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Jan 30, 2019
LanceFan2001 aka dumbmusclehypnoboi
1/31/19, 3:03 PM
i thought this was an AWESOME story! I think its inferred that its a gay to straight transformation and, I'd like to also point out that this website does not discriminate over whether something ends up being queer or herero From the 'about the website' page' "This is one of the few places on the web where you can come to read stories of men cursed, hypnotized, converted from straight to gay, converted from gay to straight, shrunk, grown, muscled up, muscled down, humiliated, and/or ensorcelled. Most stories feature some form or other of mind control, and sex" besides that orrinoticia has gifted us with many wonderful works! Thank you so much for sharing your writing talents with us! If I had money I'd definately become a patreon but alas, my cash flow sucks I love the concept of the dials, mainly because 'suggestion/ chronivac-style' stories have always bren my favorite is this open universe? i would live to take my crack at a tf that involved my type of guy! lol
Bibimbap
1/31/19, 2:56 PM
The story is very catchy, I'll be waiting fir the next part!!!
Anonymous
1/31/19, 2:49 PM
Another incredible story!! Thanks.
Anonymous
1/31/19, 2:48 PM
This was hot!
skumbum
1/31/19, 1:58 PM
Wow! Incredible writing, and hot!
Jan 30, 2019
1/31/19, 8:10 AM
The dials idea is good, but it's a heterosexual story and with transformations, it helps to know what the character was like before as well as after.
1/31/19, 6:48 AM
I don't think I have the words to accurately describe how hot I find this story. Thank you so much for sharing it with us!
1/31/19, 5:04 AM
This is such a great progression! Loving this story!
1/31/19, 4:47 AM
Very nice. I liked the two transformations, and the first getting the witness the second and be turned on by it. Loved the Italian accent, it made the character very real. Looking forward to reading on.
Cigarboy Cody
1/31/19, 3:54 AM
HOT!! HOT!! HOT!! Just like the cum blasting down the Superwhore's throat
Jan 30, 2019
Anonymous
1/31/19, 3:49 AM
Very hot story! Loved the reinforcement of "I've always had a beard".
Anonymous
1/31/19, 3:22 AM
Another winner :)
Apr 22, 2010
Hautehawt
1/31/19, 1:57 AM
One of the earliest gay erotica story I've read and still one of the best.
Jan 30, 2019
Anonymous
1/31/19, 12:21 AM
It'd work better on this site if the references to women were removed.
Jan 30, 2019
Anonymous
1/31/19, 12:16 AM
Russian transformation?! Different idea! I liked the muscle growth part best.
Bibimbap
1/31/19, 12:06 AM
Oh, fuck! you're such a good writer, I agree with the previous comment, it was fantastic! I love this story so much. Superheroes calling themselves "fucking airheads" and "super whores", saying that think is hard for them and thinking that they should look stupids is a big turn on for me. The next 16 days will be a torture waiting!
1/30/19, 10:36 PM
Oh this was worth the wait. I can't wait to see whet hot and twisted things will come next!
Bibimbap
1/30/19, 9:30 PM
Hi again! any news for the update???
Anonymous
1/30/19, 8:49 PM
NExt past please
chazte
1/30/19, 8:45 PM
Getting a new story from MCBrain always feels like Christmas morning and this was as hot and twisted as ever! I loved the all-bottom sex scene, it's not the kind of thing I would have thought I'd find hot but it was awesome! I always love the inclusion of the specific names of all the boys' slutwear, it's so excellent being able go visualize exactly how hot and slutty they all are. I wish this would catch on with more authors. I'm so excited to know that we are going to get at least one more chapter of this at some point, this is one of my favorite series ever.
1/30/19, 7:43 PM
An incredible scene! I know how this feels! Great idea!
Anonymous
1/30/19, 7:17 PM
Another masterpiece from that deviant swine of a writer. Roll on springtime hogs.
1/30/19, 2:25 PM
i really enjoyed reading this chapter, it was good to see an update on Dave and i like the way that Dave is acting....part of me would like to see John getting drawn in...sort of a back fire
Anonymous
1/30/19, 9:56 AM
Great new part - thanks for writing and posting it. I must admit that I enjoyed the first two more - but that's just personal taste I think and it's still a great sequel. How about if there was another new story line around Steve? Like another person was already manipulating him into changing like he was in this part and made him start to work as security guard. Implying that either the barber or another third person/or institution/... behind it. And then we could see how the transformation continues with John playing around with him. Perhaps something goes wrong? Can it be saved? :)
Flattop Bear
1/30/19, 9:46 AM
This story and the first story is such a turn on for me. I like storyline very much and hope to read more.
Flattop Bear
1/30/19, 9:46 AM
This story and the first story is such a turn on for me. I like storyline very much and hope to read more.
Jan 13, 2019
Anonymous
1/30/19, 9:44 AM
great story Boss
Anonymous
1/30/19, 7:27 AM
the incest is best
UchihaDEMS
1/30/19, 6:22 AM
Know that if the tables were turned, I would show Wolf no mercy~
Martin
1/30/19, 6:04 AM
Willie, if you delete a stories's series, it will always fall back to it's title. So two stories with the same title will always end up as a series. Only way to resolve this is to use different titles or a manual series name.