19/21, 10:13 PM
super new slant for a story..... I LOVE IT.....
1/19/21, 10:07 PM
I love each chapter of this story !
1/19/21, 9:32 PM
love it!
1/19/21, 9:12 PM
@Lexorius: Thank you for the comment; the control will expand. But as for spreading the sway out to the world, I don't really have plans to go that far. I'm still working within the bounds of the original story and it never made it out that far. There's something interesting coming up once I can get back to writing. But thanks for reading and commenting on it. (Hopefully I'll get my take on "All Hail the Emperor" up too.)
1/19/21, 8:24 PM
I loved it, you really surprised me
Jan 18, 2021
Sub4Taylor (Mikki)
1/19/21, 8:01 PM
Great story. Love to see an alpha turned into a simpering beta boi. Beyond financial domination, love to see sexual domination where the straight-ish discovers he enjoys servicing other and taking a dick as well. The author knows these fake alphas well. Bravo to him.
1/19/21, 7:39 PM
It reminded me at first of the Midwich Cukoos a.k.a. Village of the Damned. That it was a local guy with the hypnosis loop on speakers and radio was surprisingly mundane! I was expecting alien mind control and male pregnancy ha ha ha ha ha.
DiaperthisDaddy
1/19/21, 7:18 PM
Please continue with more diapers.
1/19/21, 7:09 PM
Me encanto la historia ¿vas a sacar mas capitulos en el futuro?
1/19/21, 4:54 PM
Congratulations on a fine beginning for your new enterprise! I would second many of the comments already entered. Please. keep writing, and consider expanding your descriptive details. This story was excellent, but would have been even better still had you fleshed it out a bit more.
1/19/21, 4:49 PM
Say, this was great! Real sci-fi horror stuff. :) The ending, where the sky begins to rain black, was particularly effective. Nice job! :)
BPtime
1/19/21, 4:22 PM
Masterly written, absorbing sexual tension.
Jan 18, 2021
1/19/21, 2:52 PM
Love this story, would love to see more findom elements on here
Syr
1/19/21, 2:35 PM
Te idea is great, but the destiny of pat's girl-now-boyfriend and roommate, the actual fate of everyone in town, among other things are left hanging. This gives you the opportunity for a sequel, and with the way you conveyed the story, you should totally take it
1/19/21, 2:08 PM
Absolutely fantastic! You've got me so hard. This was a great way to start my day! If I had a wish, I'd wish for this game to appear on my doorstep. If I had a second wish, it would be for many more stories about this game from you and maybe others, too!
1/19/21, 1:18 PM
The hottest chapter so far.
Anonymous
1/19/21, 12:31 PM
Loved that you put filipino references to this like maria makiling and putting your clothes backwards when your lost. Also weirdly wholesome ending, i loved it.
1/19/21, 12:20 PM
Thank you guys. It took me more then a year to write it. Part II coming eventually.
1/19/21, 10:40 AM
Yeah, it's really tricky writing in a regional accent that's not your own. I laid it on pretty thick at the start, because I wanted to give Liam a distinctive voice that showed his social position, as a young man who felt like he didn't fit in to his small town, but still spoke like he came from that small town (unlike Master Jack, who speaks with more of a posh BBC accent). In the later parts of the story, Liam's accent is less pronounced, partly because I didn't want it to get in the way of describing the action. Still, I went back and changed all his "my"s to "me"s in order to keep consistent. And I have no idea who any of the models are; I just downloaded a lot of photos from the LPSG forums and strung a few of them together into a story.
1/19/21, 10:30 AM
This is a clever story, loving the build up!
1/19/21, 10:19 AM
Some great ideas here. It could still use a bit more editing, as lines like "a massive duck hanging from his waist" and "the man's duck had fallen out" made me laugh out loud. And I had trouble buying into the premise that everyone in the town except Pat would see black water coming from the faucet and decide to drink it. But the story had some great Lovecraftian horror moments that really worked for me.
1/19/21, 10:04 AM
I had to get used to the English used here, and occasionally I thought that Liam already was dumbed down, which says a lot about me I guess... I loved the bit with Georgi and Pawel! Once I overcame the language thing it made for another Hypnothrill classic! By the way, asking for a friend, who's the guy modeling for Liam?