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4/18/21, 7:01 AM
Glad to see this is just intended as a prologue. I thought the premise here was very hot, but I missed having discernible characters with individual personalities and names.

4/18/21, 8:46 AM
@Hypnothrill oh wow thank you! I'm glad you found it hot, I was too worried it would be a boring first read. I already have most of the characters lined up, chapter 2 coming real soon following the adventures of Brinch :)
Nutiper
4/18/21, 8:09 AM
Something that's so fun about this story is that I can *feel* Charley becoming more and more heads-over-heels in lust with Tyzon — partly because that's the case with *me*, haha, with how your descriptions of him just get increasingly *hot* and specific. Like, Charley's not just obsessed with Tyzon's dick now, he's also fantasizing about his muscular ass too... (Though of course, there's a big hint that Tyzon's ansible is the one that's responsible for that new focus.) Speaking of which, I was really intrigued by the ambiguity where Tyzon says... > “You were explaining how some humans, ‘jocks,’ I believe you called them, sometimes engage in ‘horseplay’ in the showers, including forceful manual stimulation of the gluteal muscles. We tried to replicate this cultural phenomenon..." ...because I realize *Charley never actually says that*. He just thinks it, right? Immediately after Tyzon uses his ansible. Which makes me wonder: can Tyzon read Charley's mind? Or (more likely) is he directly feeding Charley a *lot* of his internal monologue, to the point that Tyzon slips and doesn't notice when Charley didn't actually say something — because Tyzon *knows* that Charley thought it? If so: *whew*. This is a really *hot* and subtle execution of a fun and tricky concept, so bravo.
Anonymous
4/16/21, 8:11 AM
> Attacking political parties I thought wasn’t allowed. I think people forget how homophobic Democrats are. They only pander to gays when it suits them. Please don’t post inflammatory political stuff. 🙄
Aug 9, 2019
4/18/21, 7:05 AM
Like Jacob, i could feel it coming, but somehow it just kept getting better and better!
4/18/21, 5:12 AM
Damn holy fuck now that was most definitely worth the wait...... I can't wait to see what else you have in store for Emit, I mean after that fuck scene and all it promises to be better each time..... fffuuuuccckkk!!!!!! I look forward to reading more about the brothers and what in store for them in playroom Vincent is building..... thank you for this wonderful gift
4/16/21, 7:54 AM
This path is getting better and better!

4/16/21, 8:13 AM
@Udems Aw, thanks! So, what do you like? I'm trying to see what I want to do with this path, because I'm often on it but have no clear storyline besides: "Sam take revenge", and most of my paths have this to an extent, I feel.

4/17/21, 4:35 AM
@BobbyBlobfish I don't see the problem even if the storyline repeats, the important thing is you liking what you do :) What I like? I like big (and/or older) guys falling one by one in his harem, totally amazing on that side. The way you turned the bodybuilder into a lesser man than Sam or this cop into a personal butler that is still "straight", nice. If you wanna ideas of a direction, you can go for the chief of police and more people of power in town to build a safe place where Sam can have everything he might want, his little kingdom lol I would have added the teachers and all that but you are already doing that path on an other story :3

4/17/21, 9:27 PM
@Udems Thank you! I'm trying to have everyone get their own style of enslavement, not sure how long it'll get, but if people don't mind repetition, I guess it'll be fine. It's just that I want to give each path his own style, so a close storyline can be tricky, but I guess they're different enough that people seems to be able to say what happened previously? Police station, hadn't though of that! Great idea! And I guess I should write a bear character. Variety in man, dammit, I wrote too many blonds and not using most of them! And a bear could go plenty of ways...

