Recent Comments

Martin
2/7/22, 10:27 PM
Wow, such an amazing and heart breaking story. It's a gem on this site!

2/8/22, 12:38 AM
@Martin Wow...I about died reading that!!
Anonymous
2/7/22, 11:46 PM
I live to serve the virus
2/7/22, 11:18 PM
You weave such an erotic tale. Dog, how I love your writing! You entrance us and bring us into your world -- it's just wonderful. Excited to read more!
2/7/22, 10:54 PM
Rubbrsome, I hope you never stop writing. When i see your name above a new story I have to drop everything and immediately read it. This one is an instant favourite.
2/7/22, 10:53 PM
Your stories are absolutely fantastic and i look forward to reading more and more
2/7/22, 10:51 PM
Grey knows how to work his big brother. What's next, Jack?
2/7/22, 10:18 PM
I absolutely want another chapter of this! excellent story and writing.
2/7/22, 7:01 PM
Nice, short, and sweet story - I loved the descriptions of what he was thinking and experiencing. As well as the ambiguity of where his cock size was coming from, whatever the Seminal Revolution is... lots to ponder about if the Priapist was busy rewriting more reality changes somewhere other than in the chat, or if Jesse just missed the messages. On a narcissistic note, I'm so happy you took my suggestion for a title (as relayed through Kuro :D )

2/7/22, 10:03 PM
Razz TFs helped me design how people respond to Priapist reality changes—I’m glad you enjoyed it! I had fun making it more of an immersive, “live in the story” vibe, and I’m pleased that people accepted the ambiguity—that ambiguity is going to unfold more and more as I post more short stories like this one. Thanks for the read! (Oh, and thanks for the title, too. It was an instant choice.) @Noam de Pluma
Malefiscar
2/7/22, 9:53 PM
Definitely wouldn't mind a second chapter, I think I want to see all three of these characters get a happy ending
Martin
2/7/22, 8:48 PM
Your writing is amazing. So lively. I wish I could write anywhere as good as you. Are you sure you've got the right job? You should be a writer, not a singer. I mean it! This story is very pleasant to read, but of course it's no wanking story at all. Like so many of your stories it's so absolutely fantastic (in the original sense of the word) and special that one can just wonder where you get your ideas from. One thing: Eddy is so very bold. Can you imagine yourself kissing a monster in that situation? Or did he have a thing for monsters all along and just didn't realize it? And his hormones just took over? If I put a normal (young, hapless) man in the position of the monster, I can't see myself doing any of what Eddy did... But ok, he just must be very open and impulsive, right? 😜

2/7/22, 9:43 PM
@Martin Hehe… Boy, I sure hope this story carries on as a fluffy silly tale about infatuation, and not an insurmountable moral knot that is gonna keep it’s author sleepless for about three weeks. I didn’t go into Eddy’s motivations in the writing, (décision artistique, merci beaucoup) but I believe Yarif brought these impulsion out in him. Yarif makes him feel happy, impulsive, in the moment, and that was one of the first big attractions for Eddy, and why he later struggles to glean if he loves him, or if Yarif is simply overloading his otherwise “fine I suppose” life, with happy, silly, impulsive life-living life.
2/7/22, 1:25 AM
Wow, my head is spinning, but I am so proud of Mark, and happy for the both of them and Steve's future! Well done!!

2/7/22, 9:42 PM
@NeedControlling Thank you. Glad you enjoyed the series!
2/7/22, 1:13 AM
Such a good story, and what a **fantastic** update!! 🤩🤩🔥🔥

