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8/17/19, 10:39 AM
> Guernsey is putting in the work – to achieve the reward! > What if Guernsey realized it was just the groundwork being laid for induction and mind-control? (Like clever readers do!) >This is my Absman favorite story. I never get tired of reading it. > Thank you! I have a lot of love for this story, too -- though it's not my favorite, I really feel like I got a lot of stuff right, including taking a very weird conceit and making something workable out of it.
Martin
8/17/19, 8:05 AM
I've just read all of the stories you've just submitted to approve them, and ... WHAT A RIDE!!!!! Really amazing. They're so special and kinky in their own regard. I've never read anything close to that. Not really mind control but the transformation and originality is more than mind blowing!
Martin
8/17/19, 7:24 AM
What a fun story! You have such a kinky weird fantasy and you describe it so vividly, it's really amazing. 5 for writing and idea!
8/17/19, 7:22 AM
Great start, we need more!
Aug 17, 2019
Martin
8/17/19, 6:49 AM
Very unique and kinky... Unfortunately, there's no mind control, but the story is still very hot in itself!
EJG
8/17/19, 6:34 AM
Superheroes and cock and muscle growth.. Hot.. PLEASE CONTINUE..?
Aug 1, 2019
Anonymous
8/17/19, 6:26 AM
Please continue this story! I want to see the new changes.
8/17/19, 3:06 AM
I'm glad this got listed in the selected archives and I found it. Hot story. Looking forward to moving on to the next chapters
Mdlftr
8/17/19, 2:50 AM
Guernsey is putting in the work -- to achieve the reward! Great writing - the details, the sense of "reality" - fantastic!
M
8/16/19, 11:44 PM
This is my Absman favorite story. I never get tired of reading it. So erotic and at the same time, sexual.
abrobdl@gmail.com
8/16/19, 9:59 PM
I need one of those crystals as well.
8/16/19, 8:50 PM
oh, more is coming ;-)
8/16/19, 8:19 PM
What a very interesting and fun and sexy reveal. I love this saga and would always welcome more whenever you feel like writing it.
Anonymous
8/16/19, 7:58 PM
This ended just as it started to get good. I enjoyed but feels incomple ;)
Dario Brando
8/16/19, 7:54 PM
What the fuck where's my son
Anonymous
8/16/19, 5:36 PM
Okay now that you’ve described someone as looking like TOM HOLLAND, he needs a bigger and sexier role in the story.
8/16/19, 4:31 PM
At the guy who was worried about sounding douchey: Editorial? Who is that? Do you imagine there’s an army of Editors working behind the scenes on this site? Or that the site moderators want to be the ones to determine what the minimum quality bar is, and deal with all of the flack that goes with that? “You censored my story!” “How many other stories have you censored?” Are you volunteering to act as the quality reviewer? Are you volunteering to help new authors by editing their stories? If you are, great, and all power to you. This author has hidden their email, but you could probably contact them to assist them indirectly via Martin. If you aren’t offering to do any of that, please shut up. The author might be ESL and need help. They might be starting out and have never posted anything online. They might have never taken a writing course of any kind. Be kind, and instead of shitting all over everything, offer constructive, useful, actionable criticism. Links to articles on story structure and grammar would’ve been useful, telling them to make the story longer would have been useful, pointing them at the forums or the Discord group to get feedback and editing assistance would have all been useful and helpful.
Senpai
8/16/19, 2:08 PM
Not bad. Also wolverine and sabertooth is the perfect target to test out his man powers. Hehehe... Also try not mixing two point of views since it will cause a bit of a confusion and try mixing it to one point of view but mixing the thoughts without complicating the writing and story. A suggestion for future targets. Why not have him wear the symbiote suit to amplify his pheromones even further just like purple man did and combine it with the serum while wearing the symbiote will have any targets infatuated are now permanent once they have his semen to the targets body. a whaff from them will be enough to make their knees weak. Captain America is also a good target. hehehe
Drehi
8/16/19, 1:20 PM
cant wait to see ShootUp!
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
8/16/19, 11:17 AM
I need one of those crystals please, willing to pay triple that.
Anonymous
8/16/19, 9:38 AM
good reads ! so hot !! is there any other stories that use similiar plot like this? Good boy turns evil/bad??
8/16/19, 9:18 AM
Another great chapter, can't wait for the next one :D For other candidates for the pack, I think that characters like Beast, Colossus, Wonder Man, Hercules or Drax the Destroyer could fit really well :)
david
8/16/19, 6:08 AM
Wow! That was so hot! And it felt absolutely authentic. The story progressed pretty much like a real extended induction. i have quite a lot of experience as a hypnosis subject. i find that written inductions are generally less efficient than audio, due i think to the mental focus required to read and the way that focus disturbs any growing trance. Nevertheless this story flowed well and the plot felt like it created enough interest to encourage continued focus and continued reading, and at the same time camouflaged the inductive effect of the words for the reader. Not quite sure if my reaction proves this perspective, since i didn't manage to get as far as the command to cum before i actually came. i only made it to the line, “And since I control your cock, and your cock is the center of your pleasure, and obedience is pleasure, you obey me right?”. Needless to say i would love to read more of this story, and more of your writing generally. So many of the stories on this site leave me feeling like they omitted a very important part of the story -- how the mind control is achieved. You however were so very detailed and open in your representation of the method of induction used by Mark on Connor. i think i found just how effective his method was by falling for it myself. BRAVO! Thanks so much for this great story. ~david
Anonymous
8/16/19, 3:42 AM
Can't wait. Loved this story! Great!!!
Anonymous
8/16/19, 3:41 AM
Great story!! Loved it!!!
Anonymous
8/16/19, 3:41 AM
Getting better. Keep it coming!!!
Stephen
8/16/19, 3:31 AM
That is a great story. The intro really set it up beautifully. You have an extrodinary talent. Three cheers. ;-)
Anonymous
8/16/19, 2:48 AM
When is part 4 dropping?
Anonymous
8/16/19, 2:33 AM
I hope this story continues, so well written and hot!
8/16/19, 1:12 AM
My energy levels have been very low these last few months, but there's more to come when I can. I can't make promises as to when, as my health is not always cooperative.