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3/16/22, 11:46 PM
i thoroughly enjoyed this, particularly bringing him back to awareness. Well done!
3/15/22, 7:13 PM
Loved seeing a nonbinary character in this story! Very curious about what's going on with Ercole's new powers!

3/16/22, 10:18 PM
@time.to.occur Always happy to represent less commonly seen minorities in my stories. But... Ercole has no powers? He was hypnotized by the stranger to use the machine without realizing it and to happily uses it to tweak Anstice's personality. I know i write a lot of magic & powers stories, but this is pure science-fiction.

3/16/22, 11:02 PM
@BobbyBlobfish On my first reading, it wasn't completely clear to me how that had operated and what exactly he had passed onto him! thanks for clarifying.
3/15/22, 3:21 AM
I really enjoyed this, there was some grammar funkiness in the latter half but I appreciate more NB characters on this stories. I actually would wanna know where it goes next but I feel like it might be a closed ending. Also, do you know who the models are? like their names?

3/16/22, 10:22 PM
@TheSatanScully Didn't notice problems, besides me not knowing what term to use to describe a non-binary. I try to get variety in my stories. I am interested in what you though was weird. Having a NB was an idea I just didn't really knew where to put, and I realized it fit really well for this as i wrote it. And yes, it was planned as a one-off. Maybe I'll come back to it if i have an idea. But it's far from the only story I would just describe couple stuff if I wrote more, and I have a glaring lack of experience in that domain. And for the models... No, sorry. Pictures found on the net. The images I used for Ercole did have a name, though. Toni Mahfud. No idea for the other two, unfortunately.
Jonanator
3/14/22, 8:18 PM
loved it.

3/16/22, 10:16 PM
@Jonanator Oh thanks! I'm working on many stuff slowly at the same time, so happy to see that they are still people who are waiting for my stories =)
3/16/22, 4:51 PM
Love these 2 characters. I enjoyed reading about Connor and Donny, and so really like the 2 ex-robins even more so. Please keep them the center of this story. It is fucking sexy and hell.
Anonymous
3/16/22, 9:19 AM
Would love to see some competition between the lads - perhaps Zeus wants to have a little fun. Like comparing their bodies more, or seeing who cums first, who is stronger, more dominant, how big the size difference is INSIDE their thongs. ;)

3/16/22, 3:28 PM
@ i was actually thinking of something like that for ch4 but you've given me some very good idea. thanks!

Anonymous
3/16/22, 3:38 PM
Happy to help! @GoonNoob
Anonymous
3/16/22, 5:43 AM
I love this series so much! Keep going! This is so sexy love the thongs so much and the humiliation. Can't wait to read more!

3/16/22, 3:24 PM
@ i hope you a being a thong fag at home reading the story. I am writing them.
3/16/22, 12:38 AM
Another incredible chapter! Ordinarily I skip sex scenes, but you write them so well that I couldn't resist reading them all. I have a suspicion that the mysterious umbrella-carrying man is the original owner of the briefcase keeping an eye on his prey... ;p My favorite has been the gold and silver! Shiny metallic sounds interesting. :)

3/16/22, 3:23 PM
@Feed Your Head shiny thongs are my favorite. As for the other thing... spoilers ;)
3/15/22, 3:52 AM
What a great story! It has taken a dark turn at the moment, but I appreciate your skilled world-building throughout the series and the resolution to the mystery in this chapter. If Brett and Liam get back together, they may be happier on more equal status with them both being breeders. I have enjoyed the journey you have taken us on thus far and look forward to where you take us next.

3/16/22, 1:39 PM
@Hypnoguy67 Thanks glad you are enjoying the story.
3/14/22, 7:31 PM
God, this was hot! I think I'm in love with the Russo's. Their dynamics seem to be the warmest of them all, and I guess that makes the corruption of its male members even hotter. Seeing how the big patriarch can't keep himself from swearing in a hardly repressed sexual frenzy was such a turn on. So it was Tony's confession to being a slut while looking at his *daddy* in the eye, or Gino's arousal from the dirty talk used towards his brother. I'll love to see how this continues whenever it continues. Also, I get such a kick out of Tanner making people believe his fragrant lies. I had to suppress my laughter when he insisted that it was Tony's birthday and they all politely denied it, and then he insisted and suddenly everyone felt like fools for forgetting. Priceless! I also love the way he subtly twists people's perception and principles with the most innocent sounding suggestions, or how he uses what he finds on people's minds so he can play them into doing what he fancies. The way he's written makes him one of my most favorite characters ever! I've loved him from chapter zero and I wish that he comes back with more perverse adventures after he finishes playing with this community. Even if it's in the distant future and after a long rest from writing him, I know I'd always be thrilled to witness his depraved ways. Thank you so much S. Q. Neemie for continuing this story!

