Recent Comments

david
10/19/18, 5:46 AM
Great story! Very hot!!! i would love to experience that level of hypnotic trance, and that level of control by my Master.
Anonymous
10/19/18, 5:02 AM
"I shook my head. That was ridiculous. I went to college for less than a year before I dropped out. There was too much ass to fuck with my giant cock. There was no point in learning when you were this young and pretty." Oh FUCK yes. A masterpiece!
david
10/19/18, 4:56 AM
OMG that was so *hot*!! i was so into Simon's head that i felt his submissive stupor enhanced by the alcohol. i almost fainted myself when Hank suggested licking his pec, after Simon had unwittingly cuddled into Hank's side. Then, again without thinking he started to lick Hank's sweaty muscles and suck in his pheromones, sinking even deeper into a submissive haze. i have to say i think that tag #straight to gay is incorrectly applied to this story. Simon may have thought he was straight, but there's just no way. He just needed Hank to open his mind. i was disappointed that i wasn't actually in that room with Hank instead of Simon. After that, i was also disappointed that you haven't written more stories. i have to admit i gave the story a mid range for "mind control", but only because it was more a case of mindless lack of control on Simon's part. Happily, Hank didn't back down from the opportunity to dominate, and Simon's loss of control was totally *hot*. Thanks so much for this one! Looking forward to more.
10/19/18, 1:42 AM
Absolutely loved this one! Very hot.
ed2you2@gmail.com
10/19/18, 1:26 AM
Rushing to the next chapter. Liking the feel
Anonymous
10/18/18, 10:34 PM
Fucking excellent. Love this kind of transformation
Cubwriter30
10/18/18, 9:42 PM
This is my favorite story on here. SO Good!
Mutabear
10/18/18, 9:34 PM
that that was well written and very hot. Hopefully swallowing that much jock cream gives him a nice little Potbelly.
Anonymous
10/18/18, 6:57 PM
I like the fagbaby idea. Diapers, pacifiers, and baby talk.
Rodready
10/18/18, 6:41 PM
Derek's on a roll.
LongtimeFan
10/18/18, 6:07 PM
INCREDIBLE! So glad you're back on a creative kick, Derek. This is an amazing story--love the images you paint of gorgeous hunks making out/fooling around, and Cole's slow transformation into a mindless musclehead. Thanks for the great time! ;D
10/18/18, 4:08 PM
Awesome story. Well done
Anonymous
10/18/18, 3:39 PM
A fantastic read! My only disappointment is that clicking on your name didn't show me more stories!
10/18/18, 2:39 PM
This definitely just became my new favorite from you. I love the setup and slow build to the party, but even more the twist with how he screwed himself with his own app. Awesome story, with some great writing.
Oct 18, 2018
ForgottenCradle
10/18/18, 2:09 PM
mhhhhhh...furry authors know how to write the best stories. great piece,I hoped it would be longer
10/18/18, 1:51 PM
This is really good! I haven't read the original, but I'm hoping for more of this one! I myself have old old stories that I haven't written more of because I just don't have any time no more; I think the original writer would love to hear you're taking up the mantle!
KhrizzzToePhur
10/18/18, 1:32 PM
I love this series - gets me going more than most... Just wanted to instigate an idea - If this were an erotic comic - It'd be my favorite =) More Power to ya 🔌 🔋
FreakFraserFletcher79
10/18/18, 12:43 PM
I love that Cole's app turned against him. Great story very hot.
Anonymous
10/18/18, 12:30 PM
Excellent work Thanks
FreakyFraserFletcher79
10/18/18, 12:24 PM
I can't wait for more of FAGPET & FAGCHIMPS adventures.
ForgottenCradle
10/18/18, 11:58 AM
wow,that didn't work out for Cole the way he intended,but he definately got what he wanted. well-written,really hot to read
Anonymous
10/18/18, 11:44 AM
so hot!!
Anonymous
10/18/18, 10:30 AM
Wonderful. :-)
Stinkykev
10/18/18, 8:01 AM
Fucking great story - needs another episode or two
David
10/18/18, 5:48 AM
Very sexy Idea. I've read this several times and it always gives me wanking fodder for several days after. Love it.
Anonymous
10/18/18, 5:40 AM
Any chance of continuing this? It's one of my favorites!
Jun 11, 2017
10/18/18, 5:17 AM
makes your online job applications a tad more interesting... hahahaha good one
Mac
10/18/18, 3:27 AM
Well hot had me hard and stroking ti it
Anonymous
10/18/18, 3:03 AM
Hopefully one of the fags will be a fagbaby wearing only diapers and seeing cock as a bottle.
UchihaDEMS
10/18/18, 2:15 AM
Since its a follow up of the last chapter that was already done, I have nothing else to add to what I said in the part 2 so, keep it up~ Well, maybe something more, like some foot fetish or more grownup men, authorities converted to slaved rather than young men, buts that just me. So don't mind me.