4/18/21, 4:25 AM
@BobbyBlobfish The how we get to it it was differentiate each path even tho the enslavement can be similar or the same, so don't worry about that! Bear characters? OMG YES, I love bears-like men turned into slave, hairy, big, chubby, there are not many of them around <3 Those and black guys :P You have many places to touch, motorcycles men, mechanics, firemen, politicians... and now the police chief I mentioned before :3 You can also play with fetishes, the bodybuilder had a bit of that with the armpit. A personal favorite is feet but you do you, you are doing an amazing work :3
Mar 13, 2021
4/18/21, 3:41 AM
amazing!
4/18/21, 3:30 AM
This is the hottest story I have ever read.
4/18/21, 2:56 AM
so hot. can't wait to see what happens next
4/18/21, 2:52 AM
hehe hot!
4/17/21, 1:13 PM
Love this story, right down my street being A Skinhead Myself a fellow Skinhead is born Miles seemed stuck up it did no say, but i bet he treated other as lower beings

4/18/21, 2:26 AM
@MalSkin fucking agree more of this is what I have been missing for months
4/18/21, 1:26 AM
so far so good
4/18/21, 12:46 AM
Nice story. Hope to have sequels to reveal the auction and The Sheik.
4/17/21, 11:29 PM
Wonderful and vivid. I love the attention to detail, the personality changes, and the way the sex scenes unfolded. I am good at visualization, and this looked like a high-class art film in my imagination . Bravo!
4/16/21, 7:27 PM
Smol rant: don't really comment on the internet in general but here i go: I absolutely love where the path is going and the general plot of the story (shoutout to @Udems for dat, luv u). This is one of the first, if not the very first, series I read on the site. All the paths I've read were bombs (except Will's path cuz the dude sux) so no doubt I'll love almost all things u guys dish out for the series! Beside that, I also see a lot of "building a harem" from previous paths, not that I'm complaining, so maybe you can go on similar path and go to town with the homophobes or just like turn the police station into a chamber... side note: love path 4 but no one is picking up on it... kinda sad actually for such a good start turns to a dead end...

4/17/21, 4:52 AM
@FHX1 Thank you :3 I wanted to set a simple but steady plot line that could go anywhere so everyone can do whatever they feel like and I'm glad there are people who enjoy writing and those who enjoy reading them <3 Path 4? Yeah, I remember that one, perhaps there are not many into the kind love path? Truth be told, I would love to read more as well, sad I am too lazy to write xD

4/17/21, 9:50 PM
@FHX1 Thanks! Not commenting much on the Internet either, I know how it feels! I wasn't sure if anyone but me cared about this path, so seeing people comment on how they love it is really sweet! It also was one of my first stories I read and I started writing on this series, so If you want to see something or want to start writing, me and Math_Reez want to see more people writing for this series, and I'm always interested in ideas, so don't hesitate! If you want, we can read what you try to write, we read each others stories before publishing to see what we can improve. People want to see more police, eh? Didn't even though of it! I do have several ideas now that I was sent on that path (*snort*) but I have another chapter I'm writing, other stuff I'm doing, but It seems to be on high demand so I'll probably try to make one when I have more time. Thinking about maybe having Leo interact with a police officer to, but as a white person not sure I would do it justice. However, I want to give each path it's own flair, so not sure I'll do another Harem. Now that I think about it... huh, did I make that many harems? I'm not super interested in explicit sex so maybe not in fact =] Not sure, but I don't think it'll be a harem this chapter, I'm going for a household, and a "very" pro-gay neighborhood. Path 4... seems to be the most popular chapter, honestly, only chapter who actually has the little pictures other than "not enough rating." The problem is that the original author has a writer block to finish the chapter he was writing next, and I'm not sure how I could write a worthy follow-up so I'm afraid to pick up the chapter... But I agree it's sad no sequel seems to be happening soon... P. S: And I didn't enjoy writing about Will much because I found him to be awful, so that check out. I think the weakest path I made though was the Chad one. I wouldn't mind somebody "rebooting" it. If you liked something about it, though, I guess I can try to put myself in it, I want to develop Chad, I just had no idea what to do with him and I think it shows.
M
4/17/21, 6:03 PM
Love it so far, very hot to see his internal drama. I hope we will see some kind of character arc for Jake and not only him being dominated by everyone, though is sexy to see this former straight dom being so easily manipulated.
4/17/21, 5:41 PM
Hell yeah! What a great update! 😛😛😛
Gingcub
4/17/21, 11:41 AM
love this and waiting -rock hard- for week two!
4/17/21, 10:46 AM
Love it! Very well written. Great sex scene, and great job building up to it.
4/17/21, 9:54 AM
Loved this story, I have realized all of your previous stories are in my Favourites. I particulary love the idea of spurting your mind out through your cum. Love it Keep the great stories coming.
4/17/21, 9:31 AM
itd be awesome if he body swapped with his son
4/17/21, 6:26 AM
I'm enjoying your story so much. I agree the comment above: perhaps true love can better the spell. I think that the idea of Willem being versatile with Jake and Jake developing his inner surfer self can be a great path to the story. Thanks for writing
Geo
4/16/21, 6:24 PM
I hate to over think a fun sexy story, but I hate when a lighthearted sexy story turns into a story where someone is blackmailed into outing themselves or forcibly outed. It just makes me not like the characters doing that, which is too bad for this story cause I kind of dug Jake and Willem up to this point. I can't help but hope the direction swerves with a twist that they don't end up doing that. Also ditto to Taylor about hoping he doesn't lose his muscles. I feel like way too many stories lean too far into sissification/twinkification.