3/14/22, 7:49 PM
@Piko Thanks, man! Your enthusiasm really means a lot. I'm grateful you're patient but I'm gonna try to be a little more regular in posting, if life slows down just a bit. And I have a few ideas about Tanner for the future. The thought of him stealing a guidance counselor's position for his next adventure has potential...

3/16/22, 1:18 PM
@S. Q. Neemie, just knowing that you already have some ideas for Tanner's future made my day! :D Thanks!
3/16/22, 9:45 AM
It's kinda been said ad nauseum in the comments already but I was not emotionally ready for this chapter! After spending so long with the characters and getting to know them it feels kinda painful to see them suffer like this. If jonas gives Brett his voice and tits and Liam gets cunted I feel like I'm gonna go full Annie Wilkes lol - jokes aside I do trust and respect your vision, and will be awaiting the next installments - though I'm almost scared to read on

3/16/22, 12:39 PM
@silverstat LOL ;- ) SLIPPED AWAY! SLIPPED AWAY? HIS DICK DIDN'T JUST SLIP AWAY! YOU DID IT! YOU DID IT! YOU DID IT! YOU DID IT TO MY LIAM!
3/15/22, 11:31 AM
woah that is so hot. love love love stinky feet. and the mind control is insanely hot too!!

Rubber_Lover14
3/15/22, 1:08 PM
@James Heller Thank you very much. as you can probably tell, i love smelly feet too. I'm glad you enjoyed the story

3/16/22, 8:49 AM
@Rubber_Lover14 well I thank you for it. Stinky feet are the happiness in life, and you brought a lot of happiness into my life
3/16/22, 7:09 AM
AARRRRRGGGGG!!!!!! That Little Dickless Prick! I'm having trouble sleeping I'm so perfectly pissed! He simply can't get away with this. There must be some special level of Albion hell for such as It! Everyone eventually finds their orgasmic bliss in one form or another but he must not be rewarded with such. A third state of being there must be, specially designed for one who would endanger the entire race for this evil end, AND for the whole Cadre of collaborators regardless! The Unsatisfiables, forever agonized with unrequited Need! Good Night maybe....
Martin
3/13/22, 4:31 PM
I was looking forward to read this tonight... But now, after reading these comments, I'm afraid. If there's one thing I cannot take, then it's injustice and even worse, if the bad guys frame the innocent protagonist and get away with it. And from what I get from the comments, this seems to be exactly what's happening. Otoh, I know that this story is worth to endure some pain on my side. So I will stomach it. Please please make your best to mend our wounds with the later parts!

Pb
3/16/22, 6:36 AM
@Martin I'll have to admit that this series is giving me depression. D:
3/16/22, 4:10 AM
Love what you do with all the character work here. Especially Jason who has to play the older "brother" who def knows Tim has a bit of a crush on him. Really shows how much they care for each other in different ways, even Batman. They're all trying so hard and it makes their disagreements so much more real.
3/16/22, 3:27 AM
That was the hottest one yet! Please continue
3/16/22, 3:15 AM
This was an intersting story. Enjoyed it very much.
3/15/22, 10:12 PM
You're writing Tim in Red Robin search and destroy mode, and I fucking LOVE it. The sex is *so* hot, and the characterization of Tim is solid. I have niggles about Clark being a homophobe, I don't buy it in comics, but for all intents and purposes, I'll go where your story takes us so who cares, tbh. I can't wait to see the next chapter(s).

