Hey guys - sorry it's taken me so long to write back to all your incredible comments! Y'all made writing this a ton of fun, and I hope you'll all continue to comment on other stories in the future – both mine and other authors! I love you all, thank you for reading! ♥️ [@EchoBravo](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/19083) - Thanks man! I didn't expect everyone to catch on to Sam so fast, I had to do some fancy footwork to bring everything together. Glad it worked :) **@anon** - Thank you! I'm so thrilled that you read all the way through. [@hivemindlover](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/1644947) - Thanks man! Glad you were here for the ride :) [@FeedYourHead](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/1170832) - Phew, I'm glad you saw Sam as a twist, I was pretty sure y'all had figured it out before I even wrote it! I'm a sucker for a good friendship saving the day, and when it's a story about touch... well, Sam's fate wrote itself. [@Sakfal](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/943866) - I hear you, but I write what's hot to me. Besides, I needed Marc to have some karmic consequences, and this is the one that turns me on. Thanks for reading! [@TexMuscle](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/10002223) - Oh man, I seriously considered the idea that every so often, when the moon was full and the stars were clear, Sam might be able to grab ahold of someone and rejoin our world for a few hours, leaving behind a horny hottie when he left. But what's the point of trapping him if he gets vacations? [@jitter](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/974260) - Thanks man! Imagine, I almost ended it after chapter one. [@Buffy67](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/13727) - Nine days bro, it only took nine days to write and post all of it! Feels longer, huh? I doubt I'll revisit this universe, after all, we already know nothing else unusual happened to Marc. Now, Dale on the other hand... [@Catalust](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/920370) - I'm a sap, what can I say? [@Horn](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/1014477) - Thanks dude! Thanks for reading! [@mrb971](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/46949) - Let's not go that far, I'm always trying to top myself ;) [@PTutius27](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/979133) - Aw, thank you sir! I'm glad it worked! [@HunkLover](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/914611) - Someday I'm gonna do a twist where there's no twist. Everyone is gonna be so confused. [@absman420](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/162063) - In my original notes, Sam and Marc made the decision to touch, to hell with the consequences of Marc's ring. Sam gets horny, but Marc feels his body twisting and convulsing. His finger gets long and skinny, making the ring fall off. Sam snatches it up and proceeds with his evil speech, changing Marc into just another meathead jock. [@Proteus](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/961566) - Sometimes too good to be true is... well, too good to be true. One of my favourite things to do when writing is to make a character easy to fall for, just so I can stab you with him later. If it helps, Sam's not technically dead. According to my notes, he's trapped in 'the ghost realm', a parallel reality to ours with all the same stuff but none of the people. Sometimes when the walls between reality gets thin, he sees ghostly people walking around, but he can't touch them. That's when people on campus can see his ghostly figure too. Not that I thought about it for way too long... **@anon2** - Thanks for reading all the way through! [@BlindSeer0](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/381024) - Okay, I'm really glad someone liked the instructions. I felt like I was using a deus ex sarcina, but I guess it worked out! I'm also a sucker for that nonsense, and I didn't really think Marc could redeem himself. Riley seemed like the only available character who could really take on the job. Plus, as soon as I pictured him busting through the door with the fire axe, it had to happen. Glad I left you with a lot to think about around Marc ;) [@MonsterMash62](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/3332) - Thanks man! If you're happy with it, I'm definitely happy with it :) [@Hypnoguy67](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/908028) - I felt kinda bad that I didn't bring the professor or Dale into the last chapter. I suppose them being all mentor-y in the penultimate chapter will have to do! [@Daddywanted](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/2417606) - Hehe, awesome. Thanks man! What'd you think of Professor Wilson's change into more of a Daddy figure? [@Tattcub](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/21054) - That sounds like way too much more bro. Just pump your muscles, pump your cock, pump out more porn. Now repeat after me... pump your muscles... **@anon3** - I considered a few different endings. In 'the bad one', Riley is too late to save Marc, leaving Marc nothing but a slobbering hunk of manmeat who sucks any dick that gets put in front of him. Riley is transformed into a super pumped bodybuilder who hates Sam, but he'll do anything for that cock so he plays the devoted servant. Sam isn't interested in a boyfriend, he just wants men to serve him. By the end of the night, he's finished converting the dorm into a harem of muscle slaves, and we imply that it's only a matter of days until he finishes the campus. The story ends on a tropical island where Sam lives a life of luxury, every need attended to. We see some of Marc's transformees like Caleb or Professor Wilson make appearances as slaves that are addicted to Sam's cum. It doesn't seem like Marc makes the cut. The US Army raids the island in an attempt to capture Sam, with many of his slaves being killed in the process. We see Riley take a bullet to the head, desperate to protect the man he hates. Sam flees to a hiding spot, completely uncaring for the lives being lost. After all... he can always rebuild. The story ends with Sam reaching out to touch a marine, beginning the entire chain of events over again. There's a reason I decided to go another direction. **@anon4** - Thanks! I love this comment, I'm a sucker for a happy ending too. As I said to @anon3 above, there was a downer ending I could have gone towards, but where's the fun in that? Besides, I fell in love with Riley a bit as I was writing this, and I couldn't bear to see anything happen to him. BTW, I loved your comment so much I read the first sentence to my husband. He corrected my pronunciation of yugioh. [@Varlance](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/794107) - Glad you enjoyed it! I considered a variation on the ending where the guy Marc sent to the gym would show up a few minutes after Sam. Marc would try to turn him away, but he'd see Sam in the room and say 'That's him. That's the guy.' It would lead to a bit more of a struggle, but it didn't set up the fire axe bit as well, and I wanted that bit.

