Recent Comments

5/20/23, 3:28 PM
Glad you are writing again. How can Brody still have his body hair. Also I would love if you added Jimmy as another jock bottom . A second suggestion is to make Brody the cum slut bottom boy of the wrestling team. But what ever you do I will enjoy it.

5/23/23, 2:54 PM
@[br6205](/user/show/10027864) I definitely second this. It does appear that something is slowly building up with Jimmy. Hopefully not another top to use Brody, so many of those already. The coach should definitely get rid of their body hair and even put them in chastity cages. Jock slaves like them only take not give.
5/23/23, 2:51 PM
Welcome Back! This story deserves to keep going. Brody is so close to being the perfect jock slave to his Coach/Master.
5/23/23, 2:34 PM
What a ride! I am so glad that you continued this and that they kept him. Stellato has a new life ahead of him. And hopefully that cage doesn't come off. Slaves like him don't get to cum. This chapter has me thinking several questions about what is going to happen next!
5/22/23, 3:04 PM
As a fan of good endings let me just say: GOD DAMNIT AHMED! For once in your life DON'T be so useful and resourceful. Okay, I got it out of my chest. I have to say I enjoyed reading this story very much. It was a very creative use of a classic trope and I could feel the tension of every scene being all or nothing for Ernest. It was interesting to see how Ernest's conscience has had declined as he gained more and more power and control (even if he owes almost everything to Ahmed). I do feel the ending was too Deus ex machinad but I have yet to read all of your stories so I can only look at it from a standalone setting rather than a shared universe. Either way, the Dr had been stopped and I am happy for it. You did a great job and I wait for your next story :)

5/22/23, 5:45 PM
@Reader Thanks for your comments! The Domination universe presupposes that if mind control was actually achievable, it would be in the hands of big players who would intervene when a spontaneous independent discovery occurs. So the epilogue in this story is not really part of the main arc, it’s more like ok, Dr. Wilshire’s story is over, he didn’t succeed at avoiding corruption. The end. Oh, btw, instead of a happily ever after, a big player took the drug from him. In that sense, it’s not a deus ex machina because the plot is already resolved by then.

5/23/23, 2:27 PM
@[Mafisto](/user/show/600927) Ohhhhhh okay Knowing the context of the over arc does make it a lot more logical. I have to say that the permise you have just proposed sounds really clever so if you'll excuse me, I'm going to do some reading now ;)
Willie Cici
5/23/23, 2:53 AM
I loved this whole series! Hot and well written.

5/23/23, 2:16 PM
@Willie Cici Thanks a lot, Willie! You’re the most prolific of us all.
5/16/23, 12:32 PM
Jack, each new chapter gets me higher and higher like a drug. You are the Master of stories. Thank you.

5/23/23, 1:27 PM
@[mjkuhl](/user/show/10020940) More than welcome bud.
5/16/23, 9:33 PM
🍆💦🍆💦🍆💦🤪 I want to be Sammy’s bitch.

5/23/23, 1:26 PM
@[John Rogers](/user/show/10022487) Right?
Steve
5/23/23, 1:23 PM
I too dream of being Sammy’s bitch, but if you consider the brain these stories actually come from, Jack Parker is the Master I yearn to serve.

5/23/23, 1:26 PM
@Steve :smirk:
5/23/23, 12:07 PM
This is so hot. I’m eagerly waiting for the next chapter!
5/23/23, 11:44 AM
This is intensely hot and well-described!
5/23/23, 10:07 AM
Really love this series! Can't wait to see it go further.
5/23/23, 9:38 AM
That was great, and I hope this story will continue!
Superbelt
5/23/23, 8:57 AM
I am glad you changed the end so that it could have more chapters. It is really hot, it deserves to be longer. Looking forward to next chapter.
5/23/23, 6:53 AM
I just stumbled upon this story and I have to say it is absolutely exquisite. Your writing is captivating and the story offered some unexpected twists and turns with an amazing outcome. I'm amazed you produced a story with such a high quality as your first submission. I would love to read a sequel to this.
5/23/23, 5:59 AM
Dang... DANG!
5/23/23, 5:59 AM
classic story; always amazing to reread! though it kind of is a question: why is this series so alluring and so sexy?
May 21, 2023
5/23/23, 5:26 AM
hmm this spider armour concept, is the spider more of a parasite or a symbiote?
5/23/23, 4:38 AM
Wow! One of my all time favorites. Masterful!
Mar 30, 2017
5/23/23, 3:38 AM
I would definitely love to see the continuation of this story!
5/23/23, 3:06 AM
Fuck!!! This is getting so good 😈😈😈
5/23/23, 2:49 AM
Part of me wants Tanner to win. I would love to read both possibilities, but either way will be interesting.
5/22/23, 11:11 PM
Dripping with parody more than Max was dripping bath water. Great job. Interested to see where things lead with the device.

Willie Cici
5/23/23, 2:47 AM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) As am I!
PromethiumJPM
5/23/23, 2:16 AM
Fuck and hell a win for the Fore Team!
5/23/23, 1:52 AM
Awesome start.. My cock was hard. Can't wait to read more.
PromethiumJPM
5/23/23, 1:34 AM
I get this story is not new, but sooooo fucking sexual! I binged this in a NSFW environment because it was that HOT! A trip to the urinal allowed me to see the results of humming at work! Damn @rubbrsome! Id love a chat to discuss a transformation of a 50+ gay male into a suitable rubberzed drone!

5/23/23, 1:49 AM
@[PromethiumJPM](/user/show/10022007) Thanks for the positive response to my story. I especially enjoy the thought of you being unable to resist pleasuring yourself in your workspace.
5/22/23, 8:42 PM
Hot. More :)

Majin Charles
5/23/23, 12:40 AM
@[gotacoolname](/user/show/234002) thanks!!
Anonymous
5/23/23, 12:02 AM
Great story, bad grammar.
5/22/23, 11:15 PM
I hope part 3 will be coming soon.
5/22/23, 11:05 PM
Incredibly hot and sext tale