Recent Comments

2/20/21, 6:48 PM
Really hot stuff, the description's not too much, not too little - just perfect. A fantastic premise with a lot of potential, can't wait to see what happens next!
2/20/21, 6:40 PM
Can't wait for more Sherman and more Preppy! this was such a sweet but still sexy mind control chapter. I was like yes,finally a new one and now it's over and I am hooked and want a new one
Feb 19, 2021
2/20/21, 6:06 PM
This was clever and hot!
2/20/21, 6:06 PM
awesome
2/20/21, 5:49 PM
Sooooo sexy ....... and your photos are hot as hell
Anonymous
2/20/21, 5:28 PM
Great story
2/20/21, 3:52 PM
It's hot!!! I'm waiting for the chapter 4
2/20/21, 2:11 PM
This story continues to be outstanding. Thank you.
2/20/21, 2:00 PM
Superb. Clive Barker worthy horror, sex, and dark desires. Yeah, I wanna read more of this.
Anonymous
2/20/21, 1:56 PM
cant wait for more chapter
2/20/21, 1:49 PM
I read all the chapters and they're great! Can't wait for more!
2/20/21, 1:39 PM
Thanks to everyone who has commented, it really helps to keep me motivated to write more. I hope you like the next chapter that has been posted.
2/20/21, 1:33 PM
Cool, I hope to see more of this, let see how the city changes
Feb 14, 2021
2/20/21, 1:27 PM
Thank you!
2/20/21, 1:26 PM
Really nicely written and I like discovering what's happening alongside Eric. Personally, I am very into story-focused, expository erotica with developed characters! Looking forward to more from you, either in this story or another!
2/20/21, 1:16 PM
Subtle, but still very hot. Even without pornographic descriptions of sex acts, it contains the one element that always gets me hard: conditioned obedience.
Anonymous
2/20/21, 12:19 PM
"These pants, Babe, are made for war not love.” LOL
Anonymous
2/20/21, 12:13 PM
That was hot and sweet at the same time! I loved the Preppy cameo. Hopefully we will get to the pup play soon
Feb 19, 2021
2/20/21, 12:05 PM
Great job. So hot.
Anonymous
2/20/21, 9:58 AM
Great chapter but how can you leave us hanging like this. I hope the next chapter is soon.
Feb 19, 2021
2/20/21, 8:05 AM
Fuck me, that was hot! Didn't even manage to get to halfway through before blowing!
2/20/21, 6:52 AM
Dark as forewarned, but such a hot, well-written story of seduction.
2/20/21, 6:36 AM
Love the progression of events and look forward to the next chapter.
2/20/21, 5:36 AM
Really well-written and extremely hot. Thank you for your excellent work!
2/20/21, 4:06 AM
Hot take on the magic potion concept (can I get some of that, too?!). I'd love more of Erik in the singlet and training or competing with his new teammates. There's a nice opportunity for a sequel to this that explores and juxtaposes Erik's relationships with his teammates and his role on team with his relationship/role with Jim. Or perhaps the longer-term effects of the potion could be brought to light through some anxiety-producing but sexy AF unexpected or amplified consequences for Erik's performance, relations with teammates, or self-control in and out of the singlet.
2/20/21, 3:38 AM
Good so far! Good choice to set it in the FFIX world.
Anonymous
2/20/21, 1:11 AM
Want to see what happens to Riley. Cigarettes? For?
2/20/21, 12:17 AM
Keep up the good work! I really like your style and how you plan everything carefully. Since Preppy's out of base, I'm guessing there'll be a scene with Sherman and Preppy? ^_^ PS - Lent = past tense of lend. You want Leant.
2/19/21, 11:20 PM
No, it is just whenever I get something done. I wish I could have a set update, but life will never allow it.