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1/27/21, 4:35 AM
so freakin' imaginative! ok dude, where we going from here ? I.J.S.
Chase
1/27/21, 4:32 AM
Loved it! Would have loved to have seem the cute guy after and how he acted now that he'd been corrupted.
1/27/21, 4:11 AM
To be fair it would have been a lot hotter and better if you had actually converted them to gay at the end. Though it was very well written I however do not think it belongs on this site.
Mar 28, 2020
1/27/21, 4:06 AM
very hot stuff- cop corruption and enslavement is hot, slow down the process a bit dude I.J.S.
1/27/21, 3:15 AM
How wickedly clever! I loved the description and stream-of-consciousness style here. I could visualize the whole scene, and it was delicious.
1/27/21, 2:24 AM
Loved it! Amazing setup, loved being in his head as he was forced to do more and more debasing stuff for his followers. The greedy little horndog in me did want to see a scene of him fully accepting the changes as one of his friends fucked him into next Tuesday, but I've got a pretty active imagination :)
Anonymous
1/27/21, 1:43 AM
still waiting for the next chapter
Jan 24, 2021
Evan
1/27/21, 1:19 AM
I love the concept and enjoyed this a lot. And I agree, my suggestion for the next story is to slow down some and give time for some character development and the reader to enjoy the process of succumbing to being a cockslut. Thanks for posting!
1/27/21, 12:32 AM
Was this the sentence in editing that you chose to leave out? ...then he slowly pours the Cycle One down Glenn's ass crack, unaware greedy pup Scout had found his way into the fray. Before Superion could get his finger into Glenn's Cycle One hole, pup Scout had licked up every drop and had his snout deep into Glenn's milky shithole. I love your man energy stories. I always want to be a part so I write myself in. Woof! If only you'd stop editing them out. "They’re low-waisted, so that the buckle of his belt sits at the base of his cock" Oh how many times did I see Don and John on Lost In Space wearing their laser belts right over the base of their cocks. Thanks for bringing back that nice childhood memory.
1/27/21, 12:13 AM
I *love* all of your stories! You are such a talented and creative writer! I would love to promote your stories on my blog. If this is something you would be amenable to, please contact me at will - at - wiptopping dot com.
Anonymous
1/26/21, 11:46 PM
Great story!!
Jan 25, 2021
Anonymous
1/26/21, 10:48 PM
Really nicely written, a good pace and cadence.
1/26/21, 10:48 PM
Eager for the next part :)
Bill
1/26/21, 10:35 PM
Love this story. I loved the coaches so the idea that the three of them remaining (RIP Coot) would reunite and have a magnificent life as a retired triad with the new Cycle 1.
klr
1/26/21, 9:35 PM
i came so hard
1/26/21, 8:02 PM
biker gang next? Hypnothrill, you da man dude I.J.S.
Jan 25, 2021
Ron
1/26/21, 7:58 PM
Nice and brief and enjoyable. Reads even better after I pasted it into a document and did find/replace Daniel's name with my own.
1/26/21, 7:54 PM
Glad you enjoyed. Now to make a jailhouse slut of the Ex.
1/26/21, 7:33 PM
I would be excited to see further tales of this demon.
1/26/21, 7:25 PM
still as hot as ever - dude you are my favorite author I.J.S.
1/26/21, 7:19 PM
As I'm a big fan of sph, I'm a bit disappointed, that the "small dick humiliation" part seems to be taken out. Still, this is one of the most creative and hottest stories here.
1/26/21, 6:51 PM
Oh, one other comment... While i like the story very much as is, i think it would have made for a richer (and longer! ;) story if the reader could also get to know the Dominant characters across the hall -- not just indirectly through the trainees. It would have been interesting to hear their complaints about the bullying and arousing to hear their conversations as they developed the details of their take-down plan.
1/26/21, 6:49 PM
Both jocks taken down so so hard! So smooth! So hot! i love brainwashing/transformation stories that describe the process so seductively that my mind is totally sucked into the story and my boy pussy starts to twitch. Good job!! i would be happy being Kurt too! i want my own cupboard. Perhaps even more fun for everyone would be hypnotic triggers for switching between beta and pup modes for each slave. Thanks so much for a really hot story!
1/26/21, 5:43 PM
Part two is just waiting for approval, should be up in a bit 😁
1/26/21, 5:15 PM
Yay, full body latex suits. I waited for the rubber soldiers :) Need more assimilation scenes and details. BTW can Hudson remove this suit, or it's permanent transformation? And will he get his helmet?
Jan 25, 2021
1/26/21, 5:10 PM
Very interesting idea. I'd be interested to see where this leads if it continues!
Jun 11, 2016
1/26/21, 3:58 PM
Looovveeedddd the setting in this story <3
1/26/21, 3:42 PM
One of my favourite stories of yours, along with "Moving In." Love the loss of IQ and masculinity, can really feel a reversal in status and power. For me, I do enjoy table-turning. Some changes to Sean in the next (possible) installment would be quite interesting!
1/26/21, 3:37 PM
would love a follow up on this!