Recent Comments

1/27/20, 11:20 PM
i love it! very excited to see where you take this, keep it up buddy!!
Anonymous
1/27/20, 10:06 PM
fuck i keep re reading this I'd love a sequel
Anonymous
1/27/20, 9:20 PM
MORE MORE MORE!!!! Please continue writing stories like this! I love when the jock loses everything he holds dear, would love to see what happened to Jakey happen to a straight stud who gets turned into a faggy bottom! 10 star by far and one of the best stories ive read in a long time!!!! Thank you for this gem!
1/27/20, 8:32 PM
Nice to see Dave get his powers and then be thrown into the superhero crucible; will he be up to the challenge of being a superhero? You've got me waiting for part 3 and 4.
1/27/20, 5:57 PM
loved this story!!!
Anonymous
1/27/20, 5:25 PM
Always entertaining!!!
Anonymous
1/27/20, 4:35 PM
continue please
KAKAMERON
1/27/20, 4:29 PM
fuck i dont ever want this series to end. consistently impressive and hot! i love their dynamic
Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
1/27/20, 3:55 PM
Previous commenter (site not showing your name?)... the story indicates that Philip's memories of college aren't real / that his mind has been tampered with The author could, perhaps, have been been more obvious with this … but for me it works @RelaxDreamFollow … well done hope to read more
Anonymous
1/27/20, 3:41 PM
omg charli xcx girl you didnt have to come for me like that
Anonymous
1/27/20, 2:44 PM
Very hot, like the added mind control, and domination. I'm eager to read what else Butch is willing to do to finally cum. Maybe it's time he learn his place?
Anonymous
1/27/20, 2:39 PM
Nice, now if they can both jump to two buddies or brothers that would be hot! Please write more.
Anonymous
1/27/20, 2:39 PM
Great to have you back, liking the sequel so far.
Anonymous
1/27/20, 12:20 PM
I appreciate imagining him in his sweaty, tight football uniform. Maybe next time a locker room with those beefcakes not wearing as much please?
Anonymous
1/27/20, 12:18 PM
Fantasy for me too! Hope the protagonist will enjoy a spurt muscle growth in spandex suit :)
Anonymous
1/27/20, 9:49 AM
More punishments please!
ForgottenCradle
1/27/20, 9:48 AM
it's good to see that others thought about the sheriff being controlled. thought about it since the first time he was mentioned and...I mean, it's still not off the table,right? this was just his introductary chapter
Anonymous
1/27/20, 8:42 AM
JAWhite Milker ia fucking great, anything he writes. He understands the connections among tatts, nicotine, hair, muscles and a badass attitude. Plus, he can write. Holy shit, Man can he write! He just doesn't write enough. i've been following him for yesrs. i love every one, but there just ain't enough be of them. MORE! MORE OFTEN! I'd pay good money for his shit. Why doesn't he publish on Kindle or Nook!
malskin
1/27/20, 7:37 AM
This story has got better and better and now with a more intense mind control even more so - really enjoyed this last chapter look forward seeing Butch being under more control
Anonymous
1/27/20, 2:41 AM
This site does not have enough foot kink stories. I'm glad that your stories are around for us foot fetishists. Maybe next time, you can write a story about guys who are flexible enough to masturbate themselves with their own feet. I've went out with guys who were able to do that, amd let me tell you, its really hot.
Plague
1/27/20, 2:33 AM
I have to say it's quite fascinating, watching a writer hone their craft and expand their abilities. You're getting better at character interaction and you're not leaning on the crutch of mind control as much. You are also better at making subtle differences like how Bill was more pessimistic than Steve.
Cigarjock18
1/27/20, 2:15 AM
Great chapter. What happened to the fourth member of the training group?
Sunflower
1/27/20, 1:13 AM
I agree with the previous comment. I was hoping the meds would make the Sheriff an obedient zombie. Missed opportunity.. I did enjoy seeing the mind control being used more frequently in this chapter tho. Keep up the good work!
Anonymous
1/26/20, 10:44 PM
Super Hot!! can not wait until i get a gay job like this.
Anonymous
1/26/20, 10:38 PM
Wow!
blankbot
1/26/20, 10:01 PM
This is one of the hottest, best-written stories that I've ever read on this site. MORE, PLEASE!
Singlet Slave
1/26/20, 9:20 PM
Please write more stories you are a great writer!
Red Eye
1/26/20, 9:13 PM
I could see where this actually works
1/26/20, 7:38 PM
I agree;I thik tha I speak for us all when I say that we're waiting for Bro with baited breath...
1/26/20, 7:37 PM
I agree;I thik tha I speak for us all when I say that we're waiting for Bro with baited breath...