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10/29/23, 11:46 PM
Would love a follow up on this
10/29/23, 10:53 PM
Yes yes yes. Ryan, Ari and Dad. I mean we could add Andrew, but i feel like the same with Ari, he could go. But yeah looking forward for the orgy.
10/29/23, 10:09 PM
Great continuation! I'm wondering if Chad will use his demonic powers on the athletes that he was eyeing before...
10/29/23, 10:00 PM
Living for this! Ryan is so sweet and I cant wait for him to join the action. I think hes my new fave!
10/29/23, 9:46 PM
This is so hot and your ref pics are fine af I’m looking forward to more and hopefully some tasty mental corruption into a sweaty hung dumb jock
10/29/23, 7:56 AM
Dumb jock vampire :smiling_face_with_three_hearts: I love the campfire vibe this series has.

10/29/23, 9:40 PM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) I thought you would love it. I really liked the idea of a vampire being a dumb bro rather than a suave aristocrat. :hand_over_mouth: Yeah, I am surprised there aren't many stories on either this contest or the previous ones who went for an anthology aspect. You tell me horror, and stuff like *Goosebumps*, *Are you afraid of the dark?* or *Tales from the Crypt* are definitively up there, but it's mostly halloween parties and trick-or-treating. :confused: Sure, those are peak Halloween, but there isn't a lot of other stuff.
10/29/23, 8:48 PM
The transformation where realy nice...
Enchanting-Sorcerer-Boy
10/29/23, 7:56 PM
This is great! Can’t wait to read more
10/29/23, 1:32 PM
This is a really great story. If I could make a suggestion, if you make a sequel, explain why the dad is distant? Is he normally attracted to his son? Did he set this all up? I would love to read more about Ben and his exploits with his dad.

10/29/23, 7:19 PM
@[Gay_Genes](/user/show/298626) Thanks! I admit I didn't expand on some details since this was conceptualized as a one-shot story. But there are certainly enough loose ends that I might add to this in the future!
Ben
10/29/23, 6:27 PM
Great story!! I love pikmin too!!
Ab3
10/29/23, 5:57 PM
Waiting for father, bf and brother orgy in the woods.. please make it possible soon
10/29/23, 5:14 PM
A lot of fun and very hot. Great job!

10/29/23, 5:50 PM
@[Botbot](/user/show/10010276) Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
10/29/23, 4:32 AM
Outstanding story. I have to admit, I settled in for a fun read and wasn't expecting to end up being so incredibly hot given the tongue-in-cheek meta nature of it. But, scorching it ended up being. Well done. Great little twists on tropes and a traditional potential continuation option at the end. Fantastic work.

10/29/23, 5:49 PM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) Oh, thank you for this comment! I'll admit one of my goals with this story was "I want readers to laugh hard *and* orgasm hard!" So hearing that it worked so well for you on this level (and even surprised you in the process 😁) is really great to hear. Thank you!
10/29/23, 5:45 PM
So in love with this story. Can’t wait to see it get out of hand 🥵
10/28/23, 10:39 PM
You simply MUST continue, October, November, contest or no. I could not care less. Your work is incredible and fun and sexy and charming and funny and SEXY and brainmelty and of course **SEXY**.

10/29/23, 5:18 PM
@[brium](/user/show/10011305) Hahaha thank you!! I'm really glad you enjoyed it! And who knows, maybe it will continue... 😉 🎃 👻 No promises, though!
Anonymous
10/29/23, 5:04 PM
Part 9???
10/28/23, 8:15 PM
That was epic. Clever, compelling, hot, and FUNNY!

10/29/23, 4:59 PM
@[Max Ryon](/user/show/19159) Thank you!! I'm really glad you liked it!
10/28/23, 7:11 PM
AHOY! That was excellent. So many clever lines. Love a good meta story.

10/29/23, 4:52 PM
@[Derek Williams](/user/show/175661) Thank you! As someone who really enjoys your meta stories, this is high praise. 😄
10/28/23, 2:22 PM
It’s the Scream of gay hypnosis erotica. 😂

10/29/23, 4:42 PM
@[mattersonline](/user/show/13605) 😱😱😱 (😁)
10/28/23, 5:21 AM
Fantastic and funny meta-story. So sad for Brett that his genre savviness didn't extend to realising that the genie always gets what they're going for, but at least he and Peter get to enjoy themselves now as kinked-up gay raver bunnies, so a happy ending. Excellent.

10/29/23, 4:35 PM
@[TickledPink](/user/show/151577) Thank you! And yes haha, Brett *tried*... unfortunately, the ghost tried harder. 😌
10/28/23, 5:06 AM
This was so fun and entertaining. Loved it

10/29/23, 4:28 PM
@[Butterpecan](/user/show/1527212) Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
10/28/23, 4:30 AM
You always write the funniest porn. I love your work!

10/29/23, 4:23 PM
@[Tempwhorary](/user/show/10034573) Thank you! 😁 I'm glad you liked this one too!
10/28/23, 4:26 AM
I literally laughed out loud multiple times. This was excellent. And HOT

10/29/23, 4:10 PM
@[SwimJock](/user/show/39947) I aspired to make people laugh out loud (and cum out loud) with this story so I'm very happy to hear that! 😉
10/28/23, 2:15 AM
Very fun, very erotic story. Really a league above.

10/29/23, 4:06 PM
@[felix.nox](/user/show/2338654) Thank you!! I'm really glad you enjoyed this one!
10/28/23, 1:33 AM
HOLY SHIT. You've done it again. Honestly, your contest stories are always an absolute treat.

10/29/23, 4:05 PM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Aw! I am flattered!! I'm glad you enjoyed this one too. 😊
Nov 12, 2017
10/29/23, 2:35 PM
The mist is really, really hot! And wet dreams -- and under-appreciated experience, and you did great work with it!
10/29/23, 12:20 PM
Love it, especially the third one
John
10/29/23, 11:04 AM
Hottest story I've read on this site. A bit bummed Ben didn't get turned into a French maid. But I'll read all your future stories in the hope that one day somebody does
10/29/23, 9:41 AM
I’m not done reading yet!! But I need this as an audio book, I would spend my last on this!!
10/29/23, 4:18 AM
I really hope this isn’t the end.