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7/25/23, 4:20 AM
Those fucking sexy daddies are really insatiable. Our protagonist needs put all these bitches (jocks and daddies) in their place.
7/24/23, 11:12 PM
This is a great start! The premise is entertaining and Dirk and Deuce are fun characters. I'm definitely looking forward to your tales of this pair of hot cowboy studs. Yee haw! Your English is excellent, by-the-way! I don't think you need any help, but if you want someone to proofread it, just whistle... or send a message. :cowboy_hat_face:

7/25/23, 2:31 AM
@[Muscle-Flex](/user/show/2059714) Thank you so much, @Muscle-Flex :blush:! I'm glad you enjoy it, and I hope you enjoy with the future changes on Dirk and Deuce. It's a great relief for me to hear that you think my English ihave a good level. It makes me very happy and it takes a great weight off my shoulders! Thank you very much for the offer, I'll surely write to you when I have the next chapter ready, I would really like you to take a look at it and in addition to some corrections, I would love to hear your comments. Although I have a very clear idea of where the story is going, I'm also open to hear suggestions :cowboy_hat_face:.

7/25/23, 3:52 AM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) No problem! Just send me a message when you are ready. Seeing Dirk and Deuce drool while trying to speak is going to be fun - and very frustrating for them! Their shirts and chests are going to be a sticky mess.
7/25/23, 3:46 AM
The plot thickens... just like Jimmy's dick! I wonder what the janitor's access keys will allow Dexter to do? I hope Coach Jenkins is enjoying his freedom as he may not have it for much longer. The Bauer house is soon going to be pretty full and Dexter will have everything he needs for his business enterprises.That should be entertaining. I wonder how much the guys understand? Is there any part of their brains that registers what is happening to them? Thanks for another great chapter!
7/25/23, 2:44 AM
So, so glad you came back to this.
7/25/23, 2:33 AM
Oh wow interesting and fun and sexy. While I would prefer him being a dominant top him being a switch is fascinating. Him using Titles in Players and monsters is cool. Lots of potential and lots of fun.
7/25/23, 2:08 AM
I'm kinda hoping that Stephen will come up with something that will undo things and free Ethan from Ryan's hold. But I'm also interested in seeing if Stephen becomes a new model for the control the Coach and the school have on the wrestlers. But either way I'm looking forward to the next part of the story.
7/24/23, 9:24 PM
Oh my gosh, love the villains turning to superheroes (in a sense, since them being Faithful rangers are a menace to the society). I really hope you continue to expand this very hot and interesting universe you created.

7/25/23, 2:07 AM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) I will, eventually. Have another story that needs some attention now that I can write again.
7/24/23, 7:28 PM
I loved your story, it was a wonderful read. Love to see it expanded. After all there are other colors that can be added to the Pride Rangers. Have a great day.

7/25/23, 2:06 AM
@[Cerian](/user/show/907826) Thank you, and there most certainly are.
7/24/23, 5:42 PM
Fantastic story. I was expecting them to have their colors changed to the pride flag colors, maybe have Alex join as the sixth ranger if/when they do.

7/25/23, 2:06 AM
@[Timet](/user/show/2640172) Their colors were set by the image which inspired this whole story, so their wasn't much chance for me to go changing any of them. Adding more colors might be on the table whenever I get around to adding on to this.
Elm
7/25/23, 1:50 AM
A litrpg story here? Awesome!
2309lsdakfj
7/25/23, 1:23 AM
Just got back from Europe, got a massage at a bathhouse -- scrub, tea, and soap -- thought of this story, and nearly came right there.
7/25/23, 1:00 AM
I'm happy to see Connor and Will moving towards being a couple. They will do well together.
7/25/23, 12:57 AM
Can't wait for the next part. This installment was great
R P
7/19/23, 1:36 PM
Another great chapter - Trevor admitting how much he loves being used was super hot! Being pimped out by his best friend was the cherry on top :) Iโ€™m a little sad about Felix being flipped though, I liked Dom Felix.

7/19/23, 4:13 PM
@[R P](/user/show/2423100) Dom Felix is not dead

7/25/23, 12:43 AM
@[Tyrol](/user/show/36224) I'm glad to hear this. While the fantasy of the two of them being slutty whores side-by-side is awesome and would love that to continue, I also love the idea of Felix being able to be a dom for Trevor when they are alone and his own subby urges aren't as active. Great chapter. I loved the heat aspect and the acceptance. Plus all the hot sex and domination. So good! Love this series.
Gasuda
7/24/23, 10:26 PM
Finally, more demon transformation content! This was really hot!

