Recent Comments

10/10/21, 3:30 AM
Just finished the story from the start. I'm loving it, and love that you're letting comments vote on the next card. I would like to suggest when you do count the votes, maybe count them in a different way to make ties feasable? It would be difficult depending on the number of votes, but like... counting each option's votes, subtracting the lowest option from all 3 (so the lowest has 0 now), and then if one option has twice as much as the other or more, it wins, but if it's less than that, then both are chosen. Either way, My vote is for werewolves! I'm excited to read the next part, Happy Halloween!
10/10/21, 3:23 AM
gentle yet firm fits the flow so far. gentle.
10/10/21, 3:13 AM
The plot part of this chapter was interesting, and I liked Bernard (poor guy). The public sex show is not my thing though.
10/10/21, 2:32 AM
Not my usual cup of tea, but very pleasantly surprising. I really enjoyed it all the way through and look forward to seeing more from you!
10/10/21, 1:33 AM
The only thing I don't really understand so far is why they broke every bone in Tempest's body (just about) when he was captured, even though he was so easily taken over by the big bad. Was it just to make the rescue seem plausible? Seems harsh!
10/10/21, 1:12 AM
Trick or treat
9/26/21, 12:14 AM
before i get to mac i want to say this: i love how little lying is in this chapter. Vince doesn't lie to his uncle hardly at all, and neither does Emit to Sam. Sure, they leave out details, but they are honest and don't try to hide whats happened over the past few days by putting up any veneer of 'nothing to see here! no changes! all normal!' and i really enjoyed that from both of them. Mac's flaw is so dangerous. conversion therapy? zero privacy? treating a grown adult with zero agency? all under the guise of "but you wont get hit or treated with anything but well intentioned emotional abuse, so that's better, right?" he doesn't see the problem with his point of view, or his offer. No wonder Vince gravitated to him, of the four of them, Mac is the most subtle of abusive styles of homophobia. hoping for a "PROUD and OUT doting husband" build for Mac. one that makes his dad his wanton slut he keeps at his heels, while sitting next to his uncle and getting the loving relationship fantasy he wants and needs. he can even threaten his father and brothers that he is going to go live with his uncle so he will only be so available to work in his family's punishments. i don't think thats a good idea, because the ready access is necessary to begin and tailor their punishments. still, its a good motivator. not sure what to do with sam. He runs a gym, so either making him workout all the time healthily possible to 'sweat' out his shittiest aspects, or giving him an unreasonable craving for fattening food every time he thinks something homophobic but then make him attracted to his own fat, maybe?

9/27/21, 7:08 AM
@Mind Labyrinth I love the addition of Mac and now it's getting me interested in how he would seek forgiveness from Vince. The physical pain Erik caused means he must seek pleasure in pain. The mental anguish Eli caused means he must seek pleasure in humiliation. The neglect Emit caused means he must seek pleasure in subservience and dependency. Mac is another angle to explore, where he wanted to force his views on Vince. I like your take where Mac becomes out loud and proud and brings Emit to heel. Emit also needs someone to keep him and his holes busy in Vince's stead while Vince doles out and molds Eli and Erik. And whenever Sam enters the picture, having all four under thumb and blissed out in their punishments would certainly be helpful.

10/3/21, 3:46 AM
@Mind Labyrinth, I'm so glad you liked the chapter, and thank you for your feedback! as for Mac's new persona, while i dont want to spoil anything, your not far off. stay tuned for the big reveal! as for Sam, no worries, I have plans for him ;) thanks for sticking with the story and the big, beautiful comment!

10/3/21, 3:50 AM
@sexydance10sp,I'm glad your enjoying the series so far, and happy to see that the poetic justice of Erik,Eli, and Emit's punishment wasnt lost along the way. keep reading to find out the fate of all the assholes in Vince's life :)

10/3/21, 5:00 AM
@Blackjinx123 I love getting the update emails that tell me you've updated! i am so admiring that even though this is your first posted fic, that you've stuck with it as impressively as you have. I always delight in waiting patiently for another chapter, because i would hate for you to feel rushed or pressured to write something that is clearly a labor of love. Thank you for sharing this with us time and again!

10/9/21, 7:00 AM
@Mind Labyrinth, your spoiling me with all your comments! but in all seriousness, thank you so much for your kind words and feedback. an author is nothing without their readers. thank you for your continued support! as for your patients for another chapter, it will be rewarded within the next few days :D

10/9/21, 11:19 PM
@Blackjinx123 *high pitched undignified squealing* ... … ……… AHEM! How wonderful!