2/7/22, 9:42 PM
@NeedControlling Aw thank you so much! :D
2/7/22, 8:39 PM
I'm sorry to hear you feel that way. I always look forward to your writing and have been a dedicated fan for years. I love your work and look forward to reading whatever you decide to publish. This is an amazing story either way. thank you for all your work.
Anonymous
2/7/22, 6:59 PM
the second chapter never came :,(
2/7/22, 5:41 AM
An acceptable ending. There did not seem to be much the two could do to overcome their differences. It was a very believable ending. Real life rarely ends with magic spells fixing everything and this story did not either. I can relate to the storyline. I feel I am always just outside of other people's lives; looking in and wondering why I never seem to belong. I do have friends in my life and I can appreciate their happiness but companionship has always escaped me. I'll be honest and say I don't actively look for someone. I guess I just hope for a guy to just appear as if by magic at my door. It is not going to happen but I don't see myself finding anyone in any other way. A simpler way of saying it is confidence is sexy and I am plagued by self doubt. My inner self is hidden from most as if in a costume. It is one I have slowly crafted through years of interaction with people. It is not fake but merely an understanding that most people in your life are not interested in who a person truly is. They want lighter fare like talk of the weather or minor annoyances. I am unsure if I am a monster expecting people to care more or they are the monsters for not wanting deep explorations of interpersonal life. [feel free to delete this if it seems too personal.]

2/7/22, 8:13 AM
@Cutlerfan Delete!? You must be kidding, on the contrary, thank you for *being* personal. It's reading responses like this that make the effort and agonizing worth while.

Martin
2/7/22, 10:59 AM
@Cutlerfan I think the amount of people spending their life in involuntary solitude is way bigger than we know. So many people have problems reaching out to others, they are afraid of rejection, that they're not good or sexy enough, that they're too inexperienced and so on. I guess if everyone could look into the head of other people and realize, that so many people share the same problems as we do, it wouldn't be that difficult ... But we only see the bold and loud people, they dominate our daily lives and they're what we compare our attributes with.

2/7/22, 3:13 PM
@The Dirty Spiders I'm glad you like it. Your story really reached me.

2/7/22, 3:18 PM
@Martin I agree. I’ve always felt on the outside to degree but it is, at times, a unique vantage point to see society with most of the facades absent.

2/7/22, 6:56 PM
@Martin Thank you for joining in Cap'n. Now you're gonna have to read the WHOLE saga and rate and review it!!
2/7/22, 6:56 PM
mmm. loved it. very primal very horny. The growling at the end especially wonderful. using the sauna to make the Alpha smell permeate. the whole thing was lovely. thank you! cant wait for the next part (fingers crossed)
Feb 7, 2022
2/7/22, 6:55 PM
I wont say no to a zonked bill and legoshi ;3
2/5/22, 10:09 PM
very hot

2/7/22, 6:23 PM
@Benv Awesome!
2/5/22, 7:06 PM
Oh, man. This just keeps getting better and better!

2/7/22, 6:23 PM
@Jockmorphr Thanks!
2/5/22, 5:57 PM
Sex toy, cum eater ... Hmm, I wonder what other themes Professor Jackson will come up with for the other jocks.

2/7/22, 6:23 PM
@Retrofantasia Yeah, trying not to be too outlandish while also keeping things interesting is the
2/5/22, 3:29 PM
Oh boy this is turning into some hot jock to slut story. My favorite by the way. Can't wait to see what happens to the coach.

2/7/22, 6:22 PM
@Redcoma100 Hopefully whatever I come up with for the coach does your interest justice! I always have trouble with them
Jonanator
2/7/22, 6:00 PM
there should be another chapter. hot
Kyle Cicero
2/7/22, 5:36 PM
Damnnnnn lol
Anonymous
2/7/22, 5:34 PM
Always excited to see a new chapter of this going up! Big fan of the steamy chapters, but I love the fact that you’re also taking the time to bring in these world building moments too. Looking forward to seeing what’s going to happen next
2/7/22, 4:30 PM
So hot! Greyson seems to know what he's doing. We're in good hands as long as he's running the show

2/7/22, 4:46 PM
@stimle thanks bud!
2/7/22, 4:32 PM
great story! part of me wished Danny was right and he would grow again!
2/7/22, 4:29 PM
Superb story. Thank you. Interested to hear more about the use of rubber in converting and seducing the new slaves for Master...
spiralthiago
2/7/22, 3:19 PM
more please more 🔥🔥🔥
Kyle Cicero
2/7/22, 3:01 PM
I see another hot story cum-ing:)
2/7/22, 2:25 PM
Incredibly hot!