7/25/23, 12:06 AM
@Gasuda Glad you enjoyed it! I, too, am a fan of demon transformation. Thanks for commenting.
7/24/23, 11:07 PM
I have to admit. Although this ending makes more sense from a plot perspective, I kind of wanted Bryce to remain a Bryce and then hear more about his adventures. Maybe an epilogue about Bruce/Bryceโ€™s life as a slut? Like, if we beg sweetly and in a very needy voice?
7/24/23, 10:14 PM
I liked a lot. I would enjoy to see more of it.
Jul 23, 2023
7/24/23, 2:32 AM
Fuck! I thank you and so does my dick. I see Marcus' corruption growing slowly. He returns to base. He knows the plan was to study them and try to control their power. Marcus confiscates both invaders and infects his boss the lead scientist. An invader in each ball will give the host the ability to control the drones already infected and remove the only threat to their existence.

7/24/23, 12:52 PM
@[TexMuscle](/user/show/10002223) That's an idea. Seems like you really like Marcus's story!

7/24/23, 9:35 PM
@[rubbrsome](/user/show/13662) You and @Absman420 have the gift to lure the reader and the characters into going after their lust filled desires but unaware of the cost. Do they loose their will, their humanity, their identity? All for bigger muscles, a huge cock, muscle titts that drip body transforming cream. It's the chance for escape from the rut we fall into. Maybe over the years authors like you are pointing our dicks in the direction you want us to go. We've been partially brain washed just waiting for the bodily rewards.
7/24/23, 5:23 PM
Just to confirm, this story wasn't meant for the NAMES contest, was it? If it was, let me know and I can fix it so that it shows up as a contest entry!

7/24/23, 9:06 PM
@[Philip K](/user/show/10022196) Since my name is already out there I will also comment here for officialness. :) I meant it as a competition entry. The little box was ticked in submission so I don't know what happened. I'd love for you to fix that, thank you.

7/24/23, 9:19 PM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) It's been fixed! Hopefully not too many people saw the name before I fixed it... ๐Ÿ˜‰ I'm also not sure what happenedโ€”when I was approving the story from the queue earlier today, I could have sworn I saw it ticked off as an entry for the competition... Well, at least it is fixed now!

7/24/23, 9:27 PM
@[Philip K](/user/show/10022196) Thank you, I appreciate you checking and fixing it so quickly and for all the work you do behind the scenes.
Anonymous
7/24/23, 9:26 PM
This story is awesome! Hope there will be more!
Anonymous
7/24/23, 8:19 PM
I Live to Serve the Virus
Anonymous
7/17/23, 2:31 AM
Really liked this as a start. Canโ€™t wait to see more of the bar, or perhaps the other bouncers, fall under the spell of those pecs.

7/24/23, 8:19 PM
@Anonymous The cast potential is limitless! ;) Latest installment went more office employee, but the other bouncers, bartenders and dancers are all still there...
rexx9476
7/21/23, 4:38 PM
This is similar to what I've been calling pecnosis. Bodybuilders with huge pecs pecnotize anyone who sees them bounce their pecs. Once pecnotized, the man instantly experiences muscle growth to pro heavyweight bodybuilder size. They also become the pecnotizer's bodybuilder slave. I've played a bit on my own with AI writing stories about pecnosis.

7/24/23, 8:17 PM
@rexx9476 Wow, that's a really cool idea - the combo of hypnosis and bodily transformation.
7/16/23, 5:25 PM
Super-cool story! Hyped for the next instalment.๐Ÿ˜

7/24/23, 8:16 PM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) Awesome - just posted next installment. Thanks for reading!
7/24/23, 8:16 PM
Love this. Thanks for writing.
7/24/23, 7:06 PM
A much more โ€œfittingโ€ role for the haughty boy ๐Ÿ˜‰
7/24/23, 7:04 PM
Each chapter successfully and arousingly builds on the last. The way Taylor subtly dominates and changes the situations around him is well thought out and executed by Todd
7/24/23, 6:53 PM
Oh wow that is hot, both chapters. He now have two boys in his collection. What would he do next? Cant wait for the next one.
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
7/24/23, 6:40 PM
So many big, rotund, lazy men! So hot! I would love being their naked slave, doing all their chores, sexually satisfying them and,. most of all, feeding them as they laid around lazily.
7/24/23, 6:40 PM
I love that Stephen will be joining them soon. I love a good old fashion love story of three guys brainwashed and falling in lust with each other.