3/15/22, 10:46 PM
@Some Guy See I don't see Clark as homophopic, I see him as a straight white male from the midwest it makes him uneasy and he doesn't know why. Also he was only talking in regards to the Superman symbol being connected to an alternative lifestyle, not the lifestyle itself. All things Lois would have beat out of him before Jon was born :)

3/16/22, 2:00 AM
@Jack Parker Don't get me wrong, I was a little surprised, but I assume you have plans to get Clark positively wrecked so I don't think it really matters in the big picture. I'm positive you'll do some great smut through this series

3/16/22, 2:23 AM
@Some Guy also remember this is the same Superman who got attacked by the gang of thugs and was almost raped using rags of Donnie's sweat...he already has some issues about homosexuality lol
Anonymous
3/16/22, 1:07 AM
i wish you made a sequel to this
EntrancedGay92
3/16/22, 12:26 AM
As someone with a leopard print underwear fetish, this is absolutely right up my alley!!

3/16/22, 12:28 AM
@EntrancedGay92 me too!
3/16/22, 12:16 AM
Similar to what Pwrliftermscl said above, I don't think or fantasize about rubber, but hot stories like this make me wish I did. What great material you wrote! The transformation of man to rubber was excellently done. Perfect having the last man captured so we can experience his transformation, knowing his buddy and T shirt man went through the same, with growing intrigue who the other two had been. And finding Tommy's pile of clothes on the floor was a great touch!
3/15/22, 11:45 PM
Again really enjoying the series! definitely thought the more fem style ones were interesting, would like to see more of those that still fit the guys. curious if the different styles/fits are meant to change the guys in different ways? like, did the squats make it so the boys would self lube? Glad Zeus is back so soon, hope they upgrade from the dildo soon for more fun

3/15/22, 11:58 PM
thanks @Botbot. I'm gonna try and incorporate different styles of thongs. I will say that the sissy thongs will make a return in one way or another ;) So far the only biological changes have been their body temperatures, increased sweat (which causes their holes to get wet), increased sperm productivity, permanent semi-hardons but decrease sensation but increased sensitivity everywhere else.
3/15/22, 9:37 PM
This was super hot. I liked the way things progressed, to where their holes became a focus. I'm glad their cocks still get hard and such, and it's great they cut without touching. I hope they play more with their butts, butts that need to be sniffed, licked, fingered, dildoed, and fucked. So them with Zeus is fun. Oh, so, strawberry buttsweat, interesting, very interesting. I'm glad they are distracted and don't need to steal, they are better off being fucked by the neighbors then being thief. Hehe But yeah, super sexy. Love the metal changes. I also like the way their butts are shown off.

3/15/22, 11:38 PM
@Heru Kane if you look back at chapter 1, the dildo is described of having a strawberry taste.
3/15/22, 9:48 PM
Oh, as an aside, I really like this faux-humiliation. I call it that cause they feel the humiliation but it's not really like they are being humiliated in public. The "Oh no what will my friend think of me" as he bounces on a dido and feels humiliated is hot.

3/15/22, 11:36 PM
@Heru Kane patience ;)
Oct 11, 2020
3/15/22, 11:00 PM
We desperately need lots more of this delicious sleaze!
3/15/22, 10:54 PM
I hope we see more chapters of this storyline. Lots of slutty sleazy fun potential!
3/15/22, 10:00 PM
First off, I want to say that I am really enjoying where you're taking this story, especially since you included how Tim would feel and react to this. Second, THANK YOU for doing justice not only to Tim but to Jason!

3/15/22, 10:44 PM
@ClosetedBoi thanks I love all my boys equally
Art
3/15/22, 9:43 PM
I hope that you are going to continue this past the 17 chapters that you posted before. I love it!
3/15/22, 8:05 PM
excited for chapter 3. Hopefully they start going to Zeus for more intense training. Becoming big burly himbos with little to no higher brain function. All they know how to do is fuck, suck, workout, eat and sleep.
3/15/22, 4:19 PM
This has quickly become one of my favorite stories in the site, it's so incredibly hot!! I love how oblivious they are to the changes and how gradual it's been. Something about the way you write makes them feel very real, excellent work!

3/15/22, 7:06 PM
Thank you so much @Luxor, you have no idea how happy I am to hear you say that :D