4/17/21, 6:23 AM
@Geo Yay, someone who agrees haha. I mean, don't get me wrong some of those stories are hot and all but...I'm a gay guy that is into men, and a lot of them end up making them extremely feminine with such small dicks that they refer to them as clits, which is just...unfortunate. Granted, I don't really like the whole dick shrinkage thing to start with because the bigger a dick is the better imo, so. And I would normally agree with you about the blackmail thing, but in a case for someone like him...I'm ok with it. He is in a position of power and could help pass laws or encourage sentiment that could get people hurt, or killed, and from the way he treated Willem during their encounter, I feel as if he would eventually end up hurting, killing, or causing the death of someone with his actions, because I mean seriously he suggesting PNPing to an 18 year old that had never done anything harder then weed and alcohol, that...is dangerous. I do however worry that, based on how they had sex, that if they do release the video that he'll claim it was rape...because he was being ridden by Willem and not actively fucking him. Speaking of weed, I find it interesting that it hasn't been mentioned any about Willem smoking anymore since the foursome with his former friends.
4/17/21, 6:13 AM
Another great chapter! The last image in particular--of glass globes of memories shattering--is striking. Plus I love that Willem's character development is going at a reasonable pace: he maintains some of his homophobia and ignorance, and it gets better slowly, not all at once. Maybe true love will break the curse, and Willem will have to face his changed fate!
4/17/21, 4:31 AM
I love your writing style with its blend of sex and humor. It reminds me of Derek Williams'. Very hot chapter!
4/17/21, 4:29 AM
More teachers to the harem, why not? <3 I like adults obeying younger people :3
4/17/21, 4:01 AM
Nice story, but have a few questions? If we're assuming that the story just about men turning into cavemen, when the absence of so many people even in a small town be noticed assuming everyone has access to some form of social media/any trucks drivers going missing/noticing that no one's picking out there delivering? Even if a small town finishes it still leaves a impact on the economy. I know where on Gay spiral stories.com, but what about the women and children in your story did the gas knock them all out, to make them vanish, with such a bad deterrent to them that they left the town. Because the men all suddenly starting the smell then slowly transforming would raise red flags for the rest of the population.
4/17/21, 2:33 AM
I wish you hadnt stopped. This was turning out to be a good series
4/17/21, 1:02 AM
I live to serve the
Anonymous
4/17/21, 12:58 AM
who would have thought we had so many republican or "trumplican" readers on this site? this is a very integral part of the story with Willem becoming something more than he was last chapter...aka more gay! thats the point of this story and this site. just because he wrote about a very real problem inside the republican party, it shouldn't take away from the rapid continuation of Willem's conversion in this story.