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9/6/21, 2:53 AM
I live to serve the Virus
Anonymous
9/6/21, 1:36 AM
I live to serve the Virus
9/6/21, 1:24 AM
omg this is so fricking interesting I love it!! pls tell me there will be more
Anonymous
9/5/21, 11:29 PM
This was amazing!

9/6/21, 12:56 AM
Thank you. Glad you enjoyed 😄
9/6/21, 12:40 AM
I always enjoy a good role reversal story like this. Great job.
9/6/21, 12:33 AM
Woah. I had NO idea I would be in ghost muscle-worship, but here we are! I'm really enjoying this story. It's a fresh, creative new twist on old themes. And superbly written and developed. And yes, the size and muscle scenes had me raging! It seems as if the ghosts might be stealing Rob's life force and are then growing bigger and stronger while he shrinks... and I'm for it. It will inevitably lead to more exciting scenes between him and ghosts and I suspect it will have an interesting impact on the relationship between Alan and Rob as well, now that Alan is the bigger man. Story: Favorited
9/5/21, 11:55 PM
You know? I tend to escape stories that involve chastity cages because that's something have never caught my attention. But of course I wasn't going to skip a chapter of one of my favorite stories for that! I found this chapter very enjoyable, you always give so much to like. The piss control was a totally unexpected nice surprise, the fisting was great, and the shrinking deliciously demeaning. Zachery and José in love are a sweet touch. But the dialogues... oh, man. "That’s cause you no longer use your dick anymore, Cody. You’re a pussy-boy in the old west.” and Cody happily giggling for that gave me the happy ending I needed (if you know what I mean). After that, I really see the attractive of the chastity cage thing, especially once Arthur and the other guys in the ranch notice it! The is delicious, really delicious, buddy.
9/4/21, 9:27 AM
There are some very hot scenes here, but I would have enjoyed this chapter a lot more without the explicit descriptions of the women being brutally murdered.

9/4/21, 10:28 AM
@Hypnothrill agreed

9/5/21, 12:09 AM
I'm curious how would you write the scene? How would you write the berserk Pyre Bruins attack on the police officer's. I have much to learn telling stories so any writing suggestion is always welcome.@Hypnothrill

9/5/21, 4:25 AM
@Big-Zargo 12 I don't think you needed to kill the women off, which to me kills the erotic mood. One option, of course, would be to set the chapter in an all-male police station. But you also have the device of the Pyre Bruins' transformative cum. Why couldn't that land on one of the female officers and transform her into a male Pyre Bruin?

9/5/21, 11:13 PM
@Hypnothrill . MMM.... I'll keep that in mind in the future about death being a mood killer. To be honest with you I didn't think that an all-male police station were actually thing. Don't get me wrong I knew they were some in the olden times. There is a reason why the Fire Titan did not allow the female officers to become Pyre Bruins. I won't say more about the fire Titan motivations,that would be spoilers.
9/5/21, 11:11 PM
I can tell this is going to be awesome. Next chapter can't come fast enough
9/5/21, 10:28 PM
This was phenomenal! made me so fucking hard. Wish there was more !