Recent Comments

9/11/18, 11:45 PM
The romantic bit was really well put. It's nice to see Mark and Nick's relationship evolve :D
9/11/18, 11:35 PM
Wow! This is getting hot!
9/11/18, 11:26 PM
Very interesting! I like this!
ForgottenCradle
9/11/18, 5:58 PM
this was by far the hottest chapter. I loved every part of it. thrilled to see who will join them next
Anonymous
9/11/18, 4:00 PM
nice start. can't wait to see where it goes from here.
ForgottenCradle
9/11/18, 2:59 PM
niiiiiice one! Now the cops get involved
ForgottenCradle
9/11/18, 2:27 PM
This is an interesting start. I really want to know what becomes of the businessman. I like it,the unaware parts intrigue me.
9/11/18, 10:27 AM
Cheers, ForgottenCradle, I actually had a lot of fun with this concept, it was one of the faster stories from concept to completion too. Hypnothrill, thank you! I did consider having a couple of extra do-overs in there, slowing down the change, but I was worried it would get repetitive. And Heru Kane, well Devon definitely deserved a birthday present for all his hard work. I'd actually like playing around with this concept in some more stories. I think next time I'd have a few more background events going on.
9/11/18, 9:16 AM
Thanks for commenting! I was wondering if people were going to like this one quite so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Heru Kane, well I'm not sure what provoked the change in the first place, honestly I was thinking it was something completely inane, like cutting him off while walking or something. There were a few iterations of this idea actually, dealing with a pickpocket, getting turned away from a bar by a bouncer, but in the end I just went with something unknown because the story wound up being so far after the fact.
Anonymous
9/11/18, 8:16 AM
Amazing. First cock tf that I really enjoyed. We definitely need more stories like that one.
Anonymous
9/11/18, 6:57 AM
i want the family matters ...
Anonymous
9/11/18, 4:51 AM
keep going with this story!
9/11/18, 3:00 AM
Thanks everyone! Glad you liked the slutty outfits; it wasn't part of the original outline but decided to add it as I was writing. Glad it paid off. @TheD; I have at least 2 more chapters lined up but it may stretch to 3 if I'm too long winded.
9/11/18, 2:49 AM
Thank you all for the nice feedback... I definitely have a lot of room to grow, and you'll be seeing more from Manic Pixie Dream Twink very soon ;) In the meantime, feel free to hit me up: porter.lyle.hart@gmail.com
9/11/18, 1:02 AM
Actually let me restate - a supremely hot sexy story that called upon most of my interests. (And the one it didn't I could easily add as part of the sexual play.) It's good as a stand alone but infinitely expandable in mind. So thumbs up.
Sep 10, 2018
M
9/10/18, 9:05 PM
There is a part 2 coming right Kane? Right???????
9/10/18, 8:16 PM
A sexy hot story.
9/10/18, 7:59 PM
I like the gayer and gayer world. and the fact that our focus guy was playing with the butt at the end was hot!
9/10/18, 1:57 PM
You write the best reality change stories, TickledPink! Part of the fun with this one was just anticipating how things would escalate with each do-over of Devon's day.
ForgottenCradle
9/10/18, 1:17 PM
interesting concept. Liked it a lot
Sep 10, 2018
Alex
9/10/18, 11:47 AM
I'm so craving for one of those cupcakes right now.
Sep 8, 2018
ForgottenCradle
9/10/18, 10:50 AM
Your #unaware stories are some of the best I've read. This one,too
simonsez1091@gmail.com
9/10/18, 7:58 AM
As a pup in Seattle the small details in here are great. good story!
Anonymous
9/10/18, 3:55 AM
Incredible story! Loved it.
LeadPb
9/10/18, 12:34 AM
Man, I've just read everything, all your work are spectacular. There's just the right balance, it's perfect, right here.
Anonymous
9/9/18, 8:45 PM
Love it. So well written, so hot.
Anonymous
9/9/18, 7:03 PM
Thanks, Hypnothrill! I'm a big fan of your work, and this story is no exception. Looking forward to its continuation.
Anonymous
9/9/18, 6:06 PM
This story is fantastic. Your skill as a writer really shows in this story. Please keep this going.
Anonymous
9/9/18, 5:06 PM
What’s going to happen to Archie
Anonymous
9/9/18, 4:44 PM
Can't wait to see what he does to Jake