Nice groundwork, I guess next chapter will be longer to explore a period of three month. Take your time so that it flows well. The writing is good, but sometime I had a bit of an hard time reading the last part. Sometimes we had Judge's opinions, sometimes it felt more like an exterior narrator. But maybe it's just me who's tired.

I'm not into water sports either. I was expecting a water well repairman to come out that looked like he stepped off a BB competition stage with a donkey dick. Maybe it was his cum that tainted the well in the beginning. I wouldn't mind if his pre were to start changes in Ben and maybe fucking Tom and Parker would seal their fate. Seemed rush. Looking forward to new chapters. Reminds me a little bit of Bill Drake's "Cornell, TX" series with the water making changes to the men in later chapters.

Holy Shit, this is incredibly hot! Wish we could pipe that muzak into all our department stores! Want to know if the effect s permanent?

I love these stories. Was talking to DerekWilliams about Nanites and I remembered these series. I'll have to read them again. Thanks J Alexander. Hope you are well and still writing. We aren't going to cum by ourselves... We will but it can be more fun with stories like these.

Jon deserves to be punished for this transgression. Maybe be Theo's servant for a week and call him sir when they are alone in the room.

Really loving this series!

I started this story intending to write a *very* brief Tumblr post to go with a picture (the one I link to at the end). Even though I fleshed it out a bit, my main goal was to provide a backstory to the guy in the image and why he's wearing that blank grin and pair of Nike Pro shorts (and holding that ball and those pads). Of course, the words should still stand on their own, too. @Lohengrin To me, transformation and mind control are very erotic on their own. If the opportunity arose to include a sex scene I would have, but neither Sato nor Coach Johnson seemed to be suitable partners for the age-regressed narrator. Maybe I wasn't feeling in a transgressive-enough mood yesterday. This story got hit with the safe mode restriction anyways. @Hypnothrill I thought I could get away with the weird impossible narration like some existing works do, but I guess you're right. When I was almost finished I felt it wasn't gay enough so I threw that twist at the end. I'm comfortable writing TFs in 3rd and even 2nd person and maybe it could have worked changing the perspective. I just might edit this story using your suggestion, though. Sato *could* gloat about dominating Coach Johnson and then command the narrator forget, wielding his tech one more time. EDIT: OK, I actually just submitted an edit, adding a bit here and there, but especially at the end, inspired by what Hypnothrill commented.

I would love to see a continuation Maybe they go after the rest of the jocks from the gym

I'd love to hear a bit of revenge by the brother, sneaking into Jensens room and shoving two pills into his cock, making him an insatiable top for his insatiable bottom brother

I am absolutely in love with this series! This story and entire series turned out to be one of my personal favorites on the site. The whole cast and plot you've created is just so good. Also kudos for actually creating an entire arc for the characters here. Can't wait for the final part!

Ah, so *he* was the villain after all. Nicely done and great resolution for Marc (and thematically) as well. In retrospect, I notice Marc didn't hear back from the guy he was planning to use as a trap to find the second ring holder. That could have made for a hot scene with a chance to hint further at who the villain was. :) Thanks for the wild ride!

this is an amazing story... such a great build up to chapter 3... and then that is such a hot installment... i hope there is more to come!!!

i really enjoy it would love a sequel to see what he does to them

I suspect Marc will be redeemed at the end of this tale. :) Now, who could the holder of the other ring be? My money's on Max. He saw the effect of the ring on Riley and Marc in an earlier chapter, maybe he decided to buy a ring of his own...

I remember this story from decades ago. back when the pygmalion website was still up. thank you for bringing it back here. this is one of the stories that was in the back of my mind for the longest time. Currently, i am straining in my cage trying not to blow my load. lol

can't wait for the season finale😍

I love a good predicament! A shame the odds are stacked unfairly against Dale... :) I was pleased to see that this chapter addressed my thoughts about the understated reaction to Marc totally reprogramming other characters. (Which were shared off GSS, in case someone other than the author is reading this.)

Coach Mark was always one of my favorites. thanks for revisiting this

Great ideas here, but it would benefit from slowing down the pace of the storytelling. The twist at the end (about Dr. Sato using his nanites to change Coach Johnson) is interesting, but it makes no sense to have the 1st person narrator revealing that this is something he'd never know. If you had to insert this bit of information into the story, it would have been better to have Dr. Sato gloating about changing Coach Johnson into his boyfriend, then commanding Coach Johnson and the narrator to forget he said anything.

never apologize for a chapter too long. we are here to lap it up!

So hot!

mhhhhh,I really envy Pine. I'd love to have powers like these

Love How the foot stink and there musk corrupts him! Love this mental Struggel!

normally,I'm not really into these remake/sequels but I believe in your talent to make this amazing

Okay. could be more erotic.

I like what dakeblade wrote turning the coach would be a great & hot idea. making them help Henry turn both teams.

This was so hot!!!! loved the little brother pov. Wish i could read your other work!

This is great! You don't need to change a thing; just have confidence that plenty of readers are finding this story hot as fuck!

This is dark! In a very hot way! The inflexion point -- where the teacher makes Mike *like* it -- is perfectly timed and perfectly described. Schoolroom fantasies are very much part of my mental inventory, and this one is one of the best I've experienced.