10/9/21, 11:47 PM
@Mind Labyrinth I think the reaction was apropriated, just like i had seeing the League of legends world championship
11/21/16, 6:11 PM
Thank you both for your nice and helpful comments, they're most appreciated. I'm using MS Word's spell and grammar check, and I fix all errors it brings up, at least the ones I agree with. But there are those things MS Word just can't detect and especially common phrases which I might use inappropriately or could be used in a better way. And, of course, I've read through the text before posting it. Only to notice right after the text went online, that there were a myriad of additional little errors I had missed. Thank god, the new site allows us to edit our texts! Thanks a lot Hugh! :) I'd really welcome any help by anyone willing to read the texts upfront and give me hints. You would be the first to read any episode and you can even give me input which might change the story! Now, isn't that some deal?! :) I will upload the first real episode tonight, please excuse me now, I have to proofread it once again :)

leonardoPT
10/9/21, 10:31 PM
@sexdroid012 I missed my future an an historian. But I keep that curiosity. Did you post that first episode?

leonardoPT
10/9/21, 11:29 PM
@leonardoPT @sexdroid012 Some mist is clearing up. In 2016 @sexdroid012 got an upgrade to @sexdroid013, being @Martin. After all I might have been a good historian. Not a very smart one, I must admit, but ending up serving science. Well, let's say: serving, lol
10/9/21, 9:57 PM
Whattamybid? Whattamybid? I got $1000 from absman420 -- goin' once... goin' twice...
Anonymous
10/9/21, 9:22 PM
This is so hot! I love your dadson stories so much!!
Jul 29, 2012
10/4/21, 9:43 AM
So hot! Love the progression to dumb and horny

10/9/21, 9:14 PM
Thanks! I always feel like no matter how much I push myself in the gym or what clothes I wear or how I act, I'm still using the same brain and that limits who I can be. I thought it'd be fun to flip that around, and show a guy who's using a different brain and how that changes who he can be.
10/9/21, 8:45 PM
Ugh, that kid is a nasty piece of work.
10/9/21, 7:44 PM
really liked it, would have enjoyed more description of guys transforming, but parts there were awesome. looking forward to next part, if sex demon wins be hot if zeke gets revenge by using one
10/9/21, 2:23 PM
fun fact: the original minotaur, prince Aristeus/Asterion (the translation can go either way) of Crete was a grandson of Helios, the titan of Sun, so you can include some fire and light magic to them

10/9/21, 6:46 PM
Oh interesting, may do that. @darkblade2814

10/9/21, 6:48 PM
@ArdanWolfe I'm a greek/roman mythology buff, so I know a lot of this kind if trivia
10/9/21, 1:44 PM
This is fantastic and I love it. I've used Antionus myself as a handy classics God of dudesex and I love this take on the monsterfucking we all desperately deserve from Classic mythology. Keep it up man!

10/9/21, 6:44 PM
Thank you, glad you enjoyed. And more monster sex to come 😊@Dace
10/9/21, 6:33 PM
im kinda glad bud wasn't some sinister evil guy and let the boys be together. call me whatever, im a sap for a happy couple.
Anonymous
10/9/21, 6:06 PM
Was just reading this again and this is insanely hot! I can't stop reading it. The way Tanner corrupts Pastor Peter gets me going every time I come back to it.
10/9/21, 5:55 PM
nice, I'm always eager for more of this series. can't wait to see the auction
10/9/21, 5:35 PM
cant wait to see more.
10/9/21, 4:16 PM
i have been loving your stories!!

10/9/21, 4:50 PM
@hypnofeet3 thank you so much!
Sam
10/9/21, 4:17 PM
SEX DEMONSSSSS!!!!!!
10/9/21, 4:12 PM
I can haz sex demon plz?
10/9/21, 3:44 PM
No need to apologize! I really enjoyed this chapter. And I think you made the right call. If you had gone into a ton of detail for seven full days there's a chance it would've become repetitive and too complicated. Whereas this was a super fun concept and kept it moving. Though I'm still sad Ass Roulette didn't win. :P For next week I gotta vote Option 2.
10/9/21, 3:01 PM
werewolves please !
Jonanator
10/9/21, 2:29 PM
nice.
10/9/21, 2:10 PM
so hot. It went a little faster than i would like to see, but i love a good story about a boy finding his rightful place serving a daddy! Excited to read the next part

10/9/21, 2:27 PM
@Camo Brute Glad to hear :) Next part is a bit longer and kinkier. I love to hear any thoughts/feedback about it!
10/9/21, 2:08 PM
Werewolf, the promise of that special transformation is too curious
10/9/21, 1:36 PM
"This is basically murder." My thoughts exactly.
10/9/21, 12:57 PM
Werewolf please
Loving it
10/9/21, 10:28 AM
most effective use of a bro fist bump I've ever encountered <3 Great job

10/9/21, 11:55 AM
@Loving it ahaha thank you. Just a solid moment of love and